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| Mavrix | Oct 25 2007, 08:55 PM Post #1 |
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Insecure Waltz in the Sky I simply feel no effect, No prophecy of success Wasted and controlled I set my mind to confess My helpless house has been brought near My soul has been lured away Now my friends and family I do fear And lies have brought me astray How simple is this confession? How can you ever understand? Would I have to belittle my relation? Or just hope I can go from sky to land. ___________________________________________ Another one, ties into some emotions of mine I've been having recently. Not much to say, just getting back into writing more regularly. Comments? |
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| Red Love | Oct 25 2007, 09:28 PM Post #2 |
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The fairest of them all
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It sounded very heartfelt and meaningful. It makes you feel the poem rather than hear the words :up: |
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| ChipChamp | Oct 25 2007, 09:31 PM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Really really good!
:D 8/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Oct 30 2007, 04:42 PM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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that was good. good structure too |
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