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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 6 2007, 07:32 PM (258 Views) | |
| God of The Congo | Nov 6 2007, 07:32 PM Post #1 |
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She or It? She has, little purple streaks, on her pettles, which surround her face, a body as a stem, she is a flower, in a glass of water, her pettles white, with her little purple streaks,. It's pettles are soft, easy to tear, To rip, destroy, I will. NO! Don't tear her apart! I will protect her, you will not harm, her. Then you will be destroyed as well, just as it will be destroyed, I will take it and you, you and it, Both will parish. No, my old friend, it is you, you that will parish, for if you take me and her, you will be more destroyed than, us, far more destroyed,. Is he right? would it and him destroy me, if I destroyed them? No, you would destroy yourself, the choice is your's, love, or hate, protection, or destruction, so what do you say? Ok, just to clarify, I am really writing about a flower, but it is a metaphore for other things, You can apply the poem to many situation. The use of She and It is symbolically imprtant. |
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| ChipChamp | Nov 6 2007, 07:33 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Interesting format!
:) I liked it!
:D 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 6 2007, 07:43 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks. I had a lot of fun with this poem too. |
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| *Inkheart | Nov 6 2007, 07:47 PM Post #4 |
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i love the darker aspects and the way they contrast with the almost chivilrous kind side. my favourite of your works. 9/10 |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 6 2007, 07:55 PM Post #5 |
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Thank you. I promise I don't have a split personality. *twitch* Yes I do! Shut up! |
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| *Inkheart | Nov 6 2007, 07:57 PM Post #6 |
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don't worry. if you let your other side take control, you gain a new perspective on life. MUAHAHAHA! HAHAHAHAHA! |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 6 2007, 08:01 PM Post #7 |
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But I don't have another side..................do I? |
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| ** Death's servant | Nov 6 2007, 08:30 PM Post #8 |
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I agree wholeheartedly with inky. (on both of his comments). Also I like the purple streaked petals reference. |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 8 2007, 04:24 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback. |
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| ** Death's servant | Nov 8 2007, 09:28 PM Post #10 |
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any time |
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| the pyro | Nov 10 2007, 10:08 PM Post #11 |
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pretty........ |
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| the pyro | Nov 10 2007, 10:11 PM Post #12 |
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No, itz "I'm not skitzafrenic *looks of into* lalaland SHUT UP CHARLIE!!!!" |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 15 2007, 04:20 PM Post #13 |
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*laughs* My brother says that a lot. |
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| ** Death's servant | Nov 15 2007, 05:10 PM Post #14 |
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do I? |
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