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She Or It; protection/destruction
Topic Started: Nov 6 2007, 07:32 PM (258 Views)
God of The Congo
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She or It?

She
has,
little purple streaks,
on her pettles,
which surround her face,
a body as a stem,
she is a flower,
in a glass of water,
her pettles white,
with her little purple streaks,.

It's pettles are soft,
easy to tear,
To rip,
destroy,
I will.

NO!
Don't tear her apart!
I will protect her,
you will not harm,
her.

Then you will be destroyed as well,
just as it will be destroyed,
I will take it and you,
you and it,
Both will parish.

No,
my old friend,
it is you,
you that will parish,
for if you take me and her,
you will be more destroyed than,
us,
far more destroyed,.

Is he right?
would it and him destroy me,
if I destroyed them?

No,
you would destroy yourself,
the choice is your's,
love,
or hate,
protection,
or destruction,
so what do you say?

Ok, just to clarify,
I am really writing about a flower,
but it is a metaphore for other things,
You can apply the poem to many situation.
The use of She and It is symbolically imprtant.
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Interesting format! :) I liked it! :D

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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Thanks. I had a lot of fun with this poem too.
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i love the darker aspects and the way they contrast with the almost chivilrous kind side.

my favourite of your works.

9/10
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Thank you. I promise I don't have a split personality. *twitch* Yes I do! Shut up!
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don't worry. if you let your other side take control, you gain a new perspective on life.

MUAHAHAHA!

HAHAHAHAHA!
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But I don't have another side..................do I?
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I agree wholeheartedly with inky. (on both of his comments).

Also I like the purple streaked petals reference.
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Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback.
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any time
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pretty........
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Nov 6 2007, 07:55 PM
Thank you. I promise I don't have a split personality. *twitch* Yes I do! Shut up!

No, itz
"I'm not skitzafrenic *looks of into* lalaland SHUT UP CHARLIE!!!!"
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*laughs* My brother says that a lot.
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do I?
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