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Lock Of Luck Of Dazzling Clarity
Topic Started: Nov 24 2007, 08:28 PM (157 Views)
labeaugray
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And when you feel as though,
your about to come,
remember to pull away,
because spreading seed into a demon,
is a sin in itself.

You will become a trophy,
it is inevitable,
a shiny peice of victory,
upon her unsturdy shelf.

All they ever knew,
was to let themselves be ripped apart,
rinsed,
dryed,
and set upon the conveyer to repeat the action.

But you'de love to be used,
and portrayed as the damsel,
so you carefully,
moniter your planned,
reaction.

And keeping secrets,
im afraid is the same as keeping quiet,
and when she is silent,
she is lying to your face.

Bring up the fact that she bewitches,
and dazles,
and destoys,
you will in fact,
be replaced.

And when she kicks you out her door,
into the sopping street,
hold that bruised head high,
take a chance,
because you'll never get another.

This clarity will make you shudder.
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ChipChamp
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Very good, I liked it! XD

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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** Death's servant
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pretty good.
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God of The Congo
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I liked it. It was easy, natural.
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