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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 25 2007, 11:25 PM (383 Views) | |
| *Inkheart | Nov 25 2007, 11:25 PM Post #1 |
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I never thought I could be so alone Trapped in a hole that I dug on my own I never knew I could reach a dead end This labyrinth’s walls are starting to bend But I knew I could become what I am today It haunted me so hard at night I knew the blood price I would have to pay My hearing, my speaking, my thinking, my sight But I never knew I could have someone to trust And through all the daggers and knives that are thrust I now know where my loyalties end They’ll always belong to my loyal friends I’ll always protect you I’ll always respect you And whatever comes around the dark bends I’ll fight for your life from beginning to end Dedications: Labeaugray XKilluhKi$$X Linden Branch Child of the Night Thebalanceiswithin Death's Servant And all other people I need to treat better, on the DPS and in my life. I suppose I should apologize, and though you cannot tell it, I do so with sincerity summoned from the deepest pools of sorrow and humility that collect at the bottom of my spirit, body, mind, and heart, and I can only hope that the damage my inappropriate explosions of uncontroled rage has caused can be mended through the art of word. |
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| Anonymous | Nov 26 2007, 09:41 AM Post #2 |
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I'm not on there!!! WTF MATE! |
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| ** Death's servant | Nov 26 2007, 03:34 PM Post #3 |
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That was verry well written. |
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| +Linden | Nov 26 2007, 04:12 PM Post #4 |
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awesomesauce
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Very sweet and an excellent form of an apology too. But I have to say, just in case I forget and there's another big argument, you really do have a talent; words come from you like ink from a really expensive fountain pen... the kind that bleed all over your paper if you let it sit too long.
:P But I don't see why you need to apologize to me. I'm the devil's advocate, I had it coming. XD |
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| *Inkheart | Nov 26 2007, 04:21 PM Post #5 |
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Well, whenever we have an arguement about something, I always seem to lose control at you, so yeah. |
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| ChipChamp | Nov 26 2007, 04:23 PM Post #6 |
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Have fun!
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Very well written!
:D 8/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| +Linden | Nov 26 2007, 04:35 PM Post #7 |
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awesomesauce
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But I haven't had a poem dedicated to me like xXSexxY Punk'DXx. :dead: (That creature was a piece of art. :wacko:) So, I can only assume I haven't transgressed that far. eek. Perhaps it's my fault too. :sigh: I've been told I have a tendency to jump into things that don't deal with me at all. I'll try better next time. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Nov 26 2007, 06:27 PM Post #8 |
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This poem was great; it really shows maturity when people have the courage to apologize. And I apologize also for the things that may have offended you and the other members. |
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| God of The Congo | Nov 28 2007, 05:17 PM Post #9 |
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Friend, you have no reason to apolagize to me. But that was a very good piece. I agree with balence, it shows a great mesure of maturity. I am sorry to you, for all that I may have done. Stay well. |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 5 2007, 03:38 PM Post #10 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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that is beautiful |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 8 2007, 05:05 PM Post #11 |
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reminds me of how you feel after something realy sad happens. You always feel like it's your fault and want to apoligise wether it is or is not your fault but can never find the words. |
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