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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 8 2007, 10:36 PM (200 Views) | |
| ***eboy192 | Dec 8 2007, 10:36 PM Post #1 |
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The war rages on So many lives lost Where is the limit To an unbearable cost? At which point do you stop And think about why All of these young soldiers Are going to die? Is it pure avarice Or maybe something more To justify this blood price Which has begun to soar? What if today is my day My last, final fight Can I confidently say I will be here tonight? Am I just another statistic On some general's wall? Was it really that pointless for me to "answer the call"? |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 8 2007, 10:39 PM Post #2 |
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Reflection
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that was beautiful. I will not rate it for the fear of putting a lid on it in my mind |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 8 2007, 10:42 PM Post #3 |
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thanks..i really think this is my most inspired poem to date |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 8 2007, 10:44 PM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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I agree. |
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| ChipChamp | Dec 8 2007, 11:32 PM Post #5 |
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Have fun!
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Wow, this is a very good poem, again!
:D 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Dec 9 2007, 02:48 PM Post #6 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That was truly amazing.... I cannot find any more to say... |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 9 2007, 03:48 PM Post #7 |
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thanks all...I really appreciate the positive feedback...its part of what keeps me writing more =) |
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