| Why Don't I Know?; By: God of the Congo | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 9 2007, 10:06 PM (194 Views) | |
| God of The Congo | Dec 9 2007, 10:06 PM Post #1 |
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Dead Poet
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Why Don't I Know? I can't find the right question, the right question to ask, Or if I do, I know not the answer, So many questions, no solutions, so so many infallibly obvious, flaws, errors, yet I know not what they are, I cannot find them, Why? Why am I sad? What is wrong? Why am I happy? What is right? why am I angry? Why? Why, but no conclusion, no answer. ever. I am so unsure, so often, why? I don't know myself, but don't I? I am me, I know every facet of my soul, or do I? I don't belong, here, in this time, but I do, I have friends, so I must, but do I? No answers, only questions, only feelings, unexplanable sensations in my soul, they are there for no reason with no cause, Is it fear? Fear of those I love dieing? Fear of myself? Fear of others? Fear of what others think? I don't know. I need serenity, I need peace and solitude, a place to hide away from this world and its cruelties. Or do I? Is it something else? I know not. I know not. But I will, I will bring clarity to my situation, I will bring light into darkness, order to chaos, chaos to order, balance to imbalance, love to hate, for all you need is love. All I need is love, not sureness, just love, I have love, Love of freinds, family, a special love soon, I hope, So I'm alright, my dischord will be balanced by harmony, I'm alright, I will survive. My answer may elude me for eternity, But that matters not, I know that my friends make me happy, I know that my bass makes me happy, I know my bird, my home, my deeds, they make me happy. I am not always so, but that may be, for the very best. |
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| ChipChamp | Dec 9 2007, 11:38 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good again!
:D 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Dec 10 2007, 07:24 AM Post #3 |
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What did you like about it? |
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| ChipChamp | Dec 10 2007, 08:22 AM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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The overall content. :) I know that's kinda big... but it's true. |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 12 2007, 01:46 PM Post #5 |
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Reflection
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VEry speculative at the begining then more sure at the end. Very cool. |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 12 2007, 01:59 PM Post #6 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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i like the feeling of change through the poem...8/10 very nice |
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| Anonymous | Dec 12 2007, 02:02 PM Post #7 |
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Honorary Member
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Boo! To Goddamn long! in this day and age, you can barely hold my attention for 5 seconds! Let alone 5 minutes. |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 12 2007, 02:58 PM Post #8 |
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Reflection
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Well good for those that can pay attention for long enough. |
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| Anonymous | Dec 12 2007, 03:38 PM Post #9 |
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Say what now? |
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| God of The Congo | Dec 22 2007, 05:41 PM Post #10 |
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Dead Poet
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Thanks guys. I expressed myself in the time I felt nessasary. |
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