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Why Don't I Know?; By: God of the Congo
Topic Started: Dec 9 2007, 10:06 PM (194 Views)
God of The Congo
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Why Don't I Know?

I can't find the right question,
the right question to ask,
Or if I do,
I know not the answer,

So many questions,
no solutions,
so so many infallibly obvious,
flaws,
errors,
yet I know not what they are,
I cannot find them,
Why?

Why am I sad?
What is wrong?
Why am I happy?
What is right?
why am I angry?
Why?
Why,
but no conclusion,
no answer.
ever.

I am so unsure,
so often,
why?

I don't know myself,
but don't I?
I am me,
I know every facet of my soul,
or do I?

I don't belong,
here,
in this time,
but I do,
I have friends,
so I must,
but do I?

No answers,
only questions,
only feelings,
unexplanable sensations in my soul,
they are there for no reason with no cause,
Is it fear?

Fear of those I love dieing?
Fear of myself?
Fear of others?
Fear of what others think?
I don't know.
I need serenity,
I need peace and solitude,
a place to hide away from this world and its cruelties.

Or do I?

Is it something else?
I know not.
I know not.

But I will,
I will bring clarity to my situation,
I will bring light into darkness,
order to chaos,
chaos to order,
balance to imbalance,
love to hate,
for all you need is love.

All I need is love,
not sureness,
just love,
I have love, Love of freinds,
family,
a special love soon, I hope,
So I'm alright,
my dischord will be balanced by harmony,
I'm alright,
I will survive.

My answer may elude me for eternity,
But that matters not,
I know that my friends make me happy,
I know that my bass makes me happy,
I know my bird,
my home,
my deeds,
they make me happy.

I am not always so,
but that may be,
for the very best.
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Very good again! :D

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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God of The Congo
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What did you like about it?
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Have fun!
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The overall content. :) I know that's kinda big... but it's true.
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VEry speculative at the begining then more sure at the end. Very cool.
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i like the feeling of change through the poem...8/10 very nice
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Boo! To Goddamn long! in this day and age, you can barely hold my attention for 5 seconds! Let alone 5 minutes.
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Well good for those that can pay attention for long enough.
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Say what now?
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Thanks guys. I expressed myself in the time I felt nessasary.
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