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The Tail Of Evinidus Hope; The INKweaver
Topic Started: Dec 20 2007, 09:38 AM (272 Views)
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Here lies the story of Evinidus Hope. This not a happy story. It is not sad at all times. It is a story of life, death, love and hope. If you fear the superhuman read no further. If you fear sadness read no further. If you fear truth read no further. For this is a story of all those things and much more. It begins:

________________________Chapter #1________________________________
There is no record of Evin's life in any government database, or church archive. There will be no recognition of his death officially, though his friends will hold a small celebration of his life. And his body will never be found after he dies. But what he is now and what shall become of him will come in due time. Now for the beginning...

It was a cold day in the small town of Gyre, William Hope's little arctic home. In Gyre it was always cold, but today, today was especially cold. It was dark and cloudy with a still thick fog hanging over Gyre like a blanket of dreams.

William, now Evinidus or Evin, Hope was happy despite the cold and fog, and he thought nothing could dull the fire of his happiness. His beautiful baby sister had been born this morning, and everyone was happily greeting and welcoming her into the world. The air in the house was alive with the hum of happiness, and everything was going well. Will was eleven years of age then and had gained some sense of the world that most people do not developed till much later in their lives.

Will could tell that little Amelia was special. He could see it in the glint of her onyx black eyes, and in the happy aura around her. this made him happier than anything else he had ever experienced.

It was a wonderful day full of joy and good feeling. Then the men came, there were three of them, all robed in black and seeming to draw the mist and fog from the outside into the warm happy house. Little will watched them distrustfully from the hallway where they couldn't see him. He could not say but for the first time in his short life he felt truly afraid.

Will was about to step out of the hall and ask the men who the were and what they wanted when one of them slipped out a long silver knife with a cross making the handle. The smile that had clung to his mother's face even when these strange men appeared and entered her house disappeared and was replaced by terror and despair. Will fled the room and hid in a doorway near enough to hear what was happening and not be seen. But as he fled he saw the first man, the one with the knife, put a long gash in his father's arm. Will heard his father cry out, and heard his mother scream in terror. He heard someone try to run then fall heavily on the floor. Will was forced to hear the brutal murder of his whole family for the next few hours. First they slowly and painfully killed his brave father Markus, then his kind mother, Elena, and finally his poor innocent baby sister Amelia.

They left then. After lighting the house on fire and leaving a metal cross with the likeness of the "savior" on it. And poor little Will was forced to flee his home. He got out just as the arched beautiful ceiling collapsed and the flames roared. He stumbled through the wasteland towards Gyre, his house was a couple miles outside the town. Once he entered the small town he begged anyone he saw for food, watter, and shelter. But everyone who heard his voice fled the place, making the sign of the cross, or warding gestures as they would towards a ghost.

William finley despaired and fled to a dark alleyway and resigned himself to die bereft of friends, fammily, and shelter. He would surely have died there had nnot a man found him. That man was David Fletcher, a teacher at a school for the "Gifted" were tought to use their gifts, or im some cases the cursed learned to live with their curses..

David had heard poor little Will wimpering in the alleyway and sout him out. Upon finding him he sighed. "You don't know do you?" with this he wrapped Will in a blanket and carried him away. The last think Will saw was David's midnight black skin and sea grean eyes.

Will awoke on a bed in David's house with no idea how he had arived there. Looking up he saw David who asked "What is your sirname boy?"

Will answered with the Truth "Hope." he murmered through week lips.

"hen I shall call you Evinidus Hope from this day on, for you are invisible" David said "But now I must take you to a place where you can learn to use your gift."

That Wlliam Hope became Evinidus Hope. He had been forced by the church to leave his old life, and David had showe him a new one. But Evin would never forget the day he discovered his powers. He would be avenged on the church, and those three men. So he is at that school now and has almost learned to harness his powers.

So the story has been told, From now on he must make it. And when there is another chapter to be told in the storry of Evinidus hope I will wright it, I will tell it, untill the verry last word of the last page of the last chapter. I will carry his tale to the ears of the world, it is in your hands to listen.
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i like it so far
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Yeah its a very good creation. Nice setup and excellent imagery and details.
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Thanks guys. I liked the character so I wrote don the begining of his story
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That was awesome. It reminded me of a history I hadn't finished of a previous RP character. Thanks! :D
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Ya. this one was about how I wanted it. Im going to wright more as soon as I have some more stuff planned out.
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You're sure to have fun with this. ;)
Let me know when the second chapter comes up.
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I will.
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I need to figure what happens next first.
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Loved it.
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