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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 21 2007, 09:19 PM (180 Views) | |
| *ichigo23 | Dec 21 2007, 09:19 PM Post #1 |
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Maybe Some Day To forgive and forget Simple saying for one to say But is hard for one to get Maybe someday Should i listen to my heart But my head is in the way Where should i start Maybe some day The look on her face Should I turn and walk away A look so filled with grace Maybe some day How can i forget Will it be ok? The place where we met Maybe some day What should I do? What shouldI say? What would you do? Maybe some day |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 21 2007, 09:20 PM Post #2 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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very representative of what some of us feel. eloquent. |
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| ChipChamp | Dec 21 2007, 09:48 PM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Very good, and I liked the rhymes! 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 22 2007, 10:53 AM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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I love how the idea flows through the poem changing slightly every stanza. |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 22 2007, 11:28 AM Post #5 |
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that's right |
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| God of The Congo | Dec 22 2007, 05:50 PM Post #6 |
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Very good. Sad. The rhumes were very good. |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 23 2007, 03:56 PM Post #7 |
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Yes. |
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