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Maybe; Maybe some day
Topic Started: Dec 21 2007, 09:19 PM (180 Views)
*ichigo23
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Maybe Some Day

To forgive and forget
Simple saying for one to say
But is hard for one to get
Maybe someday

Should i listen to my heart
But my head is in the way
Where should i start
Maybe some day

The look on her face
Should I turn and walk away
A look so filled with grace
Maybe some day

How can i forget
Will it be ok?
The place where we met
Maybe some day

What should I do?
What shouldI say?
What would you do?
Maybe some day
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***eboy192
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very representative of what some of us feel. eloquent.
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ChipChamp
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Very good, and I liked the rhymes!

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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** Death's servant
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I love how the idea flows through the poem changing slightly every stanza.
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that's right
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God of The Congo
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Very good. Sad. The rhumes were very good.
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Yes.
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