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| ***eboy192 | Dec 26 2007, 10:48 PM Post #1 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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What is this thing that we call peace? Its not something to cling and yet it doesn't cease Its never has clean cuts it has no start or end there are ifs and buts which can cause you to mend peace means many different things to many different people to one it is the song one sings for another, a church's steeple but no matter who and what you are you always do have a permanent scar from when there was conflict and you were all alone but peace is not that strict and isn't hard as stone so what I'm trying to say here is think about what peace is it can be much; from a tear to a really good soda's fizz. |
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| ChipChamp | Dec 27 2007, 12:16 AM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very true, and very good!
:D I loved the rhyming!! 8/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Dec 27 2007, 02:20 AM Post #3 |
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Dead Poet
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Totally awsome! So true. |
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| ***eboy192 | Dec 27 2007, 01:07 PM Post #4 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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thanks. i think that my luck is starting to turn around, my inspiration for this poem |
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| ** Death's servant | Dec 27 2007, 05:42 PM Post #5 |
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Reflection
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That was emensly beautifful. I like how you worded and kept the flow. Awsome |
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