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Peace
Topic Started: Dec 26 2007, 10:48 PM (193 Views)
***eboy192
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What is this thing
that we call peace?
Its not something to cling
and yet it doesn't cease

Its never has clean cuts
it has no start or end
there are ifs and buts
which can cause you to mend

peace means many different things
to many different people
to one it is the song one sings
for another, a church's steeple

but no matter who
and what you are
you always do
have a permanent scar

from when there was conflict
and you were all alone
but peace is not that strict
and isn't hard as stone

so what I'm trying to say here
is think about what peace is
it can be much; from a tear
to a really good soda's fizz.
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ChipChamp
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Very true, and very good! :D I loved the rhyming!!

8/10

~ ChipChamp
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God of The Congo
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Totally awsome! So true.
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***eboy192
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thanks. i think that my luck is starting to turn around, my inspiration for this poem
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** Death's servant
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That was emensly beautifful. I like how you worded and kept the flow. Awsome
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