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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 1 2008, 07:18 PM (193 Views) | |
| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 1 2008, 07:18 PM Post #1 |
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NIGHT As darkness’ blanket falls gently upon the hills All that can be seen is the white lights searing from the stars And the ominous glow of the moon blanketing out onto the earth The temperature begins to drop, And all living creatures retreat into their dens, And the flowers close their buds to protect their inner beauty Soon everything becomes quite And dreams start to occupy the mind, Night and rest coincide with each other DAY Then the oranges, yellows, and reds start to rise out of the horizon All the flower buds begin to open Their colors so bright it is a symbol of life itself Then all that lives begins to wake While constant moving eyes begin to open Now life is surely in existence Soon after dreams become reality As playfulness, family, and friends begin to merge Life and day is entirely eternal |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 1 2008, 07:47 PM Post #2 |
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Reflection
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I like it, very inocent vew of the world. |
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| ***eboy192 | Jan 1 2008, 07:56 PM Post #3 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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very pure poetry. definitely enjoyable. bonus points for imagery =P |
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| ChipChamp | Jan 1 2008, 09:26 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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I agree with eboy, very pure poetry.
:D I liked it! 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| CrestfallenNights | Jan 2 2008, 01:33 AM Post #5 |
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Coming Or Going?
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The imagery is amazing in this poem. Simply wonderful. I like the basic, yet observant view of night and day It's a beautiful poem. |
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| God of The Congo | Jan 2 2008, 08:19 PM Post #6 |
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Dead Poet
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Wonderfully done. The contrast of night and day is very observant, imagery was awsome, I liked the optimism of it. Innocent. Well done. |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 2 2008, 08:27 PM Post #7 |
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Reflection
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O.O |
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