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Night And Day
Topic Started: Jan 1 2008, 07:18 PM (193 Views)
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NIGHT

As darkness’ blanket falls gently upon the hills
All that can be seen is the white lights searing from the stars
And the ominous glow of the moon blanketing out onto the earth

The temperature begins to drop,
And all living creatures retreat into their dens,
And the flowers close their buds to protect their inner beauty

Soon everything becomes quite
And dreams start to occupy the mind,
Night and rest coincide with each other

DAY

Then the oranges, yellows, and reds start to rise out of the horizon
All the flower buds begin to open
Their colors so bright it is a symbol of life itself

Then all that lives begins to wake
While constant moving eyes begin to open
Now life is surely in existence

Soon after dreams become reality
As playfulness, family, and friends begin to merge
Life and day is entirely eternal
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I like it, very inocent vew of the world.
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very pure poetry. definitely enjoyable.

bonus points for imagery =P
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I agree with eboy, very pure poetry. :D I liked it!

7.5/10

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The imagery is amazing in this poem.

Simply wonderful. I like the basic, yet observant view of night and day

It's a beautiful poem.
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Wonderfully done. The contrast of night and day is very observant, imagery was awsome, I liked the optimism of it. Innocent. Well done.
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O.O
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