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The Other Half; by thebalanceiswithin
Topic Started: Jan 3 2008, 07:22 PM (280 Views)
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Day after day,
as we walk along these streets
Those who do not get recognition of their own existence
are sadly experiencing their last heart beats

Beat after beat,
we walk past
and step after step,
these deserving lives are downcast

throb after throb,
as blood flows through our veins
hunger and thirst
are causing them pains

why is it,
that we as a whole
can not realize
The other halves dying soul?

It is as if they are invisible,
because we don't care
or maybe we just don't notice them,
because we were raised not knowing they were there

Time is eternal
and ever effecting
why is it that so many souls
are aching?

These are questions
that you should ask yourself
in hopes that you will help them,
instead of putting your caring thoughts
left on the shelf

for Love and caring,
is all that you can do
don't tell me
you can't come to their rescue
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Very good Balance! This is definitely one of your best! A lot of good poems coming out lately. :D

8.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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Jan 3 2008, 08:00 PM
Very good Balance! This is definitely one of your best! A lot of good poems coming out lately. :D

8.5/10

~ ChipChamp

Definitely. I am loving your work balance. Its really relate-able and deep.
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That was amazing, quite honestly. I completely agree with eboy and chippy.
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So true.
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wow that's deep
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O.O
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Definitely one of your best.
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thanks guys i really appreciate it.
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's why were here. to read awsome stuff like that.
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