| The Other Half; by thebalanceiswithin | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 3 2008, 07:22 PM (280 Views) | |
| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 3 2008, 07:22 PM Post #1 |
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Day after day, as we walk along these streets Those who do not get recognition of their own existence are sadly experiencing their last heart beats Beat after beat, we walk past and step after step, these deserving lives are downcast throb after throb, as blood flows through our veins hunger and thirst are causing them pains why is it, that we as a whole can not realize The other halves dying soul? It is as if they are invisible, because we don't care or maybe we just don't notice them, because we were raised not knowing they were there Time is eternal and ever effecting why is it that so many souls are aching? These are questions that you should ask yourself in hopes that you will help them, instead of putting your caring thoughts left on the shelf for Love and caring, is all that you can do don't tell me you can't come to their rescue |
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| ChipChamp | Jan 3 2008, 08:00 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good Balance! This is definitely one of your best! A lot of good poems coming out lately.
:D 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ***eboy192 | Jan 3 2008, 08:16 PM Post #3 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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Definitely. I am loving your work balance. Its really relate-able and deep. |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jan 4 2008, 07:08 PM Post #4 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That was amazing, quite honestly. I completely agree with eboy and chippy. |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 6 2008, 02:32 PM Post #5 |
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So true. |
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| Invisible Dancer | Jan 7 2008, 02:52 PM Post #6 |
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Insomniac
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wow that's deep |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 7 2008, 04:55 PM Post #7 |
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O.O |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 8 2008, 09:04 AM Post #8 |
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Definitely one of your best. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 31 2008, 06:16 PM Post #9 |
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thanks guys i really appreciate it. |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 31 2008, 06:26 PM Post #10 |
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's why were here. to read awsome stuff like that. |
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