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Topic Started: Jan 6 2008, 03:06 PM (217 Views)
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I am open for suggestions

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Chapter one

It had been four days since we saw any people but, still we continued to ride our horses south. Orion turned around to face Aaron and said "We need to find Little Cliftonshrire before to long. We are out of water and the horses are getting tired."
Aaron wearing his usual brown cloak searched the horizon for Little Cliftonshire. Underneath his cloak he was wearing brown pants and a black shirt, On his side was a short katana, and on his back was his long bow made from the center of an old red wood tree. This bow was passed down from his fathers father. Also on his back was his quiver of arrows that he had made before this trip.
Aaron responded to Orion with "It should be within sight as the sun rises."
"It was a nice thing we did back there" Orion said.
"They needed help and we just happened to be there." Aaron replied. As we continued on our way we listened to the skizzards scamper over the rocks and the sand. They noticed the wind started to blow from the south so, Orion pulled out hie cloak from his saddle bag to put on. Under his cloak Orion wore a grey shirt and blue pants. On his side was his weapon of choice a rapier he forged himself.
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hmm....Needs a little work on grammer and punctuation. but 'tis good.
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I like it.
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