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| +Linden | Mar 1 2008, 12:30 AM Post #1 |
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awesomesauce
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No rating; comments welcomed. I is passing out in two seconds, lightheadedness is fo' real. Over and out. On top of the world In air, swinging miles high The air is scarce and I don’t care. My once broken bliss That was thrown to the floor Has been mended. Though it may not be like it was It is enough to send me skyward, Enough to be optimistic again. In our connoted truce, I realize I am still your friend Though I spoke ill mannerly. I see there is a balance to find, Between raw wit and being helpful: Words can do more damage then a fist. You’ll never know how reviving it was To hear you say it was just talk. I realize now the value of your friendship. I am in the air, feeling secure. Lightheaded and I don’t care. |
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| CrestfallenNights | Mar 1 2008, 07:54 AM Post #2 |
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Coming Or Going?
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Beautiful poem! I like the structure, and the poem itself! I went through something sorta similar =D It's truly amazing, no? |
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| ChipChamp | Mar 1 2008, 10:15 AM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Very good! I liked it! The structure of the poem was very well done, too. :) ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Mar 1 2008, 02:22 PM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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Well done. |
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