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| ***eboy192 | Mar 15 2008, 08:23 PM Post #1 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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What is fake? What is not? These are answers we have sought. Will we find Out these things? What is the answer they will bring? Some people lie, some people cheat It isnt a very difficult feat Some people hate, break, or steal Things from which you can never heal People are fake For god's sake Please tell me from this sleep people will wake Where they all think Everyone is good Thats a belief that no one should Have; it isnt right... We must fight... We cant stop people from being fake Just, our motives, we must try to make Pure and righteous for goodness sake Morals and ethics are at stake. |
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| ChipChamp | Mar 15 2008, 08:25 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very, very good! I especially liked the rhythm at the beginning of the poem.
:D 9/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| +Linden | Mar 15 2008, 10:24 PM Post #3 |
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awesomesauce
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I adore this poem. |
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| ** Death's servant | Mar 16 2008, 09:20 AM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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We're not all fake, and it's those few who're real that realy stay with you when the day is done. Great poem. |
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