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Deception
Topic Started: Mar 15 2008, 08:23 PM (161 Views)
***eboy192
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What is fake?
What is not?
These are answers we have sought.

Will we find
Out these things?
What is the answer they will bring?

Some people lie, some people cheat
It isnt a very difficult feat
Some people hate, break, or steal
Things from which you can never heal

People are fake
For god's sake
Please tell me from this sleep people will wake
Where they all think
Everyone is good
Thats a belief that no one should
Have; it isnt right...
We must fight...

We cant stop people from being fake
Just, our motives, we must try to make
Pure and righteous for goodness sake
Morals and ethics are at stake.
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ChipChamp
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Have fun!
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Very, very good! I especially liked the rhythm at the beginning of the poem. :D

9/10

~ ChipChamp
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+Linden
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awesomesauce
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I adore this poem.
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** Death's servant
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We're not all fake, and it's those few who're real that realy stay with you when the day is done. Great poem.
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