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| ***eboy192 | Mar 18 2008, 08:15 PM Post #1 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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Has it ever happened At some point in your life That you had no sharp end when you wish you had a knife? When you see someone crying Out in pure despair And on the inside you are dying Cause you cant be there? Have you ever dreamed you had the tools to change someone's life; it seemed you could rearrange To take out all of the sadness The hate, pride, death, and fear And replace it with some goodness Some positive thoughts to hear? One of my friends opened up to me I had always thought I was worse off than she But then all of her innermost thoughts came free My emotions changed immediately I wanted to give some of my happiness Just so she could replace some of her sadness I wanted to be there to sort out the mess of her life that she has unusually confessed... But then as she spoke more and more of her griefs I began to rethink them as more of beliefs That she didn't need to hang on to much more And so I tried to tell her to run out the door To open her wings and fly out - and soar. The problem is that some people don't know what to do Besides what has happened upon them; its true Which is why kids abused will in turn hit their kids too... Because they didn't have the love that, with others, was given to So all I was able to to to help was let her know I was there; myself. And I would not judge her as others before And if she came to me I'd help her through the door To leave this whole mindset of whats right and whats wrong And live her own life, and sing her own song. |
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| ChipChamp | Mar 18 2008, 08:57 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good, I liked it! Good rhymes too.
:D 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| CrestfallenNights | Mar 18 2008, 09:07 PM Post #3 |
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Coming Or Going?
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Very nice poem.
^_^ The last stanza is effing awesome. Mhmmmm. |
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| ** Death's servant | Mar 18 2008, 09:54 PM Post #4 |
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Reflection
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wow. Breathtakingly crafted. |
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