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Wishful Thinking
Topic Started: Mar 18 2008, 08:15 PM (168 Views)
***eboy192
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Has it ever happened
At some point in your life
That you had no sharp end
when you wish you had a knife?

When you see someone crying
Out in pure despair
And on the inside you are dying
Cause you cant be there?

Have you ever dreamed
you had the tools to change
someone's life; it seemed
you could rearrange

To take out all of the sadness
The hate, pride, death, and fear
And replace it with some goodness
Some positive thoughts to hear?

One of my friends opened up to me
I had always thought I was worse off than she
But then all of her innermost thoughts came free
My emotions changed immediately

I wanted to give some of my happiness
Just so she could replace some of her sadness
I wanted to be there to sort out the mess
of her life that she has unusually confessed...

But then as she spoke more and more of her griefs
I began to rethink them as more of beliefs
That she didn't need to hang on to much more
And so I tried to tell her to run out the door
To open her wings and fly out - and soar.

The problem is that some people don't know what to do
Besides what has happened upon them; its true
Which is why kids abused will in turn hit their kids too...
Because they didn't have the love that, with others, was given to

So all I was able to to to help
was let her know I was there; myself.

And I would not judge her as others before
And if she came to me I'd help her through the door

To leave this whole mindset of whats right and whats wrong
And live her own life, and sing her own song.
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ChipChamp
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Very good, I liked it! Good rhymes too. :D

8.5/10

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CrestfallenNights
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Very nice poem. ^_^

The last stanza is effing awesome.
Mhmmmm.
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** Death's servant
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wow. Breathtakingly crafted.
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