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| PMD14 | Mar 29 2008, 09:34 PM Post #1 |
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Again, a bit of old-school PMD14. This must have been... a long time ago. Think it was after I watch the Fast and the Furious for the first time. Anyway, take a look. Not that interesting at all. ---------- The adrenaline ran through his veins with every pulse from the engine. It was like a warmth inside him; like nothing ever felt before. His whole life cars had been his interest. Now was the time to live them. Full-mooned, the night sky was studded with stars. Together they lit the suburban streets. Two dozen teenagers stood on either side of the road. Some were dark, others white; it mattered not. The religions, cultures, ways of life, meant nothing when the group of car-maniacs were together. Cars were cars. Racing, racing. At last, the time had come. The clock was on twelve, and the drivers were prepared. They were ready. Both engines roared at each other, like feral beast before the showdown. Now was the time. In a flash of excitement, it began. He switched to second gear. Hands sweaty, face dripping. The vehicle was hot, but he felt nothing. Nothing but the speed beneath him. Third gear. Every tree, every building, time itself. They all flew by the automobile. Nothing mattered save the checkered line. Fourth gear. Everything began to blur. The engine roaring drowned out his line of thought. He practically flew the car to the finish. Fifth gear. The wheel was sticky, his hair damp. Nothing could stop the flaming engine now. Sixth gear. The final step. The finish line. So close, but speed could not resist, could not be tamed. Never did he think of consequences, only actions and rewards. Only hope to be the best. |
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| ChipChamp | Apr 4 2008, 03:35 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good! You are a very good writer. :D I'll read your other stories when I have time sometime over the weekend. :) |
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| PMD14 | Apr 4 2008, 10:12 PM Post #3 |
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Why thankyou. I honestly didn't think anyone would enjoy the ones I've put up so far. They are rather old ones when I was just a little kid. Anyhow, thanks for the comment. |
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| +Linden | Apr 8 2008, 08:25 PM Post #4 |
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awesomesauce
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Can't say I'm a speed-fanatic, I'm terrified of driving. But near the end I felt the anticipation. |
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