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| ***eboy192 | Mar 30 2008, 07:35 PM Post #1 |
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What do you do When you are in love And want to believe Everything they speak of? What do you think When one of your friends Makes your heart sink And tries to make amends And tell you something about your dear love That doesn't quite ring As something you ever thought of? Do you go with your friend Who you trust so dear? Do you go with your love Who has done nothing you are ashamed of? When you don't know all the views You cant expect to get accurate news But people still expect you to decide When to open up and when to hide. What do you do when you trust someone But someone else tells you not to? In my opinion you trust the one Who in the end you promised to. 'Cause if you go behind their back And not trust them because someone told you not to Then what your relationship seems to lack Is the fact that they cant trust you. |
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| CrestfallenNights | Mar 30 2008, 08:02 PM Post #2 |
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Coming Or Going?
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Ooooooh. Very very nice. This is amazingly awesome: "What do you do when you trust someone But someone else tells you not to? In my opinion you trust the one Who in the end you promised to. 'Cause if you go behind their back And not trust them because someone told you not to Then what your relationship seems to lack Is the fact that they cant trust you." Mainly because I've experienced that. T_T But very awesome poem. Sweet rhymes. |
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| ** Death's servant | Mar 30 2008, 09:23 PM Post #3 |
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Reflection
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That is simply amazing. Well not simply but still amazing, it's kind of complex in a way. |
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| ChipChamp | Mar 30 2008, 11:47 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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Very good poem, and very good rhymes! 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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