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What Do You Do
Topic Started: Mar 30 2008, 07:35 PM (219 Views)
***eboy192
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What do you do
When you are in love
And want to believe
Everything they speak of?

What do you think
When one of your friends
Makes your heart sink
And tries to make amends

And tell you something
about your dear love
That doesn't quite ring
As something you ever thought of?

Do you go
with your friend
Who you trust so dear?

Do you go
with your love
Who has done nothing you are ashamed of?

When you don't know all the views
You cant expect to get accurate news
But people still expect you to decide
When to open up and when to hide.

What do you do
when you trust someone
But someone else tells you not to?

In my opinion you trust the one
Who in the end you promised to.

'Cause if you go behind their back
And not trust them because someone told you not to
Then what your relationship seems to lack
Is the fact that they cant trust you.
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CrestfallenNights
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Ooooooh. Very very nice.

This is amazingly awesome:
"What do you do
when you trust someone
But someone else tells you not to?

In my opinion you trust the one
Who in the end you promised to.

'Cause if you go behind their back
And not trust them because someone told you not to
Then what your relationship seems to lack
Is the fact that they cant trust you."

Mainly because I've experienced that. T_T

But very awesome poem.
Sweet rhymes.
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** Death's servant
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That is simply amazing. Well not simply but still amazing, it's kind of complex in a way.
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ChipChamp
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Very good poem, and very good rhymes!

8.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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