| Hypocrisy; The INKweaver | |
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| ** Death's servant | Mar 31 2008, 04:07 PM Post #1 |
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Hypocrisy You say it’s the majority, “Democracy! Respect my authority!” But what do your rigged elections bring? The superior city now under the sea? You try to manifest your authority, In the superiority of your inferiority, You try to think for my, drink for my, You’re authority holds not a wink to me. So you’ve killed the minority, Because of your so called superiority, But in your mind rests the inferiority, As you said, the majority has authority. So let your minds self implied inferiority, Fester and implore to me, the minority, To forgive your inferiority, And restore your authority. You beg the world for a majority, To give you back in your usurped authority, To neglect the minority, the majority, me, Don’t forget New Orleans. Wasn’t that a slip of your superiority, authority? Forget to see, Now hide inferiorities, in superiorities, of your idiosyncrasies, Now who’s a minority’s bad dream? It doesn’t look like me. So what is the majorities’ authority? If we insist on falling prey to slick seeming superiority, Only a mask for your idiosyncrasy, I think you didn’t expect to see me, the majority, standing for peace. The war must end; no race no religion has superiority, None has infidelity; look at me, the spoken, written word is my belief. I accept where you fall into idiosyncrasy, Now we all must take authority, end this madness, end the war, you see. So you can manifest your authority, In the inferiority of your superiority, It doesn’t really matter to me, ‘Cause tomorrow I am the majority, or minority; the inferiority, or superiority; the democracy, Not your hypocrisy. ~Blake |
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| ChipChamp | Mar 31 2008, 04:26 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good, with very good rhymes! I liked it! 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Apr 1 2008, 08:51 PM Post #3 |
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Thank you guys for the deep, insightfull and plentiful comments on my poem. I feel like it's realy been read. |
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| ***eboy192 | Apr 1 2008, 08:52 PM Post #4 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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Very deep thoughts, and interesting use of imagery. Sorry I didnt read it sooner, I was busy =/ |
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| ** Death's servant | Apr 1 2008, 09:07 PM Post #5 |
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Thanl you |
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| ** Death's servant | Apr 2 2008, 09:03 PM Post #6 |
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thank you. |
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