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| Red Love | Apr 30 2008, 10:02 PM Post #1 |
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The fairest of them all
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Paper Blank paper Blank as your face Taunting, teasing, mocking Soft paper Soft as your hair Comforting, calm, simple White paper White as your skin Beautiful, entrancing, perfect Filled pages Full as my heart Showing, telling, feeling Red pages Red as my lips Crusted, sticky, delicious Memories rush through my head Flowing through my hands Filling the pages with words Paper rubs against itself Destroying the soft simple feel Replacing it with painful coarseness My blood drips slowly from the blade Sticking the paper together Calling me with its undeniable taste |
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| ** Death's servant | May 1 2008, 03:32 PM Post #2 |
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Reflection
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wow... |
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| ChipChamp | May 1 2008, 03:43 PM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Very, very good! Again!
:D 8.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Jun 2 2008, 09:13 PM Post #4 |
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Dead Poet
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Wonderfully written! My only comment is it could have been a little tiny bit longer. But it was still very good! |
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