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| D. Black | May 19 2008, 05:05 PM Post #1 |
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I'm not breathing, I must be in heaven
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Breathe… Let in the light. It’s so good to be alive, Be here, within without worry of whatever wanders its’ way in Breathe… Don’t stop, Don’t falter, Don’t let your lungs shrivel up and turn to dust And rust due to the strains of time Battering the sides of the Tower of Babel Like rain, pouring glass gently gracing my body Catch your eyes in the streetlights Breathe… Breathe… Now exhale. Open your mind and let pen connect to your heart Let the words come and never end their flow After the water washes away, All that remains will be sand So never let the tide come to wash away the words And the sandcastle kingdoms of yesterday Let the words cascade from your open mouth and splash onto the page Forming a collage of strange and wonderful colors And breathe… Breathe… Breathe… …now stop. Shall it begin? |
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| ChipChamp | May 19 2008, 09:21 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very, very good!
:D I liked it a lot!
:P 9/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | May 19 2008, 09:31 PM Post #3 |
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Reflection
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Holly shit. I am in awe. |
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| God of The Congo | Jun 2 2008, 09:11 PM Post #4 |
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Dead Poet
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I'm with Blake here, I am in awe. You are amazing! |
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| ** Death's servant | Jun 4 2008, 01:32 PM Post #5 |
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Reflection
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Kick ass. |
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