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| ***eboy192 | Jul 27 2008, 08:05 AM Post #1 |
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[Insert witty catchphrase here]
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Chirp goes the crickets, Each passing night Shining are the stars, Those that shine so bright Bright lights of street lamps Lining urban streets, Packed with cars late at night Playing modern beats. Driving down a lonely road Not a soul for miles, Mountains and fields become a blur, Of these I never tire. Crowded stores and shopping malls, Excitement at its peak, Comparing with the simple beauty Before, of which I speak. Different lives for different people, Neither good or bad The key is to see the beauty in both, And you will never be sad. |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 27 2008, 10:46 AM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very good! I especially liked the rhymes. :P 9/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 27 2008, 01:47 PM Post #3 |
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Reflection
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that is simply amazing !!!! |
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| D. Black | Jul 27 2008, 09:21 PM Post #4 |
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I'm not breathing, I must be in heaven
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Very nice job. +10 awesome points from D. |
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