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A Short Myth
Topic Started: Oct 13 2008, 06:56 PM (504 Views)
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I read it!!! Very good, but I feel that it is my duty to point this out. You have introduced the protagonist, we now need an antagonist, or at least a small time vilian (annoying kid or whatever). we need some drama. But very good opening.
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Stop jumping the gun. XD First Ana, now you? My God.

Guess I should get writing, eh?
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I'm sorry dear... take your time...
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No pressure Linden. lol
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You two are in the mush pot. -_-

Anybody else wanna jump the gun? Giants like to eat mush soup with bone bread. :)
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The concept of coucest is kind of interesting.... XD I was kind of confused at first because I've read Beryl as a girl's name from Katherine Mansfield.

I wanna read more..... you should have kept up with nano, dearie.... XD if only professors didn't give homework..... T_T
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But I told you Beryl was a boy when I was writing it ages ago! XD

Maybe if you forgot that, you've forgotten the magic plot twist? hehe.

But professors and homework do suck. :dead: But I'll do NaNo eventually!
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