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| ** Death's servant | Nov 2 2008, 02:57 PM Post #16 |
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Reflection
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I read it!!! Very good, but I feel that it is my duty to point this out. You have introduced the protagonist, we now need an antagonist, or at least a small time vilian (annoying kid or whatever). we need some drama. But very good opening. |
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| +Linden | Nov 2 2008, 09:08 PM Post #17 |
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awesomesauce
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Stop jumping the gun. XD First Ana, now you? My God. Guess I should get writing, eh? |
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| girl anachronism | Nov 3 2008, 07:49 AM Post #18 |
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Try to remember
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I'm sorry dear... take your time... |
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| ** Death's servant | Nov 3 2008, 04:07 PM Post #19 |
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No pressure Linden. lol |
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| +Linden | Nov 3 2008, 05:21 PM Post #20 |
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awesomesauce
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You two are in the mush pot. -_- Anybody else wanna jump the gun? Giants like to eat mush soup with bone bread. :) |
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| Anomy | Dec 15 2008, 08:50 PM Post #21 |
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The concept of coucest is kind of interesting.... XD I was kind of confused at first because I've read Beryl as a girl's name from Katherine Mansfield. I wanna read more..... you should have kept up with nano, dearie.... XD if only professors didn't give homework..... T_T |
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| +Linden | Dec 16 2008, 09:01 PM Post #22 |
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awesomesauce
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But I told you Beryl was a boy when I was writing it ages ago! XD Maybe if you forgot that, you've forgotten the magic plot twist? hehe. But professors and homework do suck. :dead: But I'll do NaNo eventually! |
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