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Topic Started: Jul 23 2009, 01:52 AM (729 Views)
kelseyyy.
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Set down your eyes for a moment and breathe.
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moremoremore!
haha. im hooked too.


Jessica: hahaha. i read your comment and it cracked me up, cause i could see you being really confused about all of that. =P.
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+Linden
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Bacon. :P

Good job, Blake. Keep writing.
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WEEEEEEST. . .
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*claps moths* I remember in Minnesota, I went moth-catching when I was a kid. I managed to land one as big as my hand is now. We stuck it in a huge plastic bag overnight. What's interesting is that when I woke up in the morning, the moth had surrounded itsef in eggs before it died. Someone once told me that when a moth dies, it lays eggs in hopes of having its young carry on.

It just reminded me of that line "Love never dies."

Nice work.
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** Death's servant
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O.o that is an interesting observation
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Celestial-Fox
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Yeah, I'm totally not sure if it's true, though. I think it'd be an interesting thing to mention in the story. And it would be kinda neat if the characters found out at the end that it wasn't true. X] Mostly because I like sayings that drive novels or the characters in it, and when they find out that the saying isn't true, it's really interesting.
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Well, I actually know just about how I'm gonna end it. And it's a surprise.
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the next bit. I promise that action is eminent...I just need to build up a nice base for my characters.
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Jack looked away from his brother and slumped to the ground underneath a nearby tree. "You don't know what you're talking about." His words were tired, drained, there was no conviction behind them.

In the memory, they are younger by a year or two. Jess is watching his face discretely, trying to fathom the meanings of his expressions as they walk. They have just left school, and are walking to the bus stop together. Jack seems upset.

"What's wrong?"

He looks away. "I'm afraid"

"Afraid of what" Her hand finds his and closes around it.

He struggles for words for a few seconds. "I'm....I'm afraid to say what I'm afraid of.

"You can always tell me." The words are awkward, neither of them is much used to this kind of conversation.

"That's just the problem though..."

"What?" She looks into his eyes, unsure what he means. "Oh..." They stand a second lost in each other's eyes. that 'oh...' and the silence following it are the only things in the air between them.

"I love you." He says the words almost so quiet that they cannot be heard. A tear drops, and in the memory, neither of them can remember to whom it belongs.

"I think...." her words fail. A few seconds later they are in each other's arms, kissing with the care of those who think they may each break the other. When they break apart again "I think I feel the same."


Liam watched his brother for a few seconds. Neither said anything, nor did either move for some time. Finally Liam stepped over to his brother and offered his hand. Jack wordlessly took the hand and pulled himself up. They walked back into the forest where Liam uncovered some coals from a fire he had lit some time before and rekindled a fire from them. For some time the brother sat in their black coats, brooding eyes, and unspoken words. Eventually they both slept.
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Jessie
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yeah! more! ...but not very much :( ...but still more :D

I'm curious as to where it's going. this was nice though ^_^
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D. Black
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Amazing.

I need moar.

And I'm unsure where it's going, but I can't wait to see.
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kelseyyy.
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haha. i agree with the picture Caleb posted...
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I'll try to get more to you all asap.
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