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Day 1; IT BEGINS
Topic Started: Jul 21 2014, 12:42 PM (638 Views)
God of Death

could work
she doesnt do much in book1 I think

PM Suprak to get her flavor just in case
Edited by God of Death, Jul 23 2014, 02:31 PM.
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Dels

ooook

well, I admit I was trying to do the "don't look at your scumteam" thing >_>

but we can't exactly afford to lose another scum today, so I figured now was the time to give up on that
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God of Death

yeah i figured that

sorry for making you get out of it
Chris knows my buttons
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Dels

eh, it goes against the spirit of the game and I don't think it particularly helped, but I wanted to give it a try.

I figured Ulti was scum, so its good I checked, because I really can't afford to vote for him. I'm shocked Sbell isn't here lol but whatever.
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VampAubrey

just want to get this straight

when suprak gives me a sansa flavor, i have to paraphrase that correct?
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Dels

yes. you can post the paraphrase here for us first so we can make sure its okay. or send it to the host directly.
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The Night King

As per the request. Feel free to ask for a rewrite or tweak it yourself.


You’ve been raised in Winterfell, but you’ve always been more Tully than Stark. You have your mother’s looks, her grace, and you carry yourself with the proper dignity that a highborn lady should. Unlike your filthy sister Arya, who is more the sigil of your house, the direwolf, than actual Stark, really. You do love the North and your family means everything to you…but there has to be more out there. The stories and songs they sing of gallant knights and romance and adventure, you love them. But where is your gallant knight? Who will do chivalrous deeds for you? When King Robert comes to Winterfell to talk to your father, you finally have your chance. He might not look like much, but his son, Prince Joffrey? DREAMBOAT. And you are to be his queen. You will travel to King’s Landing with your father and your sister (ugh) and finally live the true life of a lady. It will be hard to be away from your mother, but this is the stuff of songs! You will be the Queen some day, and your handsome prince will protect you from any dangers along the way. For now though, you are just another highborn lady of the court. But with your father there and the gallant Joffrey by your side, what’s the worst that could possibly happen? Right?

You are Sansa Stark, TOWN Aspiring Queen (Vanilla). If your father tries to take you home, maybe listen to him, eh? You win when all threats to town are eliminated, even if you have been removed from the game previously.
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VampAubrey

Graced with high cheekbones and thick auburn locks, your beauty is admired in Winterfell. Everyone says that unlike Arya, with her horse face and brown hair, you're the Tully in the family. Winterfell is your home but up here in cold hard north, there is no gallantry. You hope that some day a courageous knight will come save you and make you his queen. Everything changed when you first saw handsome Prince Joffrey in Winterfell. He was so dreamy, and the best part? You're to be his QUEEN.

You are Sansa Stark, TOWN Aspiring Queen (Vanilla). Always heed your warnings. You win when all threats to town are eliminated, even if you have been removed from the game previously.


that good??
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Dels

it seems good. I'll let reg answer since he's apparently around. but you've changed all the wording choices, so I guess its alright.

but man, you've really gotta post some more. its the lurking that'll get you. as long as you just stick around and answer people's questions, you'll have people willing to trust you. no need to get defensive, just let people know your "thoughts".
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Reg
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Don't include the wincon. Or basically anything after (Vanilla). But especially don't include the wincon even though it's in every town PM.

Generally speaking, I like when paraphrases aren't structured like the actual PM itself but other than what I already mentioned it's fine even though it doesn't do that.
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