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| b4e Has Made a HUGE 'OOPS'! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 27 2015, 07:33 PM (187 Views) | |
| bionic4ever | Jul 27 2015, 07:33 PM Post #1 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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Well, even while I've been taking so much extra care with the details in the current story... I've made a HUGE error! Chapter 8 was very nearly finished when I realized that I've completely overlooked writing the 2nd half of a VERY important scene! It should've played out before the portion where Oscar makes his big announcement to everyone in Rudy's office! Maybe you even felt that the storyline had jumped too abruptly, that something was missing... and that's because something WAS. I feel like such a dolt! I very nearly pulled Chapter 7 down, to do a complete revision... but I think I've found a way to backtrack a bit and 'play out' that crucial scene while still keeping Chapter 7 intact. When 8 does go up (definitely some time tomorrow, as the new version is over half done), please feel free to tell me if the 'backtracking' works - or if it seems too forced. Thank you in advance! - |
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