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| The other side of the coin; guess what? | |
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| RCFan | Sep 27 2007, 04:22 AM Post #1 |
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The other side of the coin 1. Until now it was quite a pleasant day. That was until now. First he was cornered by those 3 younsters and now his former boss was waiting for him on the pier. Oscar Goldman. Just to say hello? No, not Oscar. He was all business as usual. Fortress. Steve got this little knot in his stomach. Summer Maiden. The knot got bigger. Don’t show the pain. Don’t admit that you miss her. That you still love her. Oscar knew better. Damn him! No. It was no pleasant day. Even until now. Hell, it wasn’t even a pleasant week. Why? Even after all this years he just couldn’t forgive himself for that stupid idea of skydiving. He forces himself not to think about that. Why did Oscar had to start this topic? Until now he enjoyed his retirement. It was great. Yeah, it was, wasn’t it? Sure! Then he had to stop by the Air Force Base and met the General. Michael soon had his soloflight. Again the knot in his stomach began to ache. Michael. Another thing in his life that he just put aside, or tried to. Finally he arraged to meet him. Not that he had a choice. He was his son, for heavens sake! The thing was that he never saw himself as a father and he didn’t know if he was up to it. But he was willing to try. Oscar tried to cheer him up, because he himself was too pessimistic about it. And so he drove to the restaurant, where he would meet his son. 2. He was nervours. Why did he do this? Because he was his son. He had neglected him long enough! Finally he arrived at the restaurant. The woman at the entrance thought he was meeting a young woman here. Why did a table for two indicate that? It was useless. Just after he had taken his seat he saw her. For a moment it seemed like she tried to sneak out of the restaurant. Not thinking he was up and beside her. She looked radiant though he hadn’t seen her for an eternity. The words tumbled out of his mouth without thinking, he was so overwhelmed in seeing her. Why, when, where? Nothing did matter. She was there, in front of him. He never wanted to leave her, wanted at least to see her again. An the next thing he knew, he was flying through the front window, directly in front of his sons feet. When he stood again, she was gone. But then there was his son. 3. No, those two meetings hadn’t gone too good. Defeated and sad he went home to his boat. How could it go so wrong? The two peaople he cared most about did hate him. Seeing Jamie again was good. Hell, it was indescribable. But knowing she didn’t remember their time together or at least her feelings for him gave the whole thing a sour taste. It was true what he said to Oscar this morning, no matter how hard he tried to forget her, he never could. And dammit, he tried! All those other women could never hold up to her. Never. If only she could remember! But she couldn’t. And nothing would change that. Sometiomes he felt so helpless. All those times he was with her, ran with her and laughed with her was heavenly. But it also hurt. Hurt like hell. Yes, he had accepted the pain and now he wondered if it made him numb. Numb to others? He retired and cut off all connections. Was that a bad thing to do? No, he had given more to his land than others. Two legs, an arm and an eye. And he had risked his life over and over for king and country. There were other agents, younger agents. The OSI didn’t need him. Damn, he didn’t need the OSI! He sighed and shook his head. His eyes looked over to the harbour. To the place where he had failed this evening. Twice. The knot in his stomach ached again. It was no use. In his mind echoed the words Jamie had said to him. They were full of anger. Why? He didn’t understand. Did she blame him for something? But for what? With another sigh he went under deck and to bed. But sleep didn’t come until the early hours. 4. The next day he had a nice carrace with some guys from Fortress and after that he went to the OSI. Seemed like Oscar was right, but seeing Oscar today made everything just worse. No, Steve didn’t care for those guys from Fortress, though he wondered why they did want him alive and not dead. “I heard you ran into Jamie last night?” THERE it was! Bang! Sure, it was too much of a coincidence that it could be a coincidence. He should have known. Now the hints made sense. Steve wanted to punch his former boss for that. “Why is he doing this to me?!” Steves head screamed. And then the next blow hit him. “She remembers.” All he could do was to stare at Oscar while he was told how. Scenes from long ago popped into Steves head, how she told him that she couldn’t remember how it was to be in love with him and how he remembered that he said he understood, when he didn’t. All that should be over now? He didn’t know what to do or say, he felt like cheering and crying at the same time! Now he had to see her! He was overwhelmed with feelings. She remembered! Did that mean they had another chance? He didn’t really listen to the other things Oscar had to say, he just knew for sure he had to see her, talk to her, desperately! It was all he could do not to run bionically to her. He had to force his mind on the traffic to avoid accidents. When he arrived and got out of the car, he saw them. The guys that chased him. The took Jamie with them. He didn’t hesitate and went after them – on foot, bionically. This way he had a better chance to follow them via shortcuts. When he finally held Jamie in his arms it felt so good. Like they were never apart. Steve didn’t care if they came back, he just cherished the moment. They went to this restaurant at the harbour and talked. He confessed that he could never forget her and that he left that candle burning, so that her memory wouldn’t die. He felt like a boy who confesses his love to an older woman. Somehow stupid. No, he was never good with words, not when it came to Jamie. Even his humor failed him. But he knew she’s understand, like she always did. This was Jamie, the love of his life. And he told her everything. About Michael and he even invited her to the soloflight, hoping she’d come. And she came. 5. Steve didn’t show it, but he was very happy, not to say ecstatic when he saw her. And he was thankful for her bionic hearing, so he could tell her without giving away thet she was here. Luck seemed to smile again at him. The knot in his stomach was forgotten. He had settled his two mistakes and got two new chances with the two people who meant most to him. Even if it had meant to reveal his bionic powers to Michael after those guys from Fortress showed up again and they had to escape. He had promised Michael to explain the rest to him after the soloflight….and then everything turned into a nightmare.. …but through all of it he never lost Jamie. He knew she was there with him, beside him and that helped him a lot. More than anything. After the diagnosis he knew what he had to do, even if he had to beg, but only to find out that his friends were one step ahead of him. They still were his friends, they still cared. Oscar, Rudy and now Jamie also. The whole family. And they were going to get a new member in Steves son Michael. 6. Michael reacted just like him and Jamie. Becoming bionic did this to people, it seemed. He wanted to die, not being a freak. It did hurt very much and again he remembered how it was for him. But he did cope and Jamie did cope, and Michael would also. His friends tried to reassure him. And Jamie, Jamie did take the problem and made it hers. She took it upon her to show Michael how to cope with his bionics, mentally and physically, just like Steve did with her all those years ago. So Steve had his mind free for the new task he was taking. He had made a promise to Oscar. Fortress on a silver plate. |
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| Tigerlily | Sep 27 2007, 09:32 AM Post #2 |
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Glad you got back to this. It was a good chapter. |
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| bionic4ever | Sep 27 2007, 11:05 PM Post #3 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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Wonderful! You are so good at capturing the inner conflicts of these characters. Thank you so much for continuing this, and I hope we'll see even more soon. |
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| Rudywells1274 | Sep 30 2007, 02:44 PM Post #4 |
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An unusual style of writing. I like it. Very good so far. Holly |
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| bionic4ever | Nov 9 2007, 02:20 AM Post #5 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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Do you have any more for us, RCFan? |
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| Tigerlily | Nov 10 2007, 07:24 PM Post #6 |
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I was wondering that too. |
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| RCFan | Nov 26 2007, 05:40 AM Post #7 |
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i do, just be a little more patient...it's on paper, i'll just have to type it....*hangs head* |
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| Tigerlily | Nov 26 2007, 08:27 AM Post #8 |
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Glad to know that you didn't abandon it RCFan. I look forward to reading it. |
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| bionic4ever | Nov 27 2007, 12:48 AM Post #9 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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I'll be looking forward to it! |
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| RCFan | Jul 12 2016, 09:40 AM Post #10 |
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and here chapter 6 again till the end! Thanks for being patient!! 6. Michael reacted just like him and Jamie. Becoming bionic did this to people, it seemed. He wanted to die, not being a freak. It did hurt very much and again he remembered how it was for him. But he did cope and Jamie did cope, and Michael would also. His friends tried to reassure him. And Jamie, Jamie did take the problem and made it hers. She took it upon her to show Michael how to cope with his bionics, mentally and physically, just like Steve did with her all those years ago. So Steve had his mind free for the new task he was taking. He had made a promise to Oscar. Fortress on a silver plate. So while Jaime worked with Michael on his new build body, Steve chased Fortress. 7. The kidnapping of Rudy Wells and the kidnapping of Michael was another slap in their faces. Now the stakes were high and everybody knew that it was now or never. With the traitor demasked and the place found where Fortress was hiding, everything went fast from there. Steve never felt like hi wanted to be on another mission before, but now, with Jaime at his side again and her resurfaced feelings there was a flicker of hope, which grew stronger by the hour. Aside from all the dangers that were around them, he just knew that everything would be fine at the end, because the old family was together inclucive new members like Jim Castillian, with two l’s. The overnight stay with Jaime was a bit strange, because as much as he would have liked to sleep with her or just hold her in his arms, it was all too soon and so he took a step back and hoped, she would tell him how they would walk this new road together, now they found each other again. No, he was never good with voicing feelings, he always had one foot up his mouth, but he hoped, he didn’t make a fool of himself and that Jaime did understand, just like she always did. 8. The fight against Fortress and the rescue of Rudy and Michael went pretty well and after the whole thing they had a little party at the harbour. Michael apoligized for his behaviour at the hospital, but it was allright, because Steve knew how he felt. Both needed time to adjust to the new situation. And then there was the newfound friendship or relationship with Jaime. She told him, that she was glad he didn’t give up on her. How could he? She was part of his life for so long! It was a good day, hell, a good life after all! End |
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| bionic4ever | Jul 13 2016, 10:26 AM Post #11 |
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Beautifully done! It was fascinating to get such a clear idea of the thoughts that motivate them. Absolutely enjoyable from start to finish. I'm hoping for another story from you when you're able... and another... and another. - |
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| RCFan | Jul 13 2016, 10:39 AM Post #12 |
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such praise, thank you very much! i'll try
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| down30 | Jul 14 2016, 11:11 AM Post #13 |
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Great job writing Steve's thoughts from the movie! I hope to read more from you soon! |
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| RCFan | Jul 14 2016, 11:15 AM Post #14 |
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thanks, i have already some ideas for future stories and i'll try to write them in english, so i can practice. Hope my grammar isn't that bad ^^ |
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| Rudywells1274 | Jul 16 2016, 01:58 PM Post #15 |
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Such a different writing style, something to adjust to, I think I like it though |
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