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Suggestion Box; story ideas, requests or challenges
Topic Started: Feb 5 2008, 06:52 AM (2,711 Views)
bionic4ever
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Is there a story from the show that you feel needs a re-write? Do you have an idea or request for a new story or an idea that needs some feedback? Post 'em here, folks!
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I'm fresh out of ideas right now, but I will put the thinking cap on to see what pops up.
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:) b4e, How about a rewrite of Sister Jaime and have Steve in as a father or brother in the chruch with her.


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bionic4ever
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Since the Season 4, Episode 1 line-by-line has sort of stalled, would anyone mind if I picked it up and ran with it as a story....?
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I say go for it. I've been anxiously waiting to read what happens next. yide
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Take 'er away!
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It's all yours. I'll be looking forward to reading it.
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bionic4ever
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Thank you - and I posted the first chapter down in 'Season Four'. B)
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I, personally, really liked the idea of Jaime and Steve working with Jack and Sam from Stargate. The couples really do have a lot in common. However, I am horrible at action scenes. My niche is more in the romance, lovey-dovey, sentimental things. You, b4e, are really good with action scenes, though....you know, working the missions.

It might be something you might consider down the line somewhere. I mean, there might come a point where you run out of Earthly ideas, and with Stargate, you options would be limitless because of going off-world.

Just an idea. You don't have to use it if you don't want to.
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Oh, hey....speaking of stargate...another idea just popped into my head.

I dont' know if TBW or TSMDM ever did an episode like this, but its an idea....

SG-1 had an episode entitled "heros" in which the SGC was being video cataloged. Although the SGC was still to remain confidential to the most extreme (like bionics), a film was being made in case it ever needed to become public or for study for personnel entering the SGC program or such.

Anyways, they did interviews of SGC personnel. You could do the same with OSI personnel. It might be interesting to see what Jaime and Steve have to say about their jobs. It would be more of a fun story than a mission story. Dont' know if it would be your style....I know you like angst.

Just another idea. I know....weird things pop into my head every once in awhile.
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bionic4ever
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I don't know Stargate well enough to write it yet, but I'm learning. Oscarfan might be better equipped to handle that one.
The other idea, though, is more up my alley. In fact, I've got a trio of shorties with Rudy, Steve, Jaime and Oscar's takes on bionics and cyborgs: "Doctor Frankenstein", "Lab Rats" and "Playing God".
Keep the suggestions coming - I love 'em, and I know at least one other writer among us who has benefited from them, as well.

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aries03
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Ah yes. Those are good stories....

But not just interviews, or "shorts", on their opinions of bionics....but about their life in general as well....something that really lets you know the characters.

Oh, and if the idea for Stargate ever does suit you.....you have a good person to get advice from....hehehe...but I actually have a little idea for a mission. Maybe I'll try it out....see how it goes. We'll see.

What do you think though? I am thinking that Sam and Jack get captured by Ba'al. Teal'c is away at Chulak (his home world) visiting his son. Daniel is ascended at the time. That leaves no one left on SG-1 to rescue Sam and Jack. There is another crisis going on that requires the attention of SG personnel, so Hammond looks elsewhere for someone to rescue his most precious team.....somewhere like the OSI???? Hehehehehehehe. *claps hands and dances in chair*

We'll see how it goes.
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I like that idea aries03 Steve and Jaime rescue Jack and Sam.


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aries03
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i posted the first chapter under the SG-1 thread in random chatter. I am know trying to decide how Jaime and Steve are going to explain their bionics to the SGC.
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"Cybernetically enhanced", maybe?
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