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| Kill Steve Austin; Season 1 Episode 11 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 31 2009, 12:42 PM (2,848 Views) | |
| johnfsg | May 31 2009, 12:42 PM Post #1 |
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Prologue (This takes place three months after the birth of Jaime and Steve’s Children.) Dr. Michael Marchetti watched the island’s beach come into view as the fast boat he rode in cut through the waves. It had been two months since his last trip here to check on the Zanin’s, a group of alien descendants whose parents had been forced to settle here on the island called Ninau or question by the native Hawaiians; due to its sudden appearance last year. Oscar had assigned him this..fate..he thought about it, but Oscar called it a mission of serious national and international security. “We’ll be there soon Mike.” The statement brought him out of his mental remorse to turn and nod at Chris. Chris for his part grinned and shook his head a bit as Michael turned back to look ahead of them back out at the water. Chris knew what he was feeling, both of them had loved Jaime and both of them had thought it would end in one of them marring her and making a life with her. Both of them of course failed, thanks to one Colonel Steve Austin. Jaime had never really forgotten him, not deep down in her heart. Now of course Steve and Jaime were married and had two three month old baby daughters named “Rose and Ann” from what he had heard. “Sir?” the young coast guard ensign, with them on this trip spoke up. “We still have not heard back from the base camp.” Chris tapped Michael on the back. “Is it normal for the base camp not to communicate back to us Mike?’ Chris looked at Michael with a bit of concern in his eyes and in his voice. Michael nodded his head. “Yeah, last time I was here, they were having radio issues then. Something about the islands unnatural magnetic field left over from the years of the Zanin shield screen.” Chris nodded, he had read the report of how an OSI satellite had crashed here last year; on an island that had been shielded from the outside world for over 50 years by an energy barrier that made it appear invisible to visual and electronic detection and of how Steve had encountered a girl named Da-Nay from the Zanin people. He helped her to get the T-cell serum X-99 for them, due to their immunity issue with Earth germs. Some of the Zanin’s had mutated into feral like humanoids due to the satellite radiation as well. Steve helped save those Zanin and gave them a cure for their immune systems. All in a day’s work for the great American hero, Steve Austin he thought. Hopping out of the small boat, the young ensign pulled on the line to guide it to the sandy shore as Chris and Michael both stepped out to help him secure it to the beach. All of them saw the large posted signs every thirty yards or so, stating how this was US. Navy private property and used for Navy test bombing no trespassers were allowed. “How long do they think that will actually keep people off here?” Chris asked. Michael looked at him. “Hopefully until we are sure the Zanin can live safely among us without dying.” All three grabbed the bags and backpacks from the boat and headed into the islands enterer The trek along the well worn path had been a bit long but completely normal. Chris was ahead of Michael and Ensign Wong, when he spotted the Flag pole, marking the base camp. Chris walked in and saw the mess that was left of the base camp. “Everyone hold up” he whispered back. Laying the bag down he slowly moved forward, ducking and weaving around the over turned tents and tables. Michael and Ensign Wong watched through the brush, until a shadow fell over them. “Chris!!!” was all Chris heard as he spun around to see the bodies of Michael and Wong come flying through the air into the camp area. Michael came down hard on an overturned desk..as he felt his left side impact and the feel of his ribs breaking. Chris started to move forward when he saw the three come into the camp. Zanin’s by their dress but their faces and hair..like…”oh no” he looked at them in fear. ”It’s happened again.” Chris turned to run toward Michael when two men jumped over him from the island jungle behind him. Chris stopped and fell back as he saw their faces changed as well. “Welcome to our camp” The deep voice from the left Zanin spoke to him. Chris had seen the pictures of some of the Zanin’s and this one looked similar to..”Torg?” Chris was taken to the center of the camp near Michael and the limp body of Ensign Wong, and tossed to the ground. The six Feral Zaninn’s surround them. “Bring the female doctor here Riga” Torg stated to the curly haired Feral Zanin next to him. As Dr. Lee was brought into the clearing, Torg looked down on Chris. “Is this them Doctor? Chris and Michael?” he looked at her and smiled. “Yes” she whimpered. “Good.” Torg turned back to Chris and Michael next to him, now looking at him to. “You will get Steve Austin to come here…or the female doctor will die right now.” Torg motioned for the two Zanin’s to begin pulling on her arms. Her screams echoed out. Both Chris and Michael shouted out. “Stop this..she did nothing..stop it.” Torg grinned at them..”I will spare her..IF..if you use the communications here to call for Steve Austin to come.” Michael hung his head, while Chris looked at Torg with anger. “Ok..just stop hurting her.” Michael yelled out. Torg waved the two feral Zanin to stop. Michael was taken to the communication trailer and sluped into a chair by the feral Zanin Torg. “Call him now..but do not give anything away…or the female and Chris will die.” Torg left Michael with two other Zanin and walked back outside to Chris. “What are you going to do if Steve comes here?” Torg frowned and looked at Chris with pure hatred in his eyes. “When Steve Austin comes here…..I will have my revenge…I will kill Austin and anyone who comes here with him.” (Ok this is my first try here hope everyone enjoys it as I prepare to take the Austin's, Jaime and Steve out on a mission together. Thanks B4E for your words of encouragement) Edited by johnfsg, Dec 20 2013, 01:44 PM.
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| johnfsg | Jun 5 2009, 03:30 PM Post #31 |
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Thanks so much...Will be getting into Jaime's side for a bit before they both come together as a team. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 7 2009, 01:15 PM Post #32 |
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Chapter 4 Jaime focused in her hearing to pin-point the direction. Moving toward the back of the camp, she leapt straight upward to the top most branches of a tall jungle tree. Jaime then crouched down and listened. She heard them, ragged breathing...almost like Max would make when he ran she thought. Clearing the jungle she saw the two feral Zanin. Jaime watched the two move around the camp, searching, zigzagging from one end to the other, then the blonde curly haired one spoke. “Torg said to look and find if they landed, we need to head to the east side…they land there mostly.” Riga told the female feral Zanin. “I will go and check the east beach, you stay here.” “What of Austin, we should be with Torg to help him kill Austin.” The female spoke. Jaime’s eyes widened and her heart ached at that moment. She wanted so badly to run and find him, but she had to get past these Zanin first. She waited until the male had left the camp. Jaime timed it so as the female turned to walk back into camp; she leapt down from the tree and slowly moved forward making sure to hone her ear to the female. As the female feral turned to double back, Jaime stepped out from the back of a tent. “Look…I don’t want to have to hurt you but I will…if you don’t tell me were Steve is understood…where is Steve Austin?” Jaime thought lowing her voice and acting as she did with Max might work on these feral Zanin. “Earthier female…I will bring you to Torg, he will know what to do with you.” The Zanin almost growled it at her and charged. Jaime sprang up and over the Zanin and landed behind her. Turning quickly, Jaime prepared herself as the feral Zanin was already charging again at her. Jaime was almost caught off guard by the speed of the female, as she brought her bionic arm up to block her overhand strike. Jaime felt the force of the blow as is drove her backwards a bit. “Whoa, Steve wasn’t kidding about how strong you guys got.” Jaime braced her feet, and struck out at the Zanin with her right arm, knocking the feral female backward into a tent collapsing it on her. Jaime watched as she started tearing through the tent. Moving as quickly as her bionic legs would take her she grabbed a chain laying around from the wrecked camp and began rapping it around the feral Zanin, until she had her confined for the moment. “Now listen Zanin, if you don’t stop I will rap you up with everything I can find…now will you stop moving?” Jaime pushed her to the ground, and bionicaly held her there. “Now stop it will ya, just tell me why does this Torg want to kill him?” “He stopped him from being our King, and his wife died because of Steve Austin.” The female spoke at her still struggling a bit. Jaime knew that was not true. “Do you know where Torg thinks Steve might be?” The female only growled at Jaime. “If you think he will kill us anyway how will it hurt to tell me?” Jaime tried reverse logic on her, maybe it would work. “Torg will kill him, and you if you try and help.” She grinned. “Well then it won’t hurt to tell me right, I mean Torg will kill us anyway…right?” Jaime smiled at her, hoping it would give a peaceful demeanor. “NO…I will not help you earthier.” The feral flatly stated to her. “Great thanks for nothing.” Jaime said, and then ripped a strip of tent material lose and wrapped it around the feral Zanin’s mouth. “That should shut you up for awhile” Jaime pulled the female and the whole tent into the jungle and further secured her to a tree. Jaime listened for any others. “Ok, if they came from the jungle..then that means their searching there more than likely…so…looks like a beach run for me.” She surmised, and headed back toward the beach as fast as her legs would take her. Jaime headed down the beach, stopping here and there to take in her surroundings and listen for any sound or feral or Steve. Her bionic ear picked up the sound of…fighting. “Steve?” Jaime rounded a tree line, and saw, what she heard. Jaime saw three Zanin and Steve fighting with them in the surf, she could also see his left arm in a sling and the wrappings over his left eye but most important was the fact that he was losing to them. Steve fought with them as best he could but already he was down in the water trying to fight his way back to standing, but they were staying on him. Steve struck one across the jaw sending the Zanin into the water face first, but the other two pinned him down and his face sank under. Jaime ran up on the two Zanin trying to kill her husband…grabbing the nearest feral Zanin by the arm, she spun him off Steve and threw him toward the jungle. “Get off of him!” Jaime yelled and struck the other Zanin square in the back, knocking it off of Steve. “Steve..Steve?” Jaime reached down as Steve was raising his head up, grabbed him and pulled him up to her. “Steve…oh honey.” “Sweetheart your a sight for sore eyes, and body.” Steve joked and winced in pain. “Honey I came as fast as I could…oh Steve your hurt.” Hugging him Jaime felt such a relief inside her heart that he was alive. Steve pulled back a bit. “Sweetheart I love you to, but we need to move before Torg shows up.” They both moved to the beach. “We need to get back to the cave I found, Chris and Michael are there.” Steve told her while coughing a bit of sea water out. “I had the pilot radio Oscar to ask for full backup before he left.” Jaime stated still holding Steve. At that moment Jaime’s ear heard the sound of more ragged breathing and movement coming their way. “Steve honey we got company.” |
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| bionic4ever | Jun 7 2009, 01:35 PM Post #33 |
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You've really got a knack for these action scenes - great job! And I love the image of Jaime saving her husband....but can she do it again...? |
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| johnfsg | Jun 7 2009, 07:07 PM Post #34 |
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Thanks I do try. We will have to see, course two heads, and bionic arms and legs are better then one set. |
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| messyhead | Jun 7 2009, 07:42 PM Post #35 |
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Yeah, the action is great. I liked the description of the Max-like ragged breathing. It was very evocative and a little chilling. |
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| OJFan | Jun 7 2009, 09:25 PM Post #36 |
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Yeah - good action. I have to keep refreshing my memory with the names though
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| johnfsg | Jun 8 2009, 09:25 AM Post #37 |
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Sorry about the names. I just watched it again so....thats why their fresh in my mind only. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 9 2009, 09:19 PM Post #38 |
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Chapter 5 Jaime could see that Steve was ready to fight some more, but now was not the time she thought. Steve looked so hurt to her, almost like he did during that whole Bigfoot incident two years ago. “Honey, Steve lets get back to Michael and Chris…they’ll need us.” Jaime reminded him. Steve thought about it and nodded. “Yeah your right babe, let’s get back...I’ll show you the way.” Steve and Jaime ran together down the beach, not quite what Jaime had imagined for them as a weekend getaway, she pictured a relaxing time on the beach not a life and death struggle. Steve for his part continued to give her his best smile and wink, despite the fact his body ached all over. Covering the beach, at their top speeds, Steve and Jaime made it back to the rugged outcrop and up to the cliff quickly. Jaime had a look of concern on her face as they stopped. Steve saw her face as he helped her to the cave entrance. “Sweetheart you hear something?” He asked. Jaime looked at him, serious as she had ever been. “Yes….their back there Steve…and coming on fast.” Steve scanned out over the beach, still wishing that his bionic eye was working. “Let’s get below…we need to get Chris and Michael prepared, before this is all over they may have to help us.” Jaime widened her eyes at the thought that both of them, as bionic as they were would still need help. “Where’s Bigfoot when you need him.” Steve half laughed. “Yeah.” Heading inside Steve and Jaime found Chris in a firing position and Michael with a rock in his hand. “Jaime?” both Chris and Michael said in unison. Jaime half smiled at them both. “Chris, Michael…I wish I could say it’s good to see you but under these circumstances, I wish you both were not here.” Chris looked at Jaime with love, and longing. “How, how have you been Jaime…I heard you have a daughter…named Sara?” Steve frowned at Chris, while Jaime touched his side to claim him. “Yes she is very beautiful, takes after her father. “ Jaime smiled at Steve and looked back at Chris to make sure he understood her completely. “Listen.” Steve interrupted the moment. “We need to get ready, the Zanin’s are coming…when they get here I plan to meet them outside the cave.” Jaime stared at him and frowned. “We plan to meet them.” “Sweetheart, I don’t want you to get hurt…” Steve tried to continue but was cut off. “Honey, I’m bionic too remember?” Jaime stood firm. “Remember who pulled you out of the sea back there…because there’s no other bionic person on this island beside you and I.” “Jaime…they will hurt you, bad if they can…look at me.” Steve replied back. “Steve…your more hurt then me…you’re gonna need help, and I ‘m not going to let you die out there fighting them.” Jaime faced him now. Steve placed his right hand on her arm. “Jaime…our daughter needs her Mother…alive.” Jaime touched his face. “Our daughter needs her Father too…together we stand a much better chance you know that.” “We’ll help also, neither of you will be on your own out there.” Chris volunteered for him and Michael. Steve and Jaime both turned to them. “No” they both stated. “Chris stay back here at the cave mouth and if you get a clear shot take it. Maybe you can down a couple or slow them down.” Steve looked at him and continued. “Neither of you two need to get in direct combat with them...if you can help it.” “Steve’s right.” Jaime stated to Chris and Michael. “Austin you and Jaime could use us.” Chris replied. “Listen Chris, Michael…once you have empted your pistol…when Jaime and I have them concentrating on us. I want you two to slip out of here and down the cliff to the beach below if you can.” Steve placed his hand on Michael shoulder. “And go where Steve, Jaime.” Michael voiced. “Where will we go that those creatures won’t find us…if…well if you two can’t stop them.” “Oscar will be sending help, they will be here any time now…but not before the Zanin’s come for Steve and me.” Jaime spoke to him. “Get to them…both of you surrive.” Jaime turned her head toward the cave entrance. Her bionic ear picking up the sounds of the Zanin…closing in on them. She looked at Steve.. Steve kissed her cheek. “Ready?” Jaime nodded and Both of them started toward the entrance. |
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| bionic4ever | Jun 9 2009, 09:28 PM Post #39 |
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A breath-taking chapter - great job! I really like the tension when Chris sees Steve and Jaime together, and the way S & J look out for each other. More, please? |
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| messyhead | Jun 9 2009, 10:14 PM Post #40 |
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Great chapter - a little calm before the storm. Just one problem - it's not Steve who calls Jaime "Babe".
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| OJFan | Jun 9 2009, 10:23 PM Post #41 |
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You did a really nice job describing the action - I liked the dialog too - just right. |
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| Lola | Jun 10 2009, 03:40 AM Post #42 |
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Great chapter! I liked all the descriptions. There's a real sense of tension. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 10 2009, 05:45 AM Post #43 |
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Ok, ok you got me on that. I slipped that in as I am a Steve and Jaime fan...over and other Jaime pair up. My little jab. Sorry. |
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| messyhead | Jun 10 2009, 07:06 AM Post #44 |
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Perhaps not the artiest jab - it was like Steve momentarily turned into Oscar. Not your intended effect. But don't apologize - a lot of that sort of thing goes on around here - maybe too much. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 10 2009, 08:10 AM Post #45 |
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Thank you.
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