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| Kill Steve Austin; Season 1 Episode 11 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 31 2009, 12:42 PM (2,845 Views) | |
| johnfsg | May 31 2009, 12:42 PM Post #1 |
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Prologue (This takes place three months after the birth of Jaime and Steve’s Children.) Dr. Michael Marchetti watched the island’s beach come into view as the fast boat he rode in cut through the waves. It had been two months since his last trip here to check on the Zanin’s, a group of alien descendants whose parents had been forced to settle here on the island called Ninau or question by the native Hawaiians; due to its sudden appearance last year. Oscar had assigned him this..fate..he thought about it, but Oscar called it a mission of serious national and international security. “We’ll be there soon Mike.” The statement brought him out of his mental remorse to turn and nod at Chris. Chris for his part grinned and shook his head a bit as Michael turned back to look ahead of them back out at the water. Chris knew what he was feeling, both of them had loved Jaime and both of them had thought it would end in one of them marring her and making a life with her. Both of them of course failed, thanks to one Colonel Steve Austin. Jaime had never really forgotten him, not deep down in her heart. Now of course Steve and Jaime were married and had two three month old baby daughters named “Rose and Ann” from what he had heard. “Sir?” the young coast guard ensign, with them on this trip spoke up. “We still have not heard back from the base camp.” Chris tapped Michael on the back. “Is it normal for the base camp not to communicate back to us Mike?’ Chris looked at Michael with a bit of concern in his eyes and in his voice. Michael nodded his head. “Yeah, last time I was here, they were having radio issues then. Something about the islands unnatural magnetic field left over from the years of the Zanin shield screen.” Chris nodded, he had read the report of how an OSI satellite had crashed here last year; on an island that had been shielded from the outside world for over 50 years by an energy barrier that made it appear invisible to visual and electronic detection and of how Steve had encountered a girl named Da-Nay from the Zanin people. He helped her to get the T-cell serum X-99 for them, due to their immunity issue with Earth germs. Some of the Zanin’s had mutated into feral like humanoids due to the satellite radiation as well. Steve helped save those Zanin and gave them a cure for their immune systems. All in a day’s work for the great American hero, Steve Austin he thought. Hopping out of the small boat, the young ensign pulled on the line to guide it to the sandy shore as Chris and Michael both stepped out to help him secure it to the beach. All of them saw the large posted signs every thirty yards or so, stating how this was US. Navy private property and used for Navy test bombing no trespassers were allowed. “How long do they think that will actually keep people off here?” Chris asked. Michael looked at him. “Hopefully until we are sure the Zanin can live safely among us without dying.” All three grabbed the bags and backpacks from the boat and headed into the islands enterer The trek along the well worn path had been a bit long but completely normal. Chris was ahead of Michael and Ensign Wong, when he spotted the Flag pole, marking the base camp. Chris walked in and saw the mess that was left of the base camp. “Everyone hold up” he whispered back. Laying the bag down he slowly moved forward, ducking and weaving around the over turned tents and tables. Michael and Ensign Wong watched through the brush, until a shadow fell over them. “Chris!!!” was all Chris heard as he spun around to see the bodies of Michael and Wong come flying through the air into the camp area. Michael came down hard on an overturned desk..as he felt his left side impact and the feel of his ribs breaking. Chris started to move forward when he saw the three come into the camp. Zanin’s by their dress but their faces and hair..like…”oh no” he looked at them in fear. ”It’s happened again.” Chris turned to run toward Michael when two men jumped over him from the island jungle behind him. Chris stopped and fell back as he saw their faces changed as well. “Welcome to our camp” The deep voice from the left Zanin spoke to him. Chris had seen the pictures of some of the Zanin’s and this one looked similar to..”Torg?” Chris was taken to the center of the camp near Michael and the limp body of Ensign Wong, and tossed to the ground. The six Feral Zaninn’s surround them. “Bring the female doctor here Riga” Torg stated to the curly haired Feral Zanin next to him. As Dr. Lee was brought into the clearing, Torg looked down on Chris. “Is this them Doctor? Chris and Michael?” he looked at her and smiled. “Yes” she whimpered. “Good.” Torg turned back to Chris and Michael next to him, now looking at him to. “You will get Steve Austin to come here…or the female doctor will die right now.” Torg motioned for the two Zanin’s to begin pulling on her arms. Her screams echoed out. Both Chris and Michael shouted out. “Stop this..she did nothing..stop it.” Torg grinned at them..”I will spare her..IF..if you use the communications here to call for Steve Austin to come.” Michael hung his head, while Chris looked at Torg with anger. “Ok..just stop hurting her.” Michael yelled out. Torg waved the two feral Zanin to stop. Michael was taken to the communication trailer and sluped into a chair by the feral Zanin Torg. “Call him now..but do not give anything away…or the female and Chris will die.” Torg left Michael with two other Zanin and walked back outside to Chris. “What are you going to do if Steve comes here?” Torg frowned and looked at Chris with pure hatred in his eyes. “When Steve Austin comes here…..I will have my revenge…I will kill Austin and anyone who comes here with him.” (Ok this is my first try here hope everyone enjoys it as I prepare to take the Austin's, Jaime and Steve out on a mission together. Thanks B4E for your words of encouragement) Edited by johnfsg, Dec 20 2013, 01:44 PM.
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| johnfsg | Jun 21 2009, 10:33 AM Post #76 |
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Yes indeed. Her right bionic arm was damaged, so when she fell she had to try and hang on with her..."left" which is the normal human hand and arm. It was her legs really that kept her steady. |
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| messyhead | Jun 21 2009, 01:12 PM Post #77 |
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That would be a nice detail to include. I was imagining her hanging from one hand. What kinds of footholds does she have? Are they crumbling away? It could add to the tension. Obviously I plum forgot about the damaged bionic arm!
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| johnfsg | Jun 21 2009, 08:18 PM Post #78 |
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I did, I put in how her feet dug in to the cliff face and allowed her to grab and hold herself by her left hand.I thought it was clear, maybe not. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 22 2009, 03:52 PM Post #79 |
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Hang in there...working on the end. B4E...and anyone else that has enjoyed my little episode. |
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| messyhead | Jun 22 2009, 06:44 PM Post #80 |
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But how's your Dad?! |
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| johnfsg | Jun 22 2009, 09:27 PM Post #81 |
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Oh I thought I said, sorry he is fine. Doing good and this Wed. plans to go back to his little job that he works for three days. Just to keep myself busy. I did speak with him about being careful already so. Doctor said they got 99.9% of the growth off his liver so good news all the way around. |
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| messyhead | Jun 22 2009, 10:56 PM Post #82 |
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That's terrific! I'm so glad to hear it. |
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| OJFan | Jun 23 2009, 05:35 AM Post #83 |
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I'm liking your story - it's a nice change of pace, what with all the action. You have a nice writing style too - it's easy to read if that makes sense - clear choice of words and all that. You do a good job of making Steve and Jaime seem like a strong couple. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 23 2009, 03:59 PM Post #84 |
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I try, I try. I see them as a strong couple in my mind's eye. I mean...they both have bionic parts, which means no one else in the world can understand them better then each other. They are so very close and I think Jaime would have been such a better part of Steve and he for her. Grounding each other if you will. |
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| bionic4ever | Jun 23 2009, 04:19 PM Post #85 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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Amen! Well said!
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| johnfsg | Jun 23 2009, 09:07 PM Post #86 |
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Epilogue Steve opened his eyes at the sound of Oscar’s voice coming into his hospital room. Slowly he focused his mind from the drug filled haze. Looking Steve saw Oscar come into the room, with Rudy and Jaime who was deep in conversation with Oscar. “I felt that Steve needed my help and I went.” Jaime explained to him. “Jaime it’s not like it use to be babe, we have to account for everything now.” Oscar smiled at her. Rudy joined in. “Oscar’s right even my repairs to Steve’s eye and your arm had to be done in triplicate, this new administration is crunching the pennies hard.” “Tell the President he can bill us.” Steve grinned calling out to them. Jaime smiled and walking to his bedside, while Oscar and Rudy stepped to the other side. Jaime reached out and touched his face. “Steve honey, how are you feeling?” Steve touched her hand and held it in his. “Bionically, Rudy does fantastic work. Physically, almost as good as our first date.” Jaime smiled and leaned down to kiss his cheek. “That good huh?” “What about you?” Steve asked. “Like you said Rudy works wonders, back to bending steel bars.” Jaime said. Oscar looked at Steve and felt a wave of guilt. “Pal, I’m really sorry. I thought…” Oscar looked at Steve and Jaime with deep concern and sadness in his eyes. Steve grinned at Oscar, his friend for so many years. “Oscar, it comes with the territory. Jaime and I both know the risks when we go out, being bionic doesn’t make us invulnerable and you asked and I said yes…so it’s no one’s fault.” Jaime frowned. “Now you know why I wanted out and away from it Steve, It...it can eat your life away…or leave you dead.” Steve looked at her. “Sweetheart Oscar had no way of knowing, what was waiting for me.” Oscar looked at Jaime and turned walking toward the room door. “Get well Steve, Jaime.” Rudy turned trying to stop Oscar from leaving “Oscar wait.” Oscar left the room, letting the door close behind him. Rudy turned to Jaime. “Oscar would have traded himself in Steve’s place if he could.” Steve looked at Jaime too. “Jaime, sweetheart I know your upset at all that happened but” Jaime cut in. “Steve you’re a Father now, do you know how close you came to being…” Jaime started too wept and all the pain and feelings rolled out of her. “I need you Steve; our daughters need you not a memory of a hero.” Steve tried to hold her hand but she pulled away and left the room in tears. “Sweetheart…Jaime, Jaime?” Steve sat up and stepped out of his bed. Rudy rushed over to his side. “Steve you’re not a hundred percent, your non-bionic arm is still hurt, not to mention your ribs and .” Rudy tried to hold him back but Steve was having none of it. “Rudy I am going.” Steve grabbed his clothes and changed as quickly as he could. Outside the rain began to pour. Jaime ran out into it, and the feelings of a time before fled back into her memory. Her running down a road like this in rain, and as the lightning flashed, glimmers of the running and pain would flood back. Jaime stopped, next to a phone booth, and knelt down…crying. “Jaime!...Jaime!....” Steve shouted running toward her, having seen her with his new bionic eye, that tracked heat as well as saw in inferred and ultraviolet. Steve ran to her and knelt down next to her. “Jaime…sweetheart.” He placed his arms around her. “Steve…I...I...I’m sorry…I just don’t want to lose you…” She stated to him with all her heart. Steve held her. “I don’t want to lose you either sweetheart.” Jaime held him and cried. “I was so rude to Oscar…I...I need to apologize to him Steve.” Steve kissed her. “Oscar will understand sweetheart…he knows you didn’t mean it.” Steve and Jaime walked back through the rain to the hospital. Steve thought of what she said, could he give it all up, would they be allowed to if they wanted to one day and what of their girls Rose and Ann. “One day at a time sweetheart, that’s how we’ll take it…you and me and the girls together.” A few weeks later in DC, Oscar hung up the phone from talking with the new administrations OSI liaison when Callahan buzzed his office. “Yes Ms. Callahan.” “Mr. Goldman, you have visitors.” Callahan told him. “Well who are they?” Oscar asked in a slightly annoyed voice. “It’s Jaime and Steve.” She said. Oscar stood up. “Send them in please.” Steve stepped in first followed by Jaime. Oscar smiled and walked around to greet them both. “Steve, Jaime…what brings you to DC, and how are those twins huh?” Steve responded to him. “Oh they are fantastic, growing. My mom is watching them for a few days while we flew here to see you.” Jaime stepped up and hugged Oscar. “Oscar…I...I need to tell you...how sorry I am for what happened back at the hospital in Hawaii. I.” Oscar smiled at her and Steve. “Jaime, it’s forgotten and forgiven. After what happened it’s understandable.” Jaime smiled and hugged him once more. Steve patted Oscar’s shoulder. “Now what say I treat you both to lunch?” Oscar stated walking back to grab his coat. Steve opened the door for everyone. “What about all those pennies that need to be crunched?” Steve asked him as they started to leave. Oscar turned to Steve and Jaime. “Well Pal to use your words, they can bill me.” (End of Episode 11 season one) |
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| messyhead | Jun 23 2009, 09:12 PM Post #87 |
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Nice ending. Terrific first fan fic, J! |
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| callahan | Jun 23 2009, 09:12 PM Post #88 |
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Nice ending. Callahan |
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| bionic4ever | Jun 23 2009, 09:15 PM Post #89 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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A nice resolution all around. Love the closing line. |
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| johnfsg | Jun 24 2009, 06:01 AM Post #90 |
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Thanks to everyone. I wanted to end it with a picture of the Austin's being like everyone else. Not perfect, and with their own emotional up's and down's like all of us have. If I broke the cannon, sorry. I see Steve sometimes as being the.."Yes sir" man..sometimes, and now he has to adjust and realize that there is more on the line then just him. That maybe his "devil may care" days, have to end or at least slow down a bit. Also I wanted to show Jaime as (I am a guy so if I got it wrong..sorry ahead of time) a mother now, not just an OSI agent, Teacher etc. Who has worries not just about the normal couple things, but also the fear several of my married female friends have "what would I do if?" Two I think of in particular, who are married to cops. Lastly I wanted to show that Oscar is not just a paper pusher but he is deep friends with them both. Well will be working up episode 12 soon. |
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