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Topic Started: Jun 13 2009, 03:17 PM (1,185 Views)
bionic4ever
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Aug 24 2009, 07:14 PM
*Headesk* *Headdesk* *Headdesk*

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Maybe Oscar could be morally wounded saving Jaime or the Austin kids.
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That was what happened in version one.
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Version 2 had him dying peacefully at his desk. That didn't work either.
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Why should Oscar die, even peacefully ? Can't he live longer ? :(

"So you see, my friends, it is just a matter of opinion, it is between you and me, whether I am real or not, is for you to decide, each of you in your own mind and heart. (Guy Williams aka El Zorro)
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Nov 29 2009, 10:18 AM
Version 2 had him dying peacefully at his desk. That didn't work either.

Version one of WHAT???
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Nov 29 2009, 02:38 PM
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Nov 29 2009, 10:18 AM
Version 2 had him dying peacefully at his desk.  That didn't work either.

Version one of WHAT???

of the section I pulled. It was the section where Oscar died. And yes, Oscar has to die, since he was spoken of in the first few chapters as waiting for Jaime. He will aide in her transition to the next plane of existence.
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May be I'm too late because Legacy Chapter Q2 version 3 is already on his way but you may use the way bad people tried to convince Steve Austin that Oscar was dead in episode "Just a matter of time" : exhausted by too much work he had a car crash. I've also already read something like that in some fan-fiction.

Or if you want to be in continuity with some fanfiction (but I don't remember if it was one of yours) and make him save Hannah's life without making Jaime at the origin of his die (like in Q2-1); I remember a fan fiction where he save Jaime and Steve child by covering her by his body during an attempt (which aim isn't specially bionic peoples) but of course, like Q2-1 it will still be a little bloody.

Hey, my last line gave me an idea : and why not make him a heroe from the 11/09/2001 attempts?

If you need that I search in which fan-fictions I remember the first and second situation, let me know, I will search.

Hoping that I've been understandable because I wrote directly on keyboard without making a draft before.

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Edited by Bionika, Sep 10 2011, 03:15 PM.
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Bionika, thank you so much! You have given me a great idea! (Version 3 isn't written yet because I am trying to push the 1st two versions entirely out of my head before I start.)
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Your welcome. We (I) support you for writing.

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I am still working on Q2-version 3. It is completely different from either of the two pulled versions, requiring a totally different mind-set. Will hopefully have something for you tomorrow.
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Ever abandon a story for awhile and then try to go back to it....?
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Oh, yes! That last one I published had been sitting around for WELL over a year!!!
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Was it hard to get it jump-started again? I mean, I like Summer and know exactly where I'm intending to go with it, but it has stalled. My muse is quite stubborn...
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It WAS hard - that's why it took me so long - I didn't know where to GO with it. I get sick of looking at stories sometimes. It's disheartening when I don't know how to say what I want to say.
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