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Topic Started: May 29 2010, 04:44 PM (5,458 Views)
Bionika
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bjd Thank you very much Beth, it was exactly what I was searching for.
And with the link I have in addition all the vocabulary and thecnical information for using it correctly in the story. (I have began to wrote the paragraph but with the baby bagging rate...but my patient isn't a baby...I would say that it's because the bagger is inexperienced... ;) but thank to you, the character will have a speed training and it will be corrected. )

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Edited by Bionika, Jan 5 2013, 02:54 AM.
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"I need some time to have a life of my own also. That may mean marriage, children - I don't know. But it does mean some work that I feel good about: teaching, helping kids, something positive, because, you see, I experience the OSI as negative activity. It's fending off disaster, it's survival time, and I must have some things in my life that give me perspective, so that my work for you will mean something. Now, if that seems unreasonable, I'm sorry, but that's how I feel. "

These sentences are quotes from the end of "on the run" when Jaime is with Oscar in Parr's office.
I need the sentences just before these ones when she says something about smoothies assigments and "push a button and Jaime blow".
Does anyone know them?

I've watched again and again this part of the episode but I'm not able to "catch" them correctly.

Thank in advance.

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Jaime: "I'm coming back to work. I've found a way to be at peace with my bionics by accepting that I have no choice. The alternatives are totally unacceptable. I have no objections to taking assignments but with some very strict conditions."

Oscar: "You can write your own ticket."

Jaime: "Now, you hear me out before you say that because it's not going to be smooth sailing anymore. It's not going to be 'blow the whistle and Jaime jumps'."

Renshaw: "Please go on."

Jaime: "I need some time to have a life of my own also. That may mean marriage, children...I don't know..."

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Beth, you're fantastic, it's wonderful!

Thank you very, very , very much.
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By the way, I wonder how are you (and people posting quotes in bionic wiki) are doing?
==> listening and listening again the episodes in order to find the words?
==> use episodes with subtitles?
==> do you have some scripts?
?>< huh?!??

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For me, just listening.
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Wow!

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Hello

This time I need your help not for writting a part of a story but for improving my grammar for general posts. I noticed that I probably use too much "that" because I translate word for word.

What are the correct sentences :
I noticed that I probably use too much that / I notices, I probably use too much that
I hope that the sequel would not be too bad / I hope sequel would not be too bad

Thank in advance for your help.

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Bionika
Apr 1 2013, 03:40 PM
Hello

This time I need your help not for writting a part of a story but for improving my grammar for general posts. I noticed that I probably use too much "that" because I translate word for word.

What are the correct sentences :
I noticed that I probably use too much that / I notices, I probably use too much that
I hope that the sequel would not be too bad / I hope sequel would not be too bad

Thank in advance for your help.

Bionika
Hello Bionika,

Correct sentence 1:

I noticed that I probably use too much that. <--- In spoken English we know what you mean, but the phrasing is awkward.

But this sentence is correct and works better:
I noticed that I probably use the word "that" too much. <--- This sentence has the meaning you are going for, but is less awkward. I put "" around the actual word so as to highlight. When using English, We say and write "I notice", and "he or she notices" and this is in present tense.

2nd sentence:

I hope that the sequel would not be too bad.
(Here you need an article "the", in this sentence)

I hope you understand and it is what you were looking for- cheers!


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Yes, thank you very much LuvNvrNds. :D

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In a next story I'm writing now, I would lke to have Rudy doing flyfishing.
In wich part/area of The United States could he do that?

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Upper Michigan would be a good choice. So would Wisconsin. You could also use Maine or Vermont.
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Thank Beth. I'll let Rudy choose between these four locations.

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Apr 6 2013, 03:04 PM
I'll let Rudy choose between these four locations.

Well, may be I won't let him choose because I've heard that hitch-hikking is forbiden in some states. (is it the case in one of these States? ).
And also laws about carrying a gun could be different from one State to another? (is it forbiden in one of these States too? )

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Hitch-hiking definitely against the law, but was very common in the 70's and the police really didn't enforce the law. A gun can be carried if the person carrying it has a valid permit.
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