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Major, MAJOR Error!
Topic Started: Apr 13 2013, 10:19 PM (257 Views)
bionic4ever
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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Tonight, I was loading chapters of Web of the Spider onto fanfiction.net, looking at each one as I went (like I always do) and discovered a huge, MAJOR error in the plotline for the season. The biggest mistake I've ever made. In Web, Steve insists to several people (as well as thinking to himself) that he never slept with Anja. He also told Jaime the same thing. This is a grievous error, in terms of continuity! So I had to almost completely re-write one chapter (it was chapter 5, if you're curious) and edit several others so that in Web, Steve now has some things from his time in the Soviet Union that he just doesn't talk about. And when talking with Jaime about it, now I've had him tell her he had "a relationship of sorts" with Anja. Jaime figures out it was while she was with Michael, blurts out that she remembers that time...and asks no questions about Anja. (The subject then switches to the return of her memory instead.) So Steve doesn't admit it to her...but he doesn't lie to her, either.

I apologize sincerely for any confusion this has caused the readers!
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bionic4ever
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And MORE errors and more edits in 20 and 28. I like it better this way; not knowing for sure whether he did or didn't (sleep with Anja, that is) through the entire story. But I apologize so, SO much to the readers for any confusion this caused.
Edited by bionic4ever, Apr 14 2013, 03:12 PM.
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bionic4ever
Apr 14 2013, 02:55 PM
But I apologize so, SO much to the readers for any confusion this caused.
Don't be sorry Beth.
If no one of your readers had made comments about it, it means we hadn't noticed it..till you tell us today.

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