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| bionic4ever | Sep 2 2013, 07:25 PM Post #1 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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So...I made a boo-boo n Oscar's Dilemma. A rather big one. I had the story taking in place (in my head) in Washington...with the appearance of Callahan and especially with Jaime in an OSI apartment and packing to go home! *HEADDESK!* The Jailing of Jaime took place in California!!! SO...I had just finished writing Chapter 5, with Oscar escorting Jaime to the plane that would take her back to Ojai. Scrapped that entirely. Have to write a new Chapter 5. Also went into Chapter 4 and re-worked it, deleting and re-writing a major chunk of Jaime's section. SIGH... |
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| Bionika | Sep 3 2013, 03:46 PM Post #2 |
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So it would be Oscar who would take the plane... I've just seen that you have posted chapter 5, i'm rushing to verify my hypothesis. Bionika |
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| bionic4ever | Sep 3 2013, 03:52 PM Post #3 |
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Nope; I didn't do it that way because while it seemed natural for Oscar to escort Jaime to her flight, Jaime would not have done the same in the reverse situation. |
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| Bionika | Sep 3 2013, 03:56 PM Post #4 |
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Yes I've read May be if you don't want to write again too much you could have Russ working early instead of Peggy Callahan and nearly catching Jaime and Oscar in the act? Bionika |
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May be if you don't want to write again too much you could have Russ working early instead of Peggy Callahan and nearly catching Jaime and Oscar in the act? 
8:35 AM Jul 11