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| PineappleAngel | Oct 3 2013, 08:33 PM Post #1 |
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Hi everybody!! For those of you who know what my project is...it's finally ready!! I'm finally truly underway with my story! Thanks goes completely to everybody in Bionic Fans, for their help and support in my venture, and my e-buddy, pineapplegirl123! So, background, this story is based on the SMDM episode, "Dr. Wells is Missing" and involves a LOT of Steve "whump" (or...injury to character?) The first part of the story, which will be 10 chapters, will only be involving SMDM, and then, it will cross to the Bionic Woman, as Jamie will be called in...I definitely plan on having some Steve-Jamie stuff...it'll get a bit, A/U, as I'll probably bring back her memory or something so that they can be together... I'm a sucker for Steve in love...just to be clear, It'll probably show in my descriptions of Steve....but I am completely, 100%, most-assuradely, in love with the young Lee Majors!! sigh...I'd die for Heath or Steve... Now...on to my story... Chapter 1: Leavin’ On a Jet Plane “Boy Steve, do I envy you…” Oscar muttered. He sighed heavily, as he signed the forms on his desk. “And you, too, Rudy! Both of you going up to Aspen for a holiday...nice and calm…no guns going off or bomb threats…just the mountains, the crisp, clean air, and the snow.” “Oh come now, Oscar, you know we aren’t going to Colorado on a simple pleasure trip!! We are going because Steve is experiencing several odd black-outs in his bionics, and I believe that if I don’t get a proper, surgical adjustment in, then it could get serious!” Rudy protested to his superior, while cracking a hidden, winking smile to Steve. “Well of course I don’t want Steve hurt, but why go to the la in Aspen? Why not your lab here in D.C? And why are you going up a week early, and staying for nearly a month afterwards!?” Oscar groaned, angrily. “Steve needs time to rest and prepare, beforehand, and depending on how extensive the problems are, he may need a great deal of rest and recovery time, after.” Rudy turned to look Oscar in the eye. “And besides, Oscar, you’re coming up next week! You won’t be missing anything!!” Steve walked across the OSI director’s office and came to sit on the corner of Goldman’s desk. “Yes but—all right…here’s all the necessary arrangements for you…you leave on a plane for Aspen in…5 hours. Your tickets are waiting at the airport. Have a nice trip, gentlemen.” Oscar reluctantly handed a packet of papers to Rudy, and the doctor and cyborg turned together to leave. “And Steve!!” Steve stopped in the doorway to see his friend. “Yeah?” “Take care of yourself, pal.” Oscar smiled. “You got it!” Steve gave a familiar half smile to his supervisor before heading out into the small lobby. After a few seconds of silent pondering, Oscar became suddenly aware of the shiny blue pen that read “NASA”, in his hand. Steve’s lucky pen!! Oscar had borrowed the pen, when he misplaced his own, and he’d forgotten to give it back to Steve! Oscar felt suddenly guilty. Ever since Steve had gone back to doing regular assignments for NASA he carried the pen with him, for luck, at all times, on or off the planet. Oscar and Steve had deemed it lucky as once they had been stranded on an island with many wild beasts, and they’d been cornered by some of them. Well as the beasts neared, Steve did everything he could to distract them, but the only thing that caught their attention was the shiny, blue and silver pen. He’d tossed it to them, and while they were fighting over it, the OSI agents made their escape. Later, Steve had wandered back to the site, and found the pen, undamaged in the sand. And ever since, he’d carried it with him. I can’t let him go to surgery without this!! Oscar thought, so he quickly stood and opened his solid wood door. He paused when he heard Steve talking in a nervous, fast-paced voice to his doctor. Oscar stopped to listen… “Rudy!? We ARE going to have some fun, right!? I mean not just bed rest for the surgery? We will get to enjoy the things that Oscar was mentioning, right? Ya know…The Mountains, the air, the snow…” Steve frantically looked at his smiling friend. “Oh Steve, don’t be silly! I wonder if they let you take skis on a plane…” Rudy pondered, grinning at his bionic associate. “Now that’s what I’m talking about!!” Steve smiled broadly and ushered Rudy through the glass door at the opposite side of the entry room. Oscar stepped from his doorway into view. “Oh, Steve?” “Oh!? Yeah, Oscar?” Steve stopped. “I heard that.” Oscar stared intently. “oh…well…yes you did…well don’t worry, I’ll get plenty of rest too!” Steve nervously tried to dodge Oscar’s parental glare. “Hey Steve!” Oscar’s quick phrase forced Steve to turn. “You forgot your lucky pen.” He tossed it gingerly, to Steve, who caught it with ease. “Have a nice time, pal.” Steve smiled and turned to go, but looked back. “I’ll see you next week….’pal’!” Steve joked, using Oscar’s nickname for himself. Steve’s charisma and charm in delivering the last line broke down all barriers, and all three men joined in a hearty laugh. Steve smiled, gave a small wink, with the ever-so-slight raise of his left eyebrow, and left, letting the glass door slowly thump to a close, behind him. END OF CHAPTER 1 |
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Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors.... | |
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| down30 | Oct 3 2013, 09:23 PM Post #2 |
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Great first chapter! So glad you have decided to share your story here on the board! Can't wait to see what happens in CO! I too am a sucker for a young LM! |
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| bionic4ever | Oct 3 2013, 09:45 PM Post #3 |
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I TALK TOO MUCH! LOL!
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LOVE this! You really have a flair for putting a picture into the readers' minds with such vivid characterizations. I'm so glad you've decided to post here and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! |
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| Rudywells1274 | Oct 3 2013, 09:52 PM Post #4 |
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Great start keep it coming |
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| Bionika | Oct 3 2013, 11:05 PM Post #5 |
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I like your depiction of Oscar's jealousy. Bionika |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 5 2013, 09:47 PM Post #6 |
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Thanks Everybody!! I've actually written already to chapter 10, so I'll be posting more soon!! In the next few days, probably!! Thanks again, and if anyone has any suggestions in my use of characters, or the plot of the story, please tell me! I'd like to produce the best story possible!!
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Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors.... | |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 6 2013, 01:53 PM Post #7 |
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Chapter 2: Literally Blinding Pains “Yes. Dr. Wells and Colonel Austin. Here is you’re reservation. Cabin 14. The best one we have. Two bedrooms, a living room, kitchen, and bathroom. Anything you need you can pick up at the store in cabin 2, over there.” The friendly hotel clerk smiled as she handed Steve a ring with two keys on it. “Have a pleasant stay, gentleman, and Colonel Austin? I hope you’re feeling better, soon!” The two gentlemen smiled, thanked the girl, and left, with Steve easily managing all of their luggage with his right hand. “Steve?” Rudy began as they crunched through the snow. “What do you suppose that ‘hope you get better’ nonsense was about?” “Oh…probably good ole Oscar, he probably told them that I would be recovering from surgery so don’t let me do anything exciting…or something...here it is…Cabin 14!” Steve tossed the keys to Rudy, who promptly unlocked the door, and they stepped in. The cabin was warm and the lot walls were excellent protection from the elements. “Steve, you go put down our things, I’m going to wash up and see if I can find something to eat!” Rudy shed his heavy coat and scarf. He walked into the bathroom, and turned on the tap water, in the sink. As Steve walked back towards a room, he felt a sudden, dull, throbbing pain near his bionic eye. Then, he gasped as the pain grew to an intense, literally blinding level, as Steve soon realized his eye had blacked out. He suddenly began feeling the same sensations in his arm and legs; a dull throb, then a sharp pain, the loss of use with the pain. Steve staggered in the doorway to the bedroom and sagged against the door frame. “Rudy!?” Steve moaned weakly. “Rudy!?” He nearly shouted this time as he felt his limbs quiver, and then collapse. His knees buckled and he tumbled forward. He grabbed onto the frame of the wooden bed, but as his arm gave out, he fell downwards, his head smacking against the foot rail, and he slipped into darkness. END OF CHAPTER 2 |
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| bionic4ever | Oct 6 2013, 02:10 PM Post #8 |
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Oh, how frightening! You've portrayed Steve's distress quite vividly here. Well done! |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 6 2013, 03:14 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks! I really love descriptive adjectives and deeply describing different scenes, especially when it has to do with injuries and action...especially with the characters I love!! (steve!!) I'm glad it's working!!
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| Bionika | Oct 6 2013, 03:16 PM Post #10 |
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Fortunately, Rudy isn't very far. Bionika |
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| Rudywells1274 | Oct 6 2013, 05:41 PM Post #11 |
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Hopefully Rudy isn't missing already you must hurry back!!! |
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| down30 | Oct 7 2013, 08:11 AM Post #12 |
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Wow! You took Steve out in a hurry! Great writing! |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 7 2013, 09:52 PM Post #13 |
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Oh...that's not all that there's gonna be...that's only the beginning...hee hee... Just wait! 3rd Chap is already written, I just have to type it...it's a bit longer, THAT is where it really gets interesting and where the action really kicks off. Truly, I've written through the end of Chapter 10, and the end of the first "Story" or "part" in the "Dr. Wells is Missing...Again" series...it's probably going to be 2 or 3 "stories" the first here, going for 10 chapters, centered on SMDM, then the 2nd one probably shorter, centered on BW, then the last segment kind of a crossover mix in a medium length...Just saying...it's good...
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Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors.... | |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 12 2013, 11:40 AM Post #14 |
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AN: Hey bionic fans and other members! Ok...so sorry that I haven't gotten this up in a week or so ...I've had a busy week, and this chapter is REALLY REALLY long, and it's taking quite a while to type...this is actually the first part of the 3rd chapter...I'll get the rest up soon, maybe later today..but I wanted to post this before y'all got all mad at me!! Now..We left Steve falling..."slipping into darkness..." Chapter 3: A Frantic Examination “Steve?” Rudy poked his head out of the bathroom and called to his friend when he heard the shout and sudden crash. “Steve!?” He grew panicked by the utter silence. He turned off the water and wiped his hands on a nearby rag. “Steve? You alright?” Dr. Wells called again, with a hint of fear, lacing his voice. He slowly followed the wet footprints to the bedroom, where he gawped at what he saw. Steve was laying in the ground, obviously unconscious, with bags cluttered on top of him, and his head awkwardly bent against the bed. “Steve!” Rudy made quick work of all of the bags and anxiously plunge his fingers into Steve’s neck. He was happily confronted with a strong pulse; it was a bit fast, Rudy later thought, but at least it was there. He carefully ran his hand over Steve’s left arm and up to his head, checking for anything he may have broken. He stopped when his hand reached the back of Steve’s head, where a thin trickle of blood covered his hand in a moist, warm red. Rudy grabbed a small sheet from a nearby shelf and ripped it into strips, which he carefully wrapped around Steve’s head. He then carefully tried to wake Steve, to determine how he had collapsed. “Steve!?” He gently slapped at Steve’s face. “Steve!?” His efforts were rewarded with a weak moan from his patient. “Rudy? Hurts…everywhere…can’t …move…” Steve whimpered, still not quite completely conscious. “Steve? What’s the matter? What’s wrong/ What happened?” Rudy placed a hand on his right shoulder. Steve groaned in pain and tried to pull away, but couldn’t get his arm to cooperate. This sudden realization caused him to jolt awake. “Rudy! I can’t move ‘em! My legs! My Arm!! I can’t even see out of my eye!!” Steve frantically tried to lash out, and grab onto something familiar, but as his eye and arm were not functioning he had poor coordination and his left arm fell clumsily to the ground. “Steve! Steve! I need you to concentrate for me, alright?” Dr. Wells grabbed onto Steve and forced him to calm. “Alright now, this is worse than the previous blackouts, yes? Alright…now…was there a slow dull pain, then weakness, then extreme pain, then uselessness? Can you still feel your bionic parts?” Steve nodded slowly to each question. “Now Steve, I need to test some things, so I’m going to take your bionic hand and place it on my arm, and when I tell you to, I want you to try your hardest to life even one finger and tap my arm, alright?” Steve nodded, again, and stared intently at his bionic hand, now resting on Rudy’s arm. He grunted and grit his teeth together as he fought the pain of the severe blackout. Rudy eyed his friend and the effort Steve was putting in to this “simple” task. Beads of sweat dampened Steve’s forehead. He bit his lip so hard, that a slow trickle of blood dripped down to his chin. Slowly, Steve raised hi pointer finger and gently let it down again. He repeated the action several times with each finger as the feeling and movement gradually came back into his hand and the pain slowly subsided. He carefully turned his feet on his ankles and blinked several times. Rudy smiled when Steve seemed more relaxed. “Everything getting better?” “Well…all except my eye…it’s all pretty blurry…” Steve blinked hard and tried to focus on Rudy’s face but was held back by a wave of pain throughout his skull. Rudy instructed Steve to lean back and be still while he examined his head. “Probably a slight concussion…” “Rudy?” Steve looked up at his, now standing, friend and physician. “What’s wrong with me? Why is this happening!?” “Phase Two….” Rudy grumbled. “What? What’s ‘phase two’?” Steve anxiously wondered. “Look Steve, I’m not going to lie to you anymore. You are very sick…” “Is something wrong with my bionics? Am I rejecting them like Jamie? Why didn’t you tell me!?!” Steve attempted to stand, but after he began to wobble, Rudy eased him onto the bed. “Yes, something is wrong involving your bionics; in a way, your body is rejecting them; and I didn’t tell you because, well…for one thing, I wasn’t sure….and I didn’t feel the need to concern you, or Oscar about a problem that…well…shouldn’t have been a problem, as long as I was getting you up here to the lab..” “Rudy. You didn’t answer my first question: WHAT is PHASE TWO!!?” Steve angrily punched the pillow with his left hand. “Alright Steve, I’ll explain everything. You have some sort of disease that is being emitted into your body by your bionics. This “disease”, I believe, has 3 main phases, each time increasing in severity. You see, our bionics after a period of time, are releasing some unfamiliar toxins, and these are slowly causing extreme damage to your bionics, and even your whole body. When this toxin spreads, it causes the phases of damage…each time getting much more severe as the content of the toxin in your body increases. Now I can’t be entirely sure on anything, Steve, as this only happens cyborgs…and you ARE the first one…but from my theorizing and experiments… “You’ve already been through phase 1. In my recollection, during Phase 1, there are minor black-outs of your bionics, lasting a few seconds. And there is also definite weakness leading up t, and following these attacks. A small dull pain sets in, from your bionic parts…Now this IS highly unusual, as they are NOT human, the pieces shouldn’t be subject to pain….but I guess there are definite qualities and flaws that even I have not figured out… “Now Phase 2? I believe you are in that now…the blackouts grow more intense; filled with more pain, more weakness and lasting for several minutes, rather than seconds. Now, this is when it’s getting very serious…we need to get you up to the hospital and rush the operations…before…” “Before what, Rudy? And you said that there are 3 Phases? What is it Rudy!? What is Phase 3!?” Steve looked at him desperately with a definite look of fear and shock on his face. “Steve…let’s not worry about that now…if we get you to my clinic now, then there won’t be a Phase 3 to worry about…” Rudy tried to dodge the questions, but Steve wasn’t buying it. He sat up, rigidly, and grabbed Rudy’s maroon sweater firmly with both hands. “RUDY!? WHAT IS PHASE 3!?” ---------Intermission-------- to be continued.... |
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| down30 | Oct 12 2013, 12:12 PM Post #15 |
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Great chapter and I can't wait for the rest of it. I don't think phase 3 is something Steve wants to know about or find out more about. |
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Thanks goes completely to everybody in Bionic Fans, for their help and support in my venture, and my e-buddy, pineapplegirl123! So, background, this story is based on the SMDM episode, "Dr. Wells is Missing" and involves a LOT of Steve "whump" (or...injury to character?) The first part of the story, which will be 10 chapters, will only be involving SMDM, and then, it will cross to the Bionic Woman, as Jamie will be called in...I definitely plan on having some Steve-Jamie stuff...it'll get a bit, A/U, as I'll probably bring back her memory or something so that they can be together... I'm a sucker for Steve in love...just to be clear, It'll probably show in my descriptions of Steve....but I am completely, 100%, most-assuradely, in love with the young Lee Majors!! sigh...I'd die for Heath or Steve...









Just wait! 3rd Chap is already written, I just have to type it...it's a bit longer, THAT is where it really gets interesting and where the action really kicks off. Truly, I've written through the end of Chapter 10, and the end of the first "Story" or "part" in the "Dr. Wells is Missing...Again" series...it's probably going to be 2 or 3 "stories" the first here, going for 10 chapters, centered on SMDM, then the 2nd one probably shorter, centered on BW, then the last segment kind of a crossover mix in a medium length...
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