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| Dr. Wells is Missing...Again - Part One - complete | |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 3 2013, 08:33 PM Post #1 |
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Hi everybody!! For those of you who know what my project is...it's finally ready!! I'm finally truly underway with my story! Thanks goes completely to everybody in Bionic Fans, for their help and support in my venture, and my e-buddy, pineapplegirl123! So, background, this story is based on the SMDM episode, "Dr. Wells is Missing" and involves a LOT of Steve "whump" (or...injury to character?) The first part of the story, which will be 10 chapters, will only be involving SMDM, and then, it will cross to the Bionic Woman, as Jamie will be called in...I definitely plan on having some Steve-Jamie stuff...it'll get a bit, A/U, as I'll probably bring back her memory or something so that they can be together... I'm a sucker for Steve in love...just to be clear, It'll probably show in my descriptions of Steve....but I am completely, 100%, most-assuradely, in love with the young Lee Majors!! sigh...I'd die for Heath or Steve... Now...on to my story... Chapter 1: Leavin’ On a Jet Plane “Boy Steve, do I envy you…” Oscar muttered. He sighed heavily, as he signed the forms on his desk. “And you, too, Rudy! Both of you going up to Aspen for a holiday...nice and calm…no guns going off or bomb threats…just the mountains, the crisp, clean air, and the snow.” “Oh come now, Oscar, you know we aren’t going to Colorado on a simple pleasure trip!! We are going because Steve is experiencing several odd black-outs in his bionics, and I believe that if I don’t get a proper, surgical adjustment in, then it could get serious!” Rudy protested to his superior, while cracking a hidden, winking smile to Steve. “Well of course I don’t want Steve hurt, but why go to the la in Aspen? Why not your lab here in D.C? And why are you going up a week early, and staying for nearly a month afterwards!?” Oscar groaned, angrily. “Steve needs time to rest and prepare, beforehand, and depending on how extensive the problems are, he may need a great deal of rest and recovery time, after.” Rudy turned to look Oscar in the eye. “And besides, Oscar, you’re coming up next week! You won’t be missing anything!!” Steve walked across the OSI director’s office and came to sit on the corner of Goldman’s desk. “Yes but—all right…here’s all the necessary arrangements for you…you leave on a plane for Aspen in…5 hours. Your tickets are waiting at the airport. Have a nice trip, gentlemen.” Oscar reluctantly handed a packet of papers to Rudy, and the doctor and cyborg turned together to leave. “And Steve!!” Steve stopped in the doorway to see his friend. “Yeah?” “Take care of yourself, pal.” Oscar smiled. “You got it!” Steve gave a familiar half smile to his supervisor before heading out into the small lobby. After a few seconds of silent pondering, Oscar became suddenly aware of the shiny blue pen that read “NASA”, in his hand. Steve’s lucky pen!! Oscar had borrowed the pen, when he misplaced his own, and he’d forgotten to give it back to Steve! Oscar felt suddenly guilty. Ever since Steve had gone back to doing regular assignments for NASA he carried the pen with him, for luck, at all times, on or off the planet. Oscar and Steve had deemed it lucky as once they had been stranded on an island with many wild beasts, and they’d been cornered by some of them. Well as the beasts neared, Steve did everything he could to distract them, but the only thing that caught their attention was the shiny, blue and silver pen. He’d tossed it to them, and while they were fighting over it, the OSI agents made their escape. Later, Steve had wandered back to the site, and found the pen, undamaged in the sand. And ever since, he’d carried it with him. I can’t let him go to surgery without this!! Oscar thought, so he quickly stood and opened his solid wood door. He paused when he heard Steve talking in a nervous, fast-paced voice to his doctor. Oscar stopped to listen… “Rudy!? We ARE going to have some fun, right!? I mean not just bed rest for the surgery? We will get to enjoy the things that Oscar was mentioning, right? Ya know…The Mountains, the air, the snow…” Steve frantically looked at his smiling friend. “Oh Steve, don’t be silly! I wonder if they let you take skis on a plane…” Rudy pondered, grinning at his bionic associate. “Now that’s what I’m talking about!!” Steve smiled broadly and ushered Rudy through the glass door at the opposite side of the entry room. Oscar stepped from his doorway into view. “Oh, Steve?” “Oh!? Yeah, Oscar?” Steve stopped. “I heard that.” Oscar stared intently. “oh…well…yes you did…well don’t worry, I’ll get plenty of rest too!” Steve nervously tried to dodge Oscar’s parental glare. “Hey Steve!” Oscar’s quick phrase forced Steve to turn. “You forgot your lucky pen.” He tossed it gingerly, to Steve, who caught it with ease. “Have a nice time, pal.” Steve smiled and turned to go, but looked back. “I’ll see you next week….’pal’!” Steve joked, using Oscar’s nickname for himself. Steve’s charisma and charm in delivering the last line broke down all barriers, and all three men joined in a hearty laugh. Steve smiled, gave a small wink, with the ever-so-slight raise of his left eyebrow, and left, letting the glass door slowly thump to a close, behind him. END OF CHAPTER 1 |
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Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors.... | |
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| Rudywells1274 | Oct 12 2013, 06:21 PM Post #31 |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 12 2013, 06:33 PM Post #32 |
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Ah....I know of that one! I'll *most likely* watch it!! |
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| down30 | Oct 12 2013, 08:34 PM Post #33 |
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Really like that you are using characters from the original episode. I agree with RW they are evil and didn't need to reappear in your reboot! |
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| Bionika | Oct 13 2013, 03:17 PM Post #34 |
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"What do you think Rudy will do next?!" I like a lot how you ended this chapter, hailing the readers. So, what will Rudy do next? Call Oscar and go to his former lab would be sensible but I'm not sure that he would not hurry to the lab without telling anybody about what is happening. Bionika |
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| Bionika | Oct 13 2013, 03:36 PM Post #35 |
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Sorry, I didn't want to bother you PinneappleAngel. It's fanfiction and it's your imagination which is the boss. Carry on, the story is very riveting. Bionika |
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| Bionika | Oct 13 2013, 03:38 PM Post #36 |
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Perhaps Bionic4ever has already told you : you can correct yourself your posts with the button "edit"which is on the left bottom of your posts. Bionika Edited by Bionika, Oct 13 2013, 03:39 PM.
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| Bionika | Oct 13 2013, 03:45 PM Post #37 |
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If you want to get rid of typo mistakes, you can type the story in "word" (so you could use the spellchecker) and then copy and paste in this thread. Then the layout is a little bit different but you can use the "edit button" for correcting it. Bionika |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 13 2013, 03:51 PM Post #38 |
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Oh! No bother...I thought about the "Max Situation" myself when re-reading my writings...In these past chapters, and those to come, it becomes clear that Rudy only knows a mild amount of what really occurs in Steve's "attacks" and There is some *SPOILER ALERT!!!* incorrect info given, in regards to what Rudy thinks will happen!! GASP!! That's all I'll give off for now...next chap's gonna be a little dull...giving more explanations about Steve's "disease" and what's really going on...then in Chapter's 6-10...the action runs high!! And word of warning...most all chapters end in a mild/moderate cliffhanger...
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 13 2013, 04:50 PM Post #39 |
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AN: Hello bionic-loving friends!! I'm back again with the 5th Chapter of our story... We left off with Rudy holding the bloody card from "A.T" ....and now... Chapter 5: Rudy Makes a Call WASHINGTON D.C…… Oscar stared blankly at the message in his hands. A wave of fear rushed over him when he heard the phone ring, just as he was reaching for it. He hesitated, then snatched up the receiver. “Oscar Goldman…Rudy?” “Yes, Oscar…I need to spe-“ Rudy fidgeted nervously with cord to the phone. Oscar cut him off. “Rudy! We’ve got trouble. I just received word that the Tucelli’s and their gang escaped from prison. They’ll be coming after you…and Steve…” “Oscar! I know the Tucelli’s are out! Oscar…I think they have Steve. I’m going out to meet them….I’ll try to contact you but…Oscar you’d better come quick…” “On no…Steve!! I’ll be down on the first plane I can get out of here…don’t worry Rudy, We’ll get Steve out!” “Oscar, you haven’t heard the worst of the situation yet…” “There’s more!? What’s the matter Rudy? What’s going on?” “It’s Steve...he’s very sick, Oscar. It’s a vicious disease that’s causing a drastic infection to his entire body from chemicals leaking out of the bionics.” “DISEASE!? Leaking?!” Oscar gasped. “Rudy! You said that it was just a few small malfunctions! “Nothing serious”, you said! How could you miss something like that!?” “I-I wasn’t sure…only after it was too late…no reason to worry you and Steve over nothing...” “Rudy, what’s wrong with Steve? How bad is it?” “It’s very serious, Oscar. You know of these blackouts he’s been having? Well now every time they are getting progressively worse. Every episode leaves him weaker and in more pain. Soon, he’ll have a massive attack; the strongest of any other combined. It will start with a massive wave of weakness, leaving him so drained that he will collapse. Then will come the pain. Excruciating pain. Unimaginable pain. Pain so great, it could kill. If Steve could take the pain, then he’d at least be knocked unconscious. When he woke…Oh…Oscar…it’s simply terrible...” “RUDY!? What’s after the attack!?” Oscar pleaded with him. “After the attack, the pain will stay and his body will literally start shutting down. Initially all of the bionics will be completely unresponsive; dead weight. He couldn’t even be able to feel that the limbs were there, other than the pain… Slowly the other parts of him, human parts, will begin to shut down. His arm, even the organs and body process will he come labored and they to will shut down. Eventually, he would fall into a coma. He would be completely free of pain then, but unless he was transported to a hospital immediately, he would never wake. When in the state of unconsciousness, his remaining parts would shut down; his heart, brain. He would die silently, just minutes after falling into unconsciousness. Oscar you’ve got to get up here immediately, with help!! We can’t let Steve die like that, or at the hands of Tucelli! We’ve got to get him back!” “Don’t worry, Rudy.” Oscar began. “We’ll get Steve out of there and he’s going to be alright. I’ll be up there in a matter of hours. And Rudy! Don’t do anything rash! Don’t give in to what they ask you. They can’t risk hurting Steve if they need to use him… I’ll see you soon, Rudy…Bye...” “All right, Oscar, but I’m not promising anything…” After Oscar hung up the phone, he dropped his head into his hands and mumble sadly to himself, “Don’t worry Pal…The cavalry is coming…hang on…” END OF CHAPTER 5 AN: Now what!? Will Rudy stay put as Oscar ordered, or will the agent in Rudy take over, and send him on a vigilante search to save his friend!? Or Maybe a little bit of both?! Well....we'll just have to wait and see now wont we!? |
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| bionic4ever | Oct 13 2013, 04:59 PM Post #40 |
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| Rudywells1274 | Oct 13 2013, 07:09 PM Post #41 |
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And I'm supposed to go to sleep on that note...shame on you...great chap I'll stay tuned through this hopefully commercial break |
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| down30 | Oct 13 2013, 08:03 PM Post #42 |
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I hope Oscar gets there in a hurry and gets agents on the hunt for Steve! |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 13 2013, 08:13 PM Post #43 |
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I"ll try to get the next chapter up later tonight...well My time anyway...it's already 10 here, but I dunno about where y'all live! I'll be up really late, since there's no school tomorrow...if not, I'll get it up 'round noon tomorrow! Then I'll try for 1 or 2 more tomorrow!! I know...I cant sleep on cliffhangers...but just warning...most all of the chapters will end on cliffys...and the end of part 1? Will have a terribly awful cliffhanger....Even I don't know what's going to happen!! I'm stuck on starting to write part 2.... I've got a general plan...even the cliff-ending for the end of part 2...just I don't know where to begin...oh well...I'll be working dutifully on it!! thanks again, everybody for reading and enjoying the story...It means a great deal to me...a person in my place, age, and well..position in life...in my generation, liking the things I do, has a hard time sharing the things I love!(*NOTE: I am a highschool-aged girl, much younger than most bionic fans*) And now I get to! I greatly appreciate it!! thanks guys! I'll try not to disappoint with the rest of the story!!
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Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors.... | |
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| PineappleAngel | Oct 13 2013, 09:24 PM Post #44 |
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AN: Hey friends! I'm back!! I spent about an hour on it, and typed up Chapter 6! I MIGHT get 7 up withing a few hours, but I might just put it up tomorrow...that'd be what...like 3 chapters today? Yeah..I'll probably wait till tomorrow... Now...we left Rudy unsure of what to do in terms of finding Steve.... Chapter 6: The Creator Comes Rudy quietly closed the door of the rented sedan and crept up the wooded hill, behind his old clinic. It was eerie being back at his first lab, as Rudy hadn’t been back here since he had first made the breakthrough in bionics. After he had officially been placed on the OSI payroll to further develop and experiment with bionics, he had been given a new facility, with a new lab and a new hospital. The hospital was located only a few miles up the road. The lab and special classified bionic wing of the building were hidden in a heavily guarded area of the busy hospital. It was odd, for Rudy to discover that the Tucellis had found out that this had been where it all began. It had been completely hushed that this had been his first lab, and he hadn’t even been allowed to come back, after telling Oscar of his discovery. Rudy looked down from his hidden perch, on the hill, at the men in valley below. The Tucellis, Yamo, and several new faces stood, guarding Steve, who stood, with his hands restrained behind him. Steve glanced around and quickly spotted Rudy, hiding, with his bionic eye. Unfortunately, Alfredo caught his glance. “Dr. Wells!? Dr. Wells, I know you’re out there! I know Steve here saw you! Where is he Steve? Where’s your master? Is he hiding in the tree? In those bushes perhaps?” Tucelli brought his face close to that of his captive. “No one is MY master, Tucelli! NO ONE!!” Steve spat towards the man who wanted to make him his newest minion. “Tucelli glared and gave a quick nod to the 2 large men who stood on either side of Steve. Behind him, Yamo tightly held his arms together. The two men simultaneously jabbed their fists into Steve’s stomach. Then, they took turns swinging into his face and chest, until he sunk to his knees, coughing and gasping for air. Why doesn’t he break free!? Why doesn’t he fight back!? Rudy thought in a panic. “Dr. Wells? You may be wondering why our bionic hero doesn’t seem to be trying to escape… well; his life depends on not breaking the handcuffs that bind his wrists. You see, I’ve attached a vial of poison that will be immediately injected into his human hand, if by any means the handcuffs are forced open, or opened in the wrong way. And if I get angry, I may just have Yamo break the cuffs….On the topic of “fighting back”…Is our dear bionic wonder boy not feeling well, Dr. Wells? He didn’t seem to fight back like we all know he can when Yamo cut hi with the knife…Oh don’t worry…we didn’t cut him to badly, just enough to draw a little blood on the chin. Oh come now Rudy, you’ve got to come out sometime…alright...if you insist to stay I’ll just have to persuade you!!” He quickly nodded to the large captors, and they both drove their booted feet into Steve’s chest in a pair of powerful kicks. Steve flopped and groaned a bit, then fell forward again, on his knees and they repeated in a vicious cycle. Over and Over again. Their kicks stopped when Steve lay still, on his front, moaning and gasping for air. Rudy gasped and rose, slightly, anxiously debating whether or not he should show himself or not. He uncertainly peered out, seeing his friend lying sputtering in the grass and snow. Alfredo was growing very angry at Rudy for not showing himself, so he glared toward his brother, and Yamo. “Break the cuffs!!” He spit out the words, sentencing Steve to his death, if Rudy didn’t come. “Dr. Wells? I home you’re happy. The cuffs are being broken, and in seconds poison will be spreading through Mr. Austin’s veins. THAT did it. Rudy leaped out of the bushes and bolted down the hill, shouting, “NO! Don’t! Don’t kill him!!” Rudy yelled until he was halfway down the hill, and saw that Yamo and Julio had stepped away from Steve’s bloody, battered frame. It seemed as though the problem of Steve being more injured had passed…until he looked up, shocked, at Rudy and moaned loudly. “Rudy?! My arm! Eye….legs...they’re doing it again! RUDY?!” Steve gasped as his bionic parts tried to fight of another wave of pain and weakness, and as hey were restrained, the parts began fighting for rest. He looked up, terrified, at Rudy who watched in shock as the bionic parts began to seize. (AN: *Seize* as in having a seizure…some sources say it’s a word…others do not…now…back to our show!!) His legs jerked around frantically, and his arm was vibrating wildly. Steve and Rudy hit the same realization simultaneously. Rudy again began to run down the hill. Steve looked up at the men, and begged, “Quick! Hold my arm own! I’ll break the lock! Please!?” the men were terrified at Steve’s jerky body and slowly baked away. “NO! Grab his arm! He’ll break the cu-“ Rudy yelled as he came upon them. He dived towards Steve grasping for his arm….But it was too late. Steve’s arm yanked at the handcuffs, setting off the mechanism. Rudy watched in horror as the green poison quickly flowed into Steve’s wrist. Steve quit seizing and fell back, exhausted in Rudy’s arms. Steve’s head jerked around, trying to fight off the beckoning blackness, but he couldn’t fight it. He looked up at Rudy and his eyes rolled back. With a gasp, his head rolled back, dangling across Rudy’s arm. “Steve!? Steve!?” Rudy begged at his friend. But he got no response. Steve laid, in Rudy’s arms, completely enveloped in a dark, deep sleep. END OF CHAPTER 6 AN: So...the term "seizing" was meant to mean like "having a seizure"...I've heard it used that way before, but the dictionary doesn't seem to think that' s real word...hmm.... oh well!! |
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| Bionika | Oct 13 2013, 11:10 PM Post #45 |
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"we'll just have to wait and see now wont we!?" Public holidays are a graet thing! Iwon't have to wait for chapter 6. Thank for this quick posting, PinneappleAngel. Bionika |
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Thanks goes completely to everybody in Bionic Fans, for their help and support in my venture, and my e-buddy, pineapplegirl123! So, background, this story is based on the SMDM episode, "Dr. Wells is Missing" and involves a LOT of Steve "whump" (or...injury to character?) The first part of the story, which will be 10 chapters, will only be involving SMDM, and then, it will cross to the Bionic Woman, as Jamie will be called in...I definitely plan on having some Steve-Jamie stuff...it'll get a bit, A/U, as I'll probably bring back her memory or something so that they can be together... I'm a sucker for Steve in love...just to be clear, It'll probably show in my descriptions of Steve....but I am completely, 100%, most-assuradely, in love with the young Lee Majors!! sigh...I'd die for Heath or Steve...




oh well... after that one, it's all action!!

...i'd guess I'd explain it off as that Maybe it only happens with the "Human Cyborgs"
incorrect info given, in regards to what Rudy thinks will happen!! GASP!!




thanks guys! I'll try not to disappoint with the rest of the story!!
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