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Dr. Wells is Missing...Again - part 3 - complete
Topic Started: Nov 13 2013, 06:08 PM (696 Views)
PineappleAngel
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Quick author's note...I'm SO SORRY for not getting this up as I had hoped...i've had several time-consuming conflicts and issues these past few days and I haven't any free time to write/type...but here it is, chapter 1 of Part 3! **PLEASE!! If you haven't done So... PLEASE respond to my poll/question in the Writer's Room, under "My Next Story.." or on my "schooltime" discussion, if you're a member! If you are a guest, follow my instructions on the page ("my next story"), about how to give me your response, via review on Fanfiction.net. I REALLY need input!! thanks!** Here it is...short, but finally here... Part 3 of "Dr. Wells is Missing...Again" now continued on The Six Million Dollar Man and the Bionic Woman!

Dr. Wells is Missing…Again (Part 3)
A Six Million Dollar Man-Bionic Woman crossover
By: PineappleAngel

Chapter 1: Flatline


Jaime Sommers could not believe her ears when she picked up on the noise inside the doors of the ER….

“We’re losing him!”

“Rudy! Pulse falling off!”

“Come on Steve!! Hang on!” Jaime heard Rudy shouting at Steve.

All she could think was He loves me!? She continued reasoning… maybe that’s why it’s always been awkward between us! That’s why he was so hurt when I didn’t know him! And although she couldn’t sort it out, Jaime knew that somewhere she loved him too. That was why she was so terrified by the sound to come…

BEEP…..BEEEEEEP…………..

FLATLINE!? “NO!” Jaime screamed at the horror-filled sound of her former love’s heart stopping. “NO! Steve!?” She screamed and cried upon hearing the sound, and lashed out with a mighty punch to a nearby wall.

“Jaime!?”

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Jaime had wandered off, while Oscar was filling out various security forms, and he was growing worried.

He hurried through many hallways, until he heard a scream from the operating area of the ER. He ran until he was her, screaming, clutching her head in her arms, now kneeling against the wall.

“Jaime!?” Oscar ran to her, and kneeling beside her, he pulled her into a comforting hug. “Babe? What’s the matter? Are you alright? What happened?”

“S-steve…” Jaime whimpered, burying her face in Oscar’s suit coat.

“What about Steve, honey?”

“I…. I heard…” She sobbed.

Oscar forced her to focus and turned her face to look him in the eyes. “What, Jaime? What did you hear?”

“One doctor shouted, “we’re losing him!” and then Rudy was pleading with Steve, and then someone yelled that his pulse was falling off, and then after a few more shouts…all I could hear was that one awful sound…”

“What!? What sound, Jaime!?” Oscar pleaded, tears shining in his own eyes.

“Flatline.”

<END OF CHAPTER 1>


Edited by PineappleAngel, Nov 13 2013, 06:36 PM.
Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors....
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Oh no! Not now! Hurry and work a miracle Rudy!
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SO sad...and cleverly reminiscent of the time Steve lost Jaime. More when you're able, please!
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Nov 13 2013, 06:54 PM
SO sad...and cleverly reminiscent of the time Steve lost Jaime. More when you're able, please!
Will Comply! I finished chapter 2 today (writing by hand) after a long world history test! It's a couple pages handwritten...not too long...I might get it up tonight! So...how was my representation of Jaime? 'cause honestly, I've never watched an episode of BW, and this is my first attempt at a Jaime-centered chapter! did it work ok?
Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors....
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I think you did a good job with Jaime. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Chapter 2: Triumph or Tragedy?



2 hours had gone by since Jaime had heard the flatline. Oscar was convinced that it meant that Steve was not dead. Now, they sat in the hard plastic hairs in the waiting room, silently awaiting news on their injured comrade.

Finally, tired and exhausted, Rudy trudged out of the OR into the waiting room. His green scrubs were splattered with blood, and dark circles lined his eyes. The days of captivity had taken their toll on the doctor, and he was ready to collapse. “Jaime? Oscar?”

“Rudy!? Steve? Is he…” Oscar began.

“He’s alive….for now…I’ll tell you Oscar…he was gone there for a second…he’s barely alive…his heart, breathing, and countless other thins are being powered solely by machines…We also have him hooked up to special devices that are filtering his blood and removing all of the toxin that leaked; or as much as we can get out, anyway…”

Jaime suddenly spoke up, “He’s alive? Steve’s really alive?”

Rudy looked at her, puzzled and sat down next to her. “Yes, honey. Steve is alive! Why would you think otherwise?”

“I…I heard the flatline…most awful sound I’ve ever heard! That simple sound….right then, it meant the difference between lie and death for Steve. It signaled that his heart had stopped and his body was turning off, shutting down. His body was dead, then! And all I could think of…Oscar!? Why didn’t you tell me!?”

Oscar looked at her, puzzled. “Tell you what, Babe?”

“That…that he loves me!!” Oscar and Rudy shared a panicked glance. “Before I broke the glass he whispered, to you Rudy, that he loved me! And now I know, but he’s probably going to die!” Jaime sobbed.

Rudy laid a hand on her arm. “Oh, Jaime…I’m so sorry you had to hear that…like that…Yes. Steve loves you. He always has….It was…before the accident…before we knew you….when you didn’t remember Steve, we decided that it would be safer to let you remember it yourself…I’m sorry…but in regards to Steve? Jaime, we can’t say that he’s going to die! He’s pretty bad off…but we’ve got to have faith that he’s got the strength to pull through.”

“How is he, really, Rudy? Tell us the extent of his injuries…what happened?” Oscar nodded to him.

“Well…the toxin has taken quite a toll on his body. The damage to his body, and his bionics is quite extensive. I can’t be sure what he’ll be able to waork still… or what damage will be irreparable. In the extent of his human injuries: obviously, there are countless cuts and bruises, most will heal, though a few may leave scars. Then, the bullet wound; it was very serious and there were a few cracked and broken bones in that area…they’ll heal in time. Also, he has many cracked and broken ribs from the awful lashing they gave him. He’s also got a pretty bad concussion…I won’t lie to you: Steve has acquired multiple severe injuries, and it’s going to take a long while, but he’s going to be just fine, Jaime, just fine.”

In a teary sigh, Jaime gave a tiny smile as Oscar wrapped a comforting arm around her shoulders.

“Can we see him, Rudy?” Oscar eagerly awaited an answer.

“Well….yes, in a few minutes. We’re moving him from the OR to a special room…but be prepared: It’s not pretty. We have him on so many monitors and machines that you may not really be able to tell he’s alive. He has so many injuries, that nearly every space of skin is covered in some sort of bandage or cast. You can see him, sit with him, if you’d like, but he won’t be waking up for a while, or at least he shouldn’t be. We’ve been considering electro-sleep for him to heal…but with the extent of his injuries, and the instability of his heart, now, the risks may be too great.”

In a few minutes, the group walked through the secret secure corridors of the hospital, until they got to Steve’s room.

“First, we can only let one visitor in, at a time…” Rudy prompted one of them to respond.

“I’ll go first.” Oscar nodded firmly and rested his hand on the door handle.

END OF CHAPTER 2
Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors....
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PineappleAngel
Nov 13 2013, 06:58 PM
did it work ok?
Yes it works very well.
It is very vivid.

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And thank for the improvement of the presentation.
Reading is very pleasant for me now.

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yide Rudy.

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“First, we can only let one visitor in, at a time…”

I'm not sure that Jaime could handle the sight of Steve you are going to depict alone. (even Oscar may be schocked).

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Poor Steve, you have put him in a really bad place.I think your muse has been working overtime on how to hurt Steve. Great job writing Jaime's reaction to finding out Steve loves her. I hope Oscar is prepared to see Steve in such bad shape!
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Spoiler: the next chapter (though I haven't written it yet...) is going to called "One-Sided Conversation"
Sitting in front of the TV, watching an old rerun of The Big Valley, eating a Heath bar, while wearing a pair of sturdy Lee Jeans, a NASA baseball cap, and a "Colt's" hoodie; all while a paperback copy of "Cyborg" lays nearby...ah...the perfect image of a true fangirl of the great Lee Majors....
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Poor Steve! At least Jaime can be with him...and she knows.
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Nov 14 2013, 11:07 AM
Poor Steve! At least Jaime can be with him...and she knows.
Soon right Beth
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Your change of picture in your signature doesn't soung good for Steve!

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