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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 04:00 AM Post #1 |
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Jaypaw knew she shouldn't be this far from camp but for some reason her body dragged her all the way the the border that separated Riverclan and Thunderclan and herself being a Thunderclanner she couldn't swim so she was wise enough to keep her distance. She sat down before the river and watched as some of the little fishes swim by, but then she noticed her reflection and smiled and image in the water mirroring her moves. She briefly wondered what the water felt like, was it warm, cold or both or even how it felt to be surrounded by water. Jawpaw stepped forward and reached her paw down as far as she could to put it in the water she now knew was cool, not to cold yet not warm either. She moved her paw around, swirling it in different directions to create ripples in the water around her. A smile lit her face and just as she was about to take her paw out out of the river she heard a loud bang and the next thing she knew she was falling into the water, she had got scared by the noise and stumbled over her paws and into the water and instantly water filled her mouth and nose making her senses all clogged up and also have a burning sensation. "Help m-me, Pl-e-ese" she stuttered as she chocked on water and it that moment Jaypaw knew she was going to die as her weak small body made its way underneath the surface and start to sink with her lashing around her scared. |
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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 04:45 AM Post #11 |
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Jaypaw followed the cat towards the shallow part of the river. She has nervous as she slowly put her left paw into the cool water and got flashbacks of herself falling into the water, calling for help and choking on the water. She stepped like a bolt of lightning as if the water had burned her like acid Jaypaw realized she was being silly and both of her paws in and took a step forward and continued to do that taking small steps so she wouldn't slip as her claws couldn't grasp anything firmly. |
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| TornShimmer | Jul 23 2013, 04:49 AM Post #12 |
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Ashpaw watched her from the bank. Suddenly he leapt into the water downstream from her, making it so he blocked her way if he lost her footing and got swept away by the current. He'd catch her. He smiled at her. "Jaypaw..." he began. "If you want... I could teach you how to swim," he said eagerly, speaking quickly so maybe he wouldn't get embarrassed. "Or at least get you less scared of the water." his gaze, trained on her, was hopeful. "I actually... Want to see you again, too," he confessed, his pelt growing warmer. |
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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 04:56 AM Post #13 |
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"Sure I'd love that Ashpaw" she said as her legs started to shake a little as the currents got a little stronger and put more pressure on her paws. But along with Ashpaw her pelt got a little red by his last comment wait wait wait...Am I blushing? Do I have a crush oh him...' she thought confusingly before giving a small smile that was soon wiped off her face as she indeed lost her footing as the currents got a little stronger and became to much for her little form and she fell 'oh please catch me' she thought |
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| TornShimmer | Jul 23 2013, 04:59 AM Post #14 |
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Ashpaw broke into a full smile as she replied. Then she fell and was crashing into him. Amazingly enough, he caught her and remained upright, his broad shoulders strong enough to hold them both against the current. He grabbed her scruff again and pulled her to her side of the river and put her there, panting but grinning. "I'll see you tomorrow then," he purred and leapt gracefully back across the river, pushing himself with his strong muscles through the tough currents and lifting his feet high in the shallows. |
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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 05:02 AM Post #15 |
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Jaypaw seemed to look something like a drowned mouse as she looked at Ashpaw to back to Riverclan "Show off" she muttered under her breath but nodded at Ashpaw to tell him she would be here tomorrow. |
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| TornShimmer | Jul 23 2013, 05:03 AM Post #16 |
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{Timeskip?} |
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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 05:07 AM Post #17 |
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{yep...you post first as I did last time xD} |
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| TornShimmer | Jul 23 2013, 12:00 PM Post #18 |
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Ashpaw slipped out of camp and went down to the ThunderClan border. As long as he swam to get the scent off of him and brought home some food, he was okay. Everyone thought he was hunting. He decided to slip into the water just quickly while he was waiting for Jaypaw. He cut across the water in strong strokes, his sleek pelt glinting and smooth like fish scales as it slid through the river. |
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| The Trickster | Jul 23 2013, 12:20 PM Post #19 |
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Jaypaw was stalking through the forest but she had to stop and his behind one of the many trees as a patrol came near her before going back to camp, how they didn't small her she didn't know but she continued in and a small smile lit her face as she saw the river in her view. She started to jog closer before stopping four feet away from the edge to see the familiar form of a cat in the water "Ashpaw" she called loudly to get his attention. |
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| TornShimmer | Jul 23 2013, 02:54 PM Post #20 |
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Ashpaw turned his sleek grey head to see Jaypaw heading towards him. He swam to her side of the river and pulled himself out, water streaming from his pelt. He shook himself before he got close to her, then wandered toward her, still twitching his fur to get some more water out. "Hi," he said, grinning sheepishly. |
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