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Electrifying Love {Torn}
Topic Started: Jul 23 2013, 04:00 AM (426 Views)
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Jaypaw knew she shouldn't be this far from camp but for some reason her body dragged her all the way the the border that separated Riverclan and Thunderclan and herself being a Thunderclanner she couldn't swim so she was wise enough to keep her distance.

She sat down before the river and watched as some of the little fishes swim by, but then she noticed her reflection and smiled and image in the water mirroring her moves. She briefly wondered what the water felt like, was it warm, cold or both or even how it felt to be surrounded by water.

Jawpaw stepped forward and reached her paw down as far as she could to put it in the water she now knew was cool, not to cold yet not warm either. She moved her paw around, swirling it in different directions to create ripples in the water around her.

A smile lit her face and just as she was about to take her paw out out of the river she heard a loud bang and the next thing she knew she was falling into the water, she had got scared by the noise and stumbled over her paws and into the water and instantly water filled her mouth and nose making her senses all clogged up and also have a burning sensation.

"Help m-me, Pl-e-ese" she stuttered as she chocked on water and it that moment Jaypaw knew she was going to die as her weak small body made its way underneath the surface and start to sink with her lashing around her scared.
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The tall grey apprentice's broad shoulders dropped and he took a deep breath. "I'm not lying to you, Jaypaw." He shrugged and pointed a paw in her direction. "Why would I? I honestly kind of like you." Here he sat down and sighed heavily. "I wouldn't lie to you."
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Her faces started to heat up at his answer 'he likes me, what would he like me' she thought but shock her head to get rid of those thoughts sure she liked him back but she still didn't trust him about Whitepaw lying "Fine, if you know he's supposedly lying to me...What is it" she said.
Edited by The Trickster, Jul 26 2013, 01:29 AM.
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Ashpaw stared at her. "I can't tell you that." His pelt started to burn as he realized he'd admitted that he kind of liked her, and that he had dug himself into a hole. But he couldn't just tell her his secret. "I really can't."
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"Why not Ashpaw..." she whispered so low and in a tone of defeat that it sounding like a whimper coming from her throat
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The RiverClan apprentice sighed, looking at the younger she-cat. If I tell her, this could all be ruined, he thought. But she'll have to know at some point, and I don't want her finding out from anyone else. He closed his eyes briefly and tried to decide. Yes, no, yes, no...
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"Please tell me Ashpaw, please" she said softy, truly she wanted to know why Whitepaw would keep this from her and see if it was something that would be better for her not to know like he had said only the day before. "Please" she said leaning towards the grey Tom to whisper in his ear.
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The mottled grey tom flicked his tail and opened his eyes, growing irritated with himself. Tell her, if she truly loves you she'll come back, one side said, while the other spoke the opposite. Don't say it. Keep her with you, because if she knows, she'll leave you. Finally he drew a shuddering breath. "Jaypaw... Whitepaw is my brother," he said finally, staring straight into her eyes. "We're half-Clan... Yours and mine. My mother... She was from your Clan, and my father was from mine..." He swallowed nervously and laughed with no heart put into it. "They were killed by an ambitious cat, he discovered they cheated. But he never found Whitepaw and I. My parents hid us with a loner.
The loner snuck us back into the territories when we were four moons old. They had no idea where we'd gone. It had been two moons. The cat found the loner the next day and killed her after she wouldn't give our location.
Whitepaw got lost across the river, in your territory. I knew where he was..."
the tom winced. "I'd gone over with him. I was scared and ran back, and forgot to take him with me. He didn't know where I went and I... I didn't tell the Clan when I got home. I said I'd lost him."
The young tom lowered his head and stood, tears stinging his eyes as he finished his tale and began to walk away again into his territory.
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To say that Jaypaw wansnt stunned by the news would be an understatement, she was shocked beyond words but somehow as she watched her friend but also her best friend slash crushes brother who she had to adit she had feelings for, more so then Whitepaw if possible retreat back father into Riverclan territory "I can't believe he never told me" she murmured to herself before continuing while walking towards Ashpaw not wanting to give up "He mentioned you once, well only your name... That and that I should stay away from you. The the thing is, I don't want to" She now was right in front of him and went to go and nuzzle him.

{well decided to make it bigger because of your last post!}
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{Lol, yeah. I'm trying to keep up with my little mission... xD}

Ashpaw turned around and looked at her hopefully. "You don't want to stay away from me?" He asked in a small voice, perfectly aware that her nose was touching his fur. And not because he was saving her from drowning.
All of a sudden he smiled. "I don't want to stay away from you, either," he grinned, nosing her shoulder softly. He laughed quietly and purred.
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She only smiled at his answer before letting loose a loud purr and nuzzling into his surprising warm fur. "Good" she mumbled quietly before giving the cats grey chest a small lick before laying down on the ground and stretching her for legs out and rolling into her back kicking her paws up into the air, a sign that she indeed wanted to play around and her kit side was coming back at the moment
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