| The face I saw...; A short story about the big question. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 8 2014, 03:33 PM (83 Views) | |
| Kakoriko | Apr 8 2014, 03:33 PM Post #1 |
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"Who do you think this is an effigy of...?" The lady in red asked me this, almost as if she had made it for me. I could see the carvings, almost as if it was carefully crafted with one person in mind. But it couldn't be me. She didn't even know me... Did she? So I sat there, wondering if this could really be me. If this could really be my true self, staring back at me, in the form of an effigy. I took the carving from her hands; her warm, homely hands. It was a heat that felt familiar. A feint warmth, that for some reason resonated with my mind. The effigy that I now held before me carried this resonant flame-like warmth with it, and brought back so many memories... Or thoughts of memories. It felt like it was placing memories in my mind. Memories of a life that I didn't have... Or did I? Have I met her, before? I looked deeper into the small silhouette I held so tightly. It looked like someone I knew. I could almost even make out features... Clothes. A life. A family... A face... That face... The face I saw... It was so familiar... But... Could it, really..? "That's right. It's an effigy of you." (Saw there was nothing here, so I decided to put something here. Nothing exquisite, but feedback and critique would be nice. :3) |
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| Meowstic of the Dark | Apr 8 2014, 03:40 PM Post #2 |
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Gotta say, it's quite good for a one-shot. I should try to make a drawing of this scene actually (even though I suck at drawing) |
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| Kakoriko | Apr 8 2014, 03:53 PM Post #3 |
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I draw. I'll start one, and post a picture when it's done!
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| Meowstic of the Dark | Apr 8 2014, 04:01 PM Post #4 |
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Oh man, thanks ![]() Looking forward to it then! |
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| Lautrec of Carim | Apr 8 2014, 09:47 PM Post #5 |
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damn that was good |
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| Kakoriko | Apr 8 2014, 09:48 PM Post #6 |
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Thanks!
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| The Bonfire Watcher | Apr 13 2014, 12:51 PM Post #7 |
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I admire your imagery. Very well done. Please, keep it going! |
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I'll start one, and post a picture when it's done!


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