To help those who cannot help themselves. To punish those who make it their duty to hurt those who do not deserve it.
To be the person she fears to be.
With a very stoic personality, Max proves that she has been through the ringer one too many times. Although she doesn't mind taking up conversation with people, she tends to stick to herself. Max is different when it comes to interacting with people. If you're good, you'll be treated as such. If not, well, expect to be treated as you treat others. She isn't one to try and resolve a problem with words...
SKILLS
Hand to Hand Combat:
Max has a keen eye and quick reflexes that makes hand to hand combat easy. Six years of intense, special training in hand to hand combat.
Sword Specialist:
Able to wield a long sword with precision and skill. She can cut the clothes off of someone with a fencing sword without touching the skin of the individual wearing it.
Silver Tongue:
Max can get what she wants without swinging the sword. Note, however, she's not afraid to swing it.
POWERS
A telekinetic can manipulate matter with their mind. Telekinetic can control anything at a subatomic level.
Telekinesis:
Max can pick up objects using her mind. The limit to this is five times her own body weight (150 x 5). She can move objects in a 15 feet radius.
Telekinesis Regeneration:
To regenerate one's own cells via telekinetic manipulation, e.g. using telekinesis to induce molecular/biological manipulation. Max cannot use while in combat. Depending on the severity of the wound, it could take anywhere from five minutes to a full twenty-four hours to completely patch someone up.
I have looked over Max and have only one issue with her
Telekinesis has a very large utility application, including the ability to kill someone with the amount that she can lift, simply because she can grab hold of someone 30 meters away and hulk smash them into the ground like a rag doll. O_o
Using the Blanket Rues a starting character should have no more than a 5 meter radius around them (10 meter diameter) of instant kill potential.
If you able to pull in the range I see no problem with approving Max as a character.
I see this ability as a stepping stone and it can definitely be upgraded later.
Max has a keen eye and quick reflexes that makes hand to hand combat easy. Six years of intense, special training in hand to hand combat.
Sword Specialist:
Able to wield a long sword with precision and skill. She can cut the clothes off of someone with a fencing sword without touching the skin of the individual wearing it.
Silver Tongue:
Max can get what she wants without swinging the sword. Note, however, she's not afraid to swing it.
POWERS
A telekinetic can manipulate matter with their mind. Telekinetic can control anything at a subatomic level.
Telekinesis:
Max can pick up objects using her mind. The limit to this is five times her own body weight (150 x 5). She can move objects in a 15 feet radius.
Telekinesis Regeneration:
To regenerate one's own cells via telekinetic manipulation, e.g. using telekinesis to induce molecular/biological manipulation. Max cannot use while in combat. Depending on the severity of the wound, it could take anywhere from five minutes to a full twenty-four hours to completely patch someone up.