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Arian Lunazione; Finished
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Topic Started: Oct 19 2014, 07:30 AM (173 Views)
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Jiro
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Oct 19 2014, 07:30 AM
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The nice guy, you should fear
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Arian Lunazione
| Alignment | Gender | Age | Occupation | Residence | | True Neutral | Female | 19 | Mercenary | A small house in the forrest/Any in inside of Sanctum |
| Height | Weight | Build | Origins | Race | Eye | Hair | | 170cm | 70kg | Curvy | Primal | Human | Blue | Light Blue |
| Unique Features | Attire | | Her hair colour | either her witch clothes or a normal black top and a black skirt(reaches to her knees) |
| [tabs][tab=Witch cloths] [/tab][tab=Her magic Circle] [/tab][/tabs] |
| Likes | Dislikes | Hobbies | Aspirations | Fears | | Tea, cute animals, Money | Employer trying to trick her, useless/annoying people | gardening, reading | Making a lot of money, Learning more about magic | losing her house |
| On the outside she appears to be a nice and caring young woman but she is actually pretty self oriented. She cares nothing about the others. If you pay she works if you don't get lost. Even when being mean she does it with an rather nice smile. No body alive has ever seen her smile turn into anger. Because of her actually empathy free acting a nick name of her is the Ice witch, funny since she doesn't know any Ice spells. When acting she will always act the way it's best for herself not caring what happens to other people. Those that actually make it to be a real friend of her get a little thought when she makes decision but not that much either |
| SKILLS | | Wild knowledge: | Living in the forrest she knows about the wild live and the plants that can be eaten. Meaning surviving in the wild is no big deal for her
| | sewing | She is abel to make simple and more complex cloths.
| | Tracking | You can't live from plants alone.. or let's say you might not want to. Thats why she learned to track down animals or people in the forrest. Her tracking skill in town on the other hand is not excisting.
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| POWERS | Witches are magician that get there power from nature and the spirits living.
| Racial Traits: | As a witch of the forrest she is abel to call on the small spirits of the forrest and talk to them. This might tell her when people walk around in the forrest near her home or they help her with casting spells. In the town only live really few spirits there for she isn't as strong or fast there.
| | Forrest rage | She creats and magical circle infront of her and speaks the Incantation. This creats an big green ball of primal energy infront of her. She can either fire it completly or let it divide into smaller balls that fly towards the enemy. The longer she waits before sending the primal energy ball of the bigger it can get. The ball has an max flying range of 20 meter and explodes on contact, depending on the size the damage goes from bruises and scratches to destroy limbs or bodys(need to be human sized for that damage. Would take her 15 sec to creat a ball of this size. Isn't speed up by Maxwell ) Incantation: Spirits of the forrest, let me call upon your never ending rage and destroy those before me!
| | Forrest binding | A magical circle appears below the target. Out of the magical circle erupt 10 roots with small spikes and try to entangle the target and force it to the ground. These roots can be cut just like normal roots but since they entangle the targets arm and body it's rather hard to cut them yourself. Ripping them appart is really hard and something people would need inhuman strengh.(Withstands 600 pounds force, and trys to force to the ground with 300 pounds force). Last for 2 min. Incantation: I call upon the spirits that rule and judge. Bind the evil infront of me and bring down your judgement
| | Forrest Protection | An speel that lays an layer of magic around the target people. It protects them like an layer or iron. The magic absorbs most of the impact directed against it meaning an arm breacking slash will be blocked without the arm getting broken but it can't absorb all of it there for the arm will still be wounded but not brocken. The magical circle appears above the persont that get's this protection. She can only cast it on 2 people at the same time and the spell only last for 3 min or until something destroys it somewhere on the body. The spell follows the moving target.(Like a sword that is enchanted and abel to cut through iron will completly destoy the spell and not only the part it cuts through) Incantation: Help me spirits that protect the forrest. Follow my call and protect those in my favor!
| | Protection | She draws her magic circle on the floor and speaks the incanation. This causes the circle to glow and an green wave of light flys outwards. The effect is that as long as the circle isn't destroyed an area within 100meter radius get's protected from wildlife. It keeps all dangerous animal and monsters out of the affected region. Magical beast are abel of passing it.(Non combat spell) Incantation: I call upon all those kind spirits, ease this place and protect it, Spirits of the North, Spirits of the South, Spirits of the East and Spirits of the West, grand me my wish.
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| POSSESSIONS |
| Maxwell | The wand of hers. It's basically a normal wand made from wood but since it's wood from the forrest she lives in it helps her connect to the lower spirits of nature and therefore cast faster.
| | Witch clothes | Clothes made from cloth. The only special thing about it is that even through it's cloth it has the same durrability like leather.
| | Normal Cloths | A normal black top and a black skirt she wears in her free time.
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Edited by Jiro, Oct 24 2014, 03:23 PM.
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Faith
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Oct 19 2014, 10:19 AM
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___Would you serve in Heaven,___ or rule in Hell?
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I like the character a lot Jiro and I'm glad someone is tackling a Witch.
You may need to rethink her first ability though, as a Primal Origin she should not be able to cast Fire Spells. The character would need to have an Elemental Origin for that which would cancel out her other abilities. You could change the spell effect to 'Primal Energy' blast rather than fire. It just would not have 'fire effects' automatically attached to it.
You can combine multiple magic sources, but it is generally something that should be done with Milestones or the powers themselves need to be significantly weaker to accommodate for the high utility factor.
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Jiro
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Oct 19 2014, 10:42 AM
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The nice guy, you should fear
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thx^^ that was one thing I wasn't sure about when creating her and gave me quite and head ache^^ I will change the fire ball into Primal energy ball^^
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Faith
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Oct 19 2014, 07:05 PM
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___Would you serve in Heaven,___ or rule in Hell?
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We are almost done with Arian 
Just a couple more details:
Forest Rage needs a range on the ability, and some details about what it does if it hits someone. The range I would suggest on an ability like that would be 25 metres. After she shoots the primal energy balls, can she control where they go?
And just to clarify, is Protection only effective against natural wildlife? Would magical creatures, monsters and PCs be able to cross the circle?
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Jiro
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Oct 20 2014, 01:26 AM
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Forrest rages going to have an 20meter range, the effect will be that it explodes on contact. Depending on the size it will either be small one that leaves bruises and light burning to much larger one that can destroy wall or limbs. She can aim before sending it flying no controle afterwards.
Well as wildlife I meant everything living naturally in the Forrest that also means monsters or magical beast. But Pc were supposed to be abel to cross...... So new definition: only animals and monsters are forbidden, magical beasts can pass. And if somebody actually wants to rp as an normal puma or stuff then he can't pass.
Edited it^^
Edited by Jiro, Oct 20 2014, 01:37 AM.
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Cent
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Oct 20 2014, 03:24 AM
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Hi Jiro, Arian looks really good. That being said I have two questions lol
Forrest rage, to be honest I think you can bring the maximum cast time from this ability to 15 seconds (usually three combat rounds). My only stipulation would be that Maxwell cannot speed up this ability XD
Protection, you have not listed if this ability follows the characters when they move or if it’s stationary. Is it a bubble or wraps around the person like physical armour would?
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Oct 20 2014, 04:34 AM
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- Oct 19 2014, 07:30 AM
| SKILLS | | Wild knowledge: | Living in the forrest she knows about the wild live and the plants that can be eaten. Meaning surviving in the wild is no big deal for her
| | sewing | She is abel to make simple and more complex cloths.
| | Tracking | You can't live from plants alone.. or let's say you might not want to. Thats why she learned to track down animals or people in the forrest. Her tracking skill in town on the other hand is not excisting.
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| POWERS | Witches are magician that get there power from nature and the spirits living.
| Racial Traits: | As a witch of the forrest she is abel to call on the small spirits of the forrest and talk to them. This might tell her when people walk around in the forrest near her home or they help her with casting spells. In the town only live really few spirits there for she isn't as strong or fast there.
| | Forrest rage | She creats and magical circle infront of her and speaks the Incantation. This creats an big green ball of primal energy infront of her. She can either fire it completly or let it divide into smaller balls that fly towards the enemy. The longer she waits before sending the primal energy ball of the bigger it can get. The ball has an max flying range of 20 meter and explodes on contact, depending on the size the damage goes from bruises and scratches to destroy limbs or bodys(need to be human sized for that damage. Would take her 15 sec to creat a ball of this size. Isn't speed up by Maxwell ) Incantation: Spirits of the forrest, let me call upon your never ending rage and destroy those before me!
| | Forrest binding | A magical circle appears below the target. Out of the magical circle erupt 10 roots with small spikes and try to entangle the target and force it to the ground. These roots can be cut just like normal roots but since they entangle the targets arm and body it's rather hard to cut them yourself. Ripping them appart is really hard and something people would need inhuman strengh.(Withstands 600 pounds force, and trys to force to the ground with 300 pounds force). Last for 2 min. Incantation: I call upon the spirits that rule and judge. Bind the evil infront of me and bring down your judgement
| | Forrest Protection | An speel that lays an layer of magic around the target people. It protects them like an layer or iron. The magic absorbs most of the impact directed against it meaning an arm breacking slash will be blocked without the arm getting broken but it can't absorb all of it there for the arm will still be wounded but not brocken. The magical circle appears above the persont that get's this protection. She can only cast it on 2 people at the same time and the spell only last for 3 min or until something destroys it somewhere on the body. The spell follows the moving target.(Like a sword that is enchanted and abel to cut through iron will completly destoy the spell and not only the part it cuts through) Incantation: Help me spirits that protect the forrest. Follow my call and protect those in my favor!
| | Protection | She draws her magic circle on the floor and speaks the incanation. This causes the circle to glow and an green wave of light flys outwards. The effect is that as long as the circle isn't destroyed an area within 100meter radius get's protected from wildlife. It keeps all dangerous animal and monsters out of the affected region. Magical beast are abel of passing it.(Non combat spell) Incantation: I call upon all those kind spirits, ease this place and protect it, Spirits of the North, Spirits of the South, Spirits of the East and Spirits of the West, grand me my wish.
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| POSSESSIONS |
| Maxwell | The wand of hers. It's basically a normal wand made from wood but since it's wood from the forrest she lives in it helps her connect to the lower spirits of nature and therefore cast faster.
| | Witch clothes | Clothes made from cloth. The only special thing about it is that even through it's cloth it has the same durrability like leather.
| | Normal Cloths | A normal black top and a black skirt she wears in her free time.
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