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Abbygail; Vampire
Topic Started: Oct 29 2014, 03:28 PM (163 Views)
Luna
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Abbygail

Alignment: NE
Gender: Female
Age: 160
Occupation: Thief / Bounty hunter
Residence: Cottage in Eden


APPEARANCE

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Height: 180cm
Weight: 75kg
Build: Athletic
Origins: Undead
Race: Vampire
Eye Colour: grey
Hair Colour: brown
Unique Features: non
Attire: Iron and leader armor; lots of beautiful dresses


PERSONALITY

Likes: Blood, red whine, men
Dislikes: Sunlight
Hobbies: Hunting people for drinking blood, drink whine, flirting with men
Aspirations: To live forever
Fears: Sunlight, fire, divined things


SKILLS

Poison: Knows how to make poisons
Close Combat: Expert in dagger combat
Long Range Combat: Expert in crossbow combat with poison



POWERS


Near Imortal body: Doesn't age, can't get sick, Will heal all kind of wounds ouside of a battle in 4 second(small scratch) to 4 weeks(cut of limb). You can only kill her with divine abilitys, fire, the sunlight or a served of head. Divine abilitys and fire will deal heavy damage to her and create wounds that take severely longer to heal.

Bat transformation: She is able to transform into a bat which allows her to be in sunlight for an hour. 30 min in the sunlight before she gets any wounds after that she goes through the normal sun burn process of all vampires it only get's slowed down to another 30 min before dead.

No Mirror reflection: Doesn't have a mirror reflection but still has a water reflection.

Blood Dependency: The Vampire is dependent upon blood for their very survival. Required to feed every week to ensure they do not become too weak. Larger quantities of blood are required to fuel their regeneration abilities. If starved, their body will weaken and begin to desiccate. While unable to die from starvation, they will slip into something similar to a coma. 24 hours before falling into a coma she becomes a wild and blood lusting being similiar to a nosferatu. She will attack anyone and anything to get the blood she needs.

Child of the Night: The moment the Vampire is exposed to direct sunlight their skin will begin to burn, from sunburn to third degree burns within a few seconds. Spontaneous combustion and death would occur within a minute of full exposure. Cloud cover can prolong this time frame depending on the density of the clouds. To make matters worse, they are severely weakened during the daylight hours, even when in doors. At all times the Vampire is extremely vulnerable to all forms of fire and divine abilities.


POSSESSIONS

A coffin
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Dagger
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Crossbow
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Many Dresses like
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A Cottage in Eden
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RELATIONSHIPS

Mikoto- An damphyr she met some night in a bar when they went for the same prey one day. The two talked alot but since then haven't met anymore.


THREAD TRACKER

Meeting of Undead, Dark Persuasion
Edited by Luna, Nov 12 2014, 05:44 PM.
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North
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Endure & Survive.
Let us know when this character is ready for review, Luna!
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Luna
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finished with this character :)
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North
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Your character, as is, is relatively unbalanced. We have a detailed guide for creating supernatural characters that deals with vampires, you should take a look at it to get a good baseline.

http://veilsedge.com/topic/10404581/1/?x=90#new
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Luna
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Is it better now?
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___Would you serve in Heaven,___ or rule in Hell?
As a base character, Abbygail currently still has too many things going on.
 
Vampiric Body: The physical attributes the character has without any substantial weaknesses to balance them out leaves very little room for additional abilities.

Insight: is a very potent ability and would take up most of a characters room to balance. Abilities like this also need to have a (with OOC approval) from any other member she attempts to use it on because of the godmodding effects inherent to mind controlling abilities. An ability like this should cost a Milestone on top of everything else she has.

Immortal Body: has some issues attached to it. Any healing which can occur within a matter of seconds is considered combat effective and will cost the character another Milestone. As a side note, saying that a character is vulnerable to divine abilities, fire and sunlight is different to saying they are the ONLY things which can kill the character. It makes the power very strong and again, there is not a lot of balancing room in the character.

Bat Transformation: This is another high utility ability which negates the one weakness the character has. This ability also gives the character flight which we consider to be a significant in power balancing.

Weaknesses are given to characters so they are able to balance more things into their powers. For a weakness to be considered relevant, the character should not have a way of avoiding it or starving off the effects. Within the Supernatural Character Creation Guide North linked, the ability ‘Child of the Night’ outlines all the weaknesses of that particular kind of Vampire.

A Vampire can be whatever you would like them to be, and the Guide is only intended as a Guide. But complex characters like Vampires need a lot of explaining. Your vampire does not need to have the same weaknesses, but they do need to be power balanced within themselves.

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Changed the abilitys and erased some. No more Insight or strenghed body, Immortal Body was weakened and I slightly changed the Blood Dependency.
I hope it's more balanced this way.
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SKILLS

Poison: Knows how to make poisons
Close Combat: Expert in dagger combat
Long Range Combat: Expert in crossbow combat with poison



POWERS


Near Imortal body: Doesn't age, can't get sick, Will heal all kind of wounds ouside of a battle in 4 second(small scratch) to 4 weeks(cut of limb). You can only kill her with divine abilitys, fire, the sunlight or a served of head. Divine abilitys and fire will deal heavy damage to her and create wounds that take severely longer to heal.

Bat transformation: She is able to transform into a bat which allows her to be in sunlight for an hour. 30 min in the sunlight before she gets any wounds after that she goes through the normal sun burn process of all vampires it only get's slowed down to another 30 min before dead.

No Mirror reflection: Doesn't have a mirror reflection but still has a water reflection.

Blood Dependency: The Vampire is dependent upon blood for their very survival. Required to feed every week to ensure they do not become too weak. Larger quantities of blood are required to fuel their regeneration abilities. If starved, their body will weaken and begin to desiccate. While unable to die from starvation, they will slip into something similar to a coma. 24 hours before falling into a coma she becomes a wild and blood lusting being similiar to a nosferatu. She will attack anyone and anything to get the blood she needs.

Child of the Night: The moment the Vampire is exposed to direct sunlight their skin will begin to burn, from sunburn to third degree burns within a few seconds. Spontaneous combustion and death would occur within a minute of full exposure. Cloud cover can prolong this time frame depending on the density of the clouds. To make matters worse, they are severely weakened during the daylight hours, even when in doors. At all times the Vampire is extremely vulnerable to all forms of fire and divine abilities.


POSSESSIONS

A coffin
Spoiler: click to toggle


Dagger
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Crossbow
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Many Dresses like
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A Cottage in Eden
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