| Abbygail; Vampire | |
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| Luna | Oct 29 2014, 03:28 PM Post #1 |
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Abbygail Alignment: NE Gender: Female Age: 160 Occupation: Thief / Bounty hunter Residence: Cottage in Eden APPEARANCE ![]() Height: 180cm Weight: 75kg Build: Athletic Origins: Undead Race: Vampire Eye Colour: grey Hair Colour: brown Unique Features: non Attire: Iron and leader armor; lots of beautiful dresses PERSONALITY Likes: Blood, red whine, men Dislikes: Sunlight Hobbies: Hunting people for drinking blood, drink whine, flirting with men Aspirations: To live forever Fears: Sunlight, fire, divined things SKILLS Poison: Knows how to make poisons Close Combat: Expert in dagger combat Long Range Combat: Expert in crossbow combat with poison POWERS Near Imortal body: Doesn't age, can't get sick, Will heal all kind of wounds ouside of a battle in 4 second(small scratch) to 4 weeks(cut of limb). You can only kill her with divine abilitys, fire, the sunlight or a served of head. Divine abilitys and fire will deal heavy damage to her and create wounds that take severely longer to heal. Bat transformation: She is able to transform into a bat which allows her to be in sunlight for an hour. 30 min in the sunlight before she gets any wounds after that she goes through the normal sun burn process of all vampires it only get's slowed down to another 30 min before dead. No Mirror reflection: Doesn't have a mirror reflection but still has a water reflection. Blood Dependency: The Vampire is dependent upon blood for their very survival. Required to feed every week to ensure they do not become too weak. Larger quantities of blood are required to fuel their regeneration abilities. If starved, their body will weaken and begin to desiccate. While unable to die from starvation, they will slip into something similar to a coma. 24 hours before falling into a coma she becomes a wild and blood lusting being similiar to a nosferatu. She will attack anyone and anything to get the blood she needs. Child of the Night: The moment the Vampire is exposed to direct sunlight their skin will begin to burn, from sunburn to third degree burns within a few seconds. Spontaneous combustion and death would occur within a minute of full exposure. Cloud cover can prolong this time frame depending on the density of the clouds. To make matters worse, they are severely weakened during the daylight hours, even when in doors. At all times the Vampire is extremely vulnerable to all forms of fire and divine abilities. POSSESSIONS A coffin Spoiler: click to toggle Dagger Spoiler: click to toggle Crossbow Spoiler: click to toggle Many Dresses like Spoiler: click to toggle A Cottage in Eden Spoiler: click to toggle RELATIONSHIPS Mikoto- An damphyr she met some night in a bar when they went for the same prey one day. The two talked alot but since then haven't met anymore. THREAD TRACKER Meeting of Undead, Dark Persuasion Edited by Luna, Nov 12 2014, 05:44 PM.
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| North | Oct 29 2014, 05:20 PM Post #2 |
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Endure & Survive.
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Let us know when this character is ready for review, Luna! |
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| Luna | Oct 29 2014, 05:40 PM Post #3 |
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finished with this character
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| North | Oct 29 2014, 05:54 PM Post #4 |
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Endure & Survive.
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Your character, as is, is relatively unbalanced. We have a detailed guide for creating supernatural characters that deals with vampires, you should take a look at it to get a good baseline. http://veilsedge.com/topic/10404581/1/?x=90#new |
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| Luna | Oct 29 2014, 06:22 PM Post #5 |
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Is it better now? |
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| Faith | Oct 29 2014, 07:07 PM Post #6 |
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___Would you serve in Heaven,___ or rule in Hell?
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As a base character, Abbygail currently still has too many things going on.
Weaknesses are given to characters so they are able to balance more things into their powers. For a weakness to be considered relevant, the character should not have a way of avoiding it or starving off the effects. Within the Supernatural Character Creation Guide North linked, the ability ‘Child of the Night’ outlines all the weaknesses of that particular kind of Vampire. A Vampire can be whatever you would like them to be, and the Guide is only intended as a Guide. But complex characters like Vampires need a lot of explaining. Your vampire does not need to have the same weaknesses, but they do need to be power balanced within themselves. |
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| Luna | Oct 29 2014, 07:49 PM Post #7 |
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Changed the abilitys and erased some. No more Insight or strenghed body, Immortal Body was weakened and I slightly changed the Blood Dependency. I hope it's more balanced this way. |
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| North | Oct 29 2014, 10:45 PM Post #8 |
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Endure & Survive.
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Approved. |
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