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Topic Started: May 25 2012, 01:23 AM (484 Views)
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May 25 2012, 01:23 AM
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We are hosting a Bio Contest, anyone can enter. We have no official ending date yet.
Rules:
1. You can do any creature that you can RP on this sight. 2. You may make up a new character for this. 3. They may be as detailed and long as you like. 4. Please do not try to bribe/ask to win. 5. Keep them PG level. 6. Have fun and be creative.
Judging
You will be judged in three areas, each getting a out of ten mark. For a final score of /30 if you wish to know your score please PM me.
Creativity: The more unique and creative your character is the better.
Interest: Make your character interesting, so interesting history and description that makes us want to here more.
Drama: The more drama the better, make me laugh, cry, be happy what ever.
Prizes
1st: 1 Free Starclan Contact and 250 pebbles. 2nd: 1 Free Starclan Contact and 150 pebbles. 3rd: 1 Free Starclan Contact and 75 pebbles.
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May 25 2012, 12:11 PM
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This is Fluff in a new form <3
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I'm going to stickie this. ^^
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May 26 2012, 04:13 PM
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Goldenwish Rank : Warrior Gender : She-cat Alliance : OceanClan Appearance Goldenwish is a beautiful golden she-cat with a white glint to her fur and blue eyes. She has large, white teeth and claws, and a long tail that always used to whack her littermates in the face. She has ears that turn pink every time she gets embarrased, and have pretty good hearing, as well. Her fur is well-groomed, and it sticks down even after she goes swimming. She has long, uneven whiskers and a cute pink nose that she originally had as a kit. Personality Goldenwish is a kind of bipolar cat. When she is in her happy mood, she is always cheerful, skippy and glad for everything, including her snappy father, who is an elder. In her angry mood, she snaps at everybody, growls, and groans. She can be heard snapping at her friends inside the warriors den. In her quiet mood, that is what she is-quiet. Her eyes are scared and she doesn't say anything at all, she just runs from everybody. In her battle mood, which is usually on patrols, She has a defiant glare in her eyes, and she is tensed and ready for battle.
History Goldie was a kittypet who was neglected and underfed, along with her elderly parents, Sairy and Miller. One day, the twoleg's kit, Morgan, carelessly left the door open near the cats. The cats barely made it out. They lived as loners/rogues, until they found OceanClan and decided that the Clan would better support them. They have hunted and fighted their whole lives to prove they left their kittypet roots, and both her parents are in the elder's den now.
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May 26 2012, 04:28 PM
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This is Fluff in a new form <3
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Nice. ^^
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May 27 2012, 01:37 AM
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Spiralfall
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PERSONALITY:
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† Kits
Spiralfall loves kits, she's almost addicted to them. She loves their squeaks of awe when they leave the nursery for the first time, she loves it when they clamber all over her in various games. But most of all, she loves their potential- the potential that will most likely lead them to become warriors of ShadowClan, and their dreams of getting to that position.
† Logic Despite her playful, excited over-personality, Spiralfall enjoys many things- especially a game of hard logic. Typical of ShadowClanners, she's cunning, sly and ambitious- and very good when it comes to solving logic problems. However, she questions things- she knows not all is hard logic, hard fact, and she is willing to accept anything that comes that way.
† Play Despite being a warrior, Spiralfall has the essence of a kit- she loves play of all kind, romping with apprentices, her fellow warriors- even kits. In Gatherings, she is best found talking with other Clans about the Clan's kits. In spite of that, though, she is completely and utterly loyal- she will never turn her back on ShadowClan, on the contrary, she lives for her Clan and would have no qualms about dying for her Clan
Dislikes
† Stuck-up-ness Spiralfall absolutely loathes those warriors who think they are better than everyone else. Who did they think they were? She especially hated those in other Clans who always look down on ShadowClan. In her opinion, ShadowClan is the best Clan of them all. But at least she's gracious enough to keep that to herself. As to the stuck-up-ness in ShadowClan, Spiralfall firmly and valiantly tries to keep that under control. Most of the time, it doesn't work.
† Loners Spiralfall hates loners, kittypets, and rogues. Her goal, her dream, is to finally reestablish the ancient connection between Clan cats and StarClan. Cats with no loyalties, such as loner or rogues, are scorned and sneered at by her. They have no place in the warrior world, they should stay away and keep away. Nothing to her is more important than the loyalty to her Clan. Without loyalty, life is nothing.
† Fools These cats make her tremble with rage. Seriously, if you aren't smart, don't talk. Or do anything, really. Spiralfall holds nothing but scorn and open disgust for those she considers fools and idiots. Her best advise to you is not to do anything stupid. No qualms, nor love is given to those who mess up- especially if that mess-up affects the whole Clan
Weaknesses
† Short-Tempered Spiralfall is loyal, loving, caring and stubborn. And ambitious. And she has a very short temper. Most of the time, at least. She has little to no patience for foolish apprentices, although she understands why they are foolish. Her mentor was very strict with her, teaching her the differences in the times for play and work, and she is determined to pass that down to apprentices.
† Ambitious She keeps this to herself, but her biggest ambition is to unite the Clans under STarClan once again. She is firm in her belief, even though she is quiet about it. Her next ambition is to become deputy, then leader; how great it would be to serve ShadowClan and StarClan this way! StarClan... It actually is painful, at times, to think of the spirit cats, and how unbelief has grasped ShadowClan in it's claws. She often wonders just how she will lead the Clan, the Warrior Clans to StarClan once more. So far, her question has been unanswered.
† Stubborn If you want a stubborn cat, you have one. She is a firm believer that, unless proven otherwise, she is always correct. It's almost inevitable for her to think otherwise. Contrary to what that presents, however, she is very gracious when she is wrong: She has no problem in confessing she is wrong. One downfall, though, is the fact that once she has a firm judgement or opinion in her mind, it is nigh impossible to change it. You'll need evidence that cannot be proven wrong. Thus once more I repeat: stubborn
Strengths
† Loyalty Probally the biggest strength Spiralfall will ever have is the strength of her incredable loyalty. Her life, her spirit and her heart belongs to ShadowClan; no other. None other will claim her. Her loyalty is also to StarClan, and in secret, she vows to restore their glorious reign, much like it was before the Great Journey, when the ancient leaders of the Clans had clear, wondrous visions with StarClan. and leadership was not just a tyranny.
† Understanding No matter who you are, what you are, know matter what you do, what you say, Spiralfall will understand. Drawing from a deep well of compassion deep in her heart, Spiralfall feels innumberable amounts of love, joy, empathy and sympathy. To be honest, it isn't possible for Spiralfall to be cruel. Mean, yes. Commanding, yes. Cruel? No. It goes against what she believes. Many others, if say... a kit from ThunderClan wandered over the border and was trapped by a fox, they would ignore it, or so Spiralfall thinks. This she-cat would rescue the kit, bring her back home and drive the fox out of Clan territory to save her Clan from the menace the fox will bring.
† Bold Oh, indeed, this little kitty is as bold as syou can get. Bold, confident, and proud. This coincides with her stubbornness; how else would she be stubborn if not bold and expressive to share her views? And she needs to be confident that she will not be scorned for her boldness. She is strong and bold enough to speak when one is doing wrong, when one is doing right, to praise. There is no denying confidence, boldness and pride is a part of this brave, courageous warrior.
HISTORY:
Spoiler: click to toggle Spiralfall was born simply, in a litter of two. Her one brother, Smokepaw, took after her mother: a stark, unbeliever in StarClan. Or perhaps, took after Hawkstar. Spiralfall grew up, like all ShadowClan cats, bereft of StarClan and in the soft nursery of ShadowClan.
As a kit, she was worry-free. She played (rough) with Smokepaw, and other littermates, When she and Smokepaw were made apprentices, she was excastic: she could barely stay still as she was rewarded her mentor (Name). However, her brother, newly named Smokepaw. was dissatisified. He disagreed with Clan law. Cats should fend for themselves, he said.
finally, after a moon of training, he decided the Clan life was not for him: The solitary life of a loner was. Leaving in the dead of night, followed by his sister, Smokepaw left. Heart-broken, Spiralfall desperately tried to persuade her brother to stay. She failed. Little did she know, her mother would soon follow, sick almost to death of the smothering attitude of the Clan.
Once more broken, Spiralfall snarled and snapped at looks of pity, and she trained even harder. She proved to the warriors that she can and she will try to prove them all wrong, and in the meantime, she realized her mistakes and corrected them. She learned sympathy and kindness, and she understands what it is like to be looked down upon.
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May 27 2012, 01:39 AM
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Cookie flavoured icecream!
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Alright, both those are getting added up. Both really nice.
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May 27 2012, 01:00 PM
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Cool Bio. ^^
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May 30 2012, 04:12 PM
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Timeskip
 .:Gender:. Tom .:Alliance:. Shadowclan .:Mate/kits/crush:. N/A .:Appearance:. Timeskip is an alluring lilac-gray Tom. He is mostly lilac, but to others it might seem a bit gray. His ears are rather large in size, however, his feirce eyes distract others from them. Golden-green eyes reflect off of the Tom, and a light pinkish nose makes his face perfect. Timeskip has long fur, but his collar fur seems to be longer than the rest. The Warrior's paws are rather dainty, but his tail is long in legth. .:Personality:. Looks aren't everything, he might say to others. Alhough he is rather feirce and handsome, he has a kind and warm heart. He is loving, and always wanted his own kits. This he doesn't tell others, but he is gay. He has always loved Tomcats, and even as a kit he wasn't into Shecats. Feirce eyes decive others, as he isn't all war and hunt. History If sad stories make you cry you shoud read this. Timeskip has no known family, no known mate, and no nown riends. He is a lonely Tom, always being bullied as a child. He was bullied by his clanmates. The wrrior was always interested in learning, whether it be by stories, or just by simple hunting. Quiet and shy, as a child, never being noticed, that's how he feels all day.
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May 30 2012, 04:30 PM
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Awesome! ^^
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May 30 2012, 06:34 PM
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May 30 2012, 07:27 PM
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dawny misses her night </3
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Spoiler: click to toggle Breathfrost -- RiverClan -- Warrior -- nm: Twenty Eight Moons dt: Fifty Six Moons -- She-cat
appearance--
A delicate blanket of white lays upon the she-cats entire body. Not a speck of any other colour covers this beautiful she-cats pelt. Breathfrost has two eyes; as most living things do. Hers are her best feature, two luminescent green eyes that hold every feeling of pain, every happy feeling and every other feeling she has every felt within her two years of life. She has a lithe body, giving her swift movement, having trained in the hunting art for so long as an Apprentice. She does have the strong swimmers legs that is a trait built into most RiverClan cats. Upon her body she carries many reminders of battles, like on her front left paw, she has a scar trailing down her leg, starting at her hamstring and ending just above her paw. Her ear as a tiny, barely noticeable nick within it, and a scar that resides just inches under her throat.
This she-cat has a delicate pink nose upon her face, with medium width whiskers that are a tinge longer then her body, alerting her when she cannot fit through an area as that is the function of whiskers. Her tail is lengthy, but not much longer than any normal warriors. Her paws are somewhat large, making her slightly klutzy at times but they are not always causing her to stumble every ten steps.
personality--
Breathfrost is a strong, determined she-cat. She refuses and form of bullying from others, and being pushed around does not suit her fancy. This strong she-cat fights back, though not with tooth and claw unless it is needed. She is loyal to her Clan, and refuses to make any romantic connections with and other Clan cats. She is quite caring and loyal, hardly ever losing herself within the drama that encircles the Clan at times; but there is frequent times were confusion engulfs her and directly change her from wise to acting as though she is as smart as a newborn kitten. Breathfrost is trustworthy most of the time, unless the secret is one involving the pain of another RiverClanner, or a battle that could have been avoided at all costs.
Breathfrost is a sarcastic she-cat, who holds a strong caring feeling towards kits. However, after losing her mother to her full blooded siblings, she has a fear of having them. In her mind, kits are amazing things that she would love to have; but paranoia of dying and being unable to be the one to raise them has shattered her constant dream. This white she-cat is very intelligent and knows when tooth and claw are wiser then the words of persuasion, as she usually has the ability to tell when a cat is out for the blood that runs within another cats veins.
Breathfrost enjoys spending time with her youngest sister, Goldenpaw but dislikes having to lie to her. Her favourite pass time is practicing her balance as she does frequently, balancing on the edge of RiverClans river. However, she truly dislikes the taste of rat. The scar on her front leg sometimes causes it to go stiff, causing her to weaken on her left side during battle. Like many cats, she dislikes the cold of Leaf-bare, but truly hates how it killed her first Apprentice. She is not one to spend time alone all the time, but has frequent times where being alone is a preference to her. Breathfrost has a one main weakness; she cannot hurt the innocent, be it if they are just an Apprentice doing a bad deed for their mentor and liking it, she cannot hurt them as she always believes the cat does not realize what he or she is doing. The fact that she is a swift runner makes hunting swift creatures easier for the she-cat. Including her strong swimming legs, making swimming much easier for her than it may be for other RiverClanners.
history--
Born to one of great power; Breathfrost is one of the first kits of Cougarstar, the leader of RiverClan. And deceased RiverClan Queen, Onesky.
Her father was a shy kit during his younger days, unlike as she was back when she was a kit. He was a prankster and a good joker by his sixth moon, and always enjoyed the time he got to spend with is mother and father. He, unlike Breathfrost, had a stern, harsh mentor. She had a mentor who was part WindClan, which is why she was trained in hunting so well; earning her swift legs. He later fell in love and had two litters with a she-cat named Onesky and had two litters with her before she died birthing her second litter, and then later had kits with a she-cat named Springfall. Springfall, however, is not one that Breathfrost likes. Now, unlike her mother, she had siblings, where as her mother had not had even one. Onesky had been born into a single kit litter, with parents who loved her more than one could easily describe. Onesky was their object of affection. Unfortunately, Onesky died shortly after Onekit's birth. So, she was given to another Queen; much unlike Breathfrost's birth, where her mother had survived to raise her. Unfortunately, Breathfrost's mother died giving birth to her second litter, Breathfrost's only living full-blooded siblings. The kits in Breathkit's litter were Farkit, Shardkit and Splashpool. Unforunately, Shardkit was killed during a flood a few moons after birth, this not being found out until Cougarstar's nine lives ceremony. Farkit disappeared, and was considered dead; though she is truly alive and working hard to find her true home; RiverClan. Breathfrost also has a sister named Goldenpaw, born into the second litter Onesky along with Fallingpaw and Saberpaw. Her half-siblings, whom she loves but rarely visits due to their mother are Tearkit, Sparrowkit, Meteorkit and Bearkit.
Now, family aside, lets start on this she-cats history. She was born in Leaf-bare two years ago. She was a well raised kit with her two loving parents and always loved to play with her siblings. Over the six moons, she got herself into trouble; but never was it bad enough to lengthen her time as a kit. Breathfrost then became an Apprentice to a strong warrior, one who was half WindClan. He trained her in hunting most, and taught her that fighting was not something that was useful in every situation; creating who she is today. As a kit, she met a kit named Marquekit. His mother was Desolatestar, and Breathkit hated him. They picked on each other and even into Apprenticeship did they hate one another. Shortly after they each turned the age of eight moons, they began to become friends, and just stayed that. Then, they became warriors, and constantly did they care for the Clan. Over time, their friendship grew into romance. But still, neither have admitted that they love one another.
As a kit, Breathkit was tormented when the flood came; unable to find her brother, Shardkit and sister Farkit. She stayed with the others of RiverClan, but hardly ever got over the pain of losing them until she was Apprenticed. Not long after her Apprenticeship, she was in a border patrol that ended up in a fight, causing her to receive the scar along her leg. Over time, she received the nick within her ear, and then during a full blown battle, a cat had tried to brutally kill her; and if he had been inches taller, would have sliced her throat open. That day she killed her first cat, for trying to kill her. She has many scars like most warriors dotting her body, but is still a strong living cat.
After six moons of being a warrior, she was given an Apprentice, and she was proud. She trained him to her best possibility, but suffered during one leaf-bare night where he died; it is unknown how he died, but some believe he froze to death. She later was given another Apprentice, and he grew to become a strong warrior; just as she had wished for her first Apprentice.
When Breathfrost was only eighteen moons old, she fled the Clan in a selfish attempt at keeping the love she thought was true. However, after moons of depression and bearing her first litter to a tom-cat she never truly loved; Breathfrost returned to RiverClan in an attempt to re-join and become a loyal RiverClanner once again. Very few believed her, and few trusted her word that she had changed. Well, they were right.
The white she-cat resided in RiverClan for mere moons before falling in love again. This time it was with a tom her father, she assumed, would have welcome to the family. Twilighthour. The two didn't share any time together. They met and mated; and over time, she fell for him, but he did not fall for her as she had hoped.
Then the separation happened. StormClan split off of RiverClan and caused chaos, and Breathfrost was mixed in. Round and plump, close to kitting, Breathfrost confronted her father of his decisions and was deemed a traitor. She fled RiverClan with her only remaining friends, Rainlegs and Eveningsky. Twilighthour stayed behind, thus ending their relationship.
Just days after arriving in WindClan, Breathfrost bore the kits of Twilighthour. She loved them, but yet again had no relationship with them, for she still harboured the fear of being a terrible mother. Time passed and she managed to grow close to one of her daughters, Foreverpaw, but none of the others.
Twilighthour later visited RiverClan, but not for Breathfrost. He had a goal, a desire and a hatred he had nourished for many moons. He intended to do one thing, and that was to kill Eveningsky. Thankfully, Breathfrost saw him aiming to kill the tom just in time to save the former RiverClan deputies life, and she then, in turn, took Twilighthour's life.
Eventually, Breathfrost told Foreverpaw of who she was. She told her of the pure RiverClan blood that ran through her veins, of her father and what he was. Time passed and she kept the secret to herself until the day she told Foreverpaw, and eventually she also revealed the secret to her dearest friend, Rainlegs, who would later be the mother of her son, Monopaw's grand-kits.
By now, Foreverpaw and her litter mates are now of age to become warriors, and Breathfrost meets Sunfang. A good friend and a tom she believes she loved, but she never did. She desired love from someone; and she got it. She became pregnant yet again, but the kits were not all Sunfangs. Not long after mating with the brown tabby WindClanner, she and Eveningsky began playing and then bam, without realizing it, they mated and Breathfrost later gave birth to six more kits. Her final litter. She survived, but was weak and swore that she would never bear a litter again.
Currently she is residing in WindClan with her kits, friends and life seems at ease. She does not miss the days she lived in RiverClan, especially not after witnessing first hand the mess Bearstar caused during her rein over the Clan.
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May 30 2012, 07:34 PM
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Wow, I like the creative name.
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May 30 2012, 07:37 PM
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Cookie flavoured icecream!
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May 30 2012, 09:18 PM
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This is Fluff in a new form <3
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Cool. ^^
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May 31 2012, 07:33 PM
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Thanks Goldfish.
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