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I wrote this for school, I'm not great at writing but here it is.
Topic Started: Oct 13 2012, 07:24 PM (260 Views)
Chris
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Most people climb to the top,
While others fall into a bottomless abyss,
Surrounded by darkness and pain,
Nothing to gain.
The darkness tends to choke me,
Trying to kill me,
‘Til I breathe my last breath,
With the last heave of my chest,
With my heart beat put to the test,
I will finally rest.

I feel chained down by life,
Only to be calmed by a knife.
I wanna be freed by death,
But I don’t wanna leave the rest.
I cannot always see past the darkness,
I feel restless.

I don’t always see black and white.
I have a life,
I don’t need a knife.
I have friends,
This isn’t a dead end.
I have food,
Which is good.
I have shelter,
It can be better.
I have a future,
I’m not a loser.
I have hope,
And that’s all I need to cope.
I will be here tomorrow,
Hopefully with less sorrow.
One day I can say, “I survived,”
Feeling like I’ve just been revived.
It will feel like I’ve been given a new birth,
Having more self-worth.
I will feel like I can fly,
And I won’t have to say my last good-bye.
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Kelso45
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Gone.
Love <3
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Mr. Music
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Chris, that is absolutely amazing. You need to keep writing, there is talent flowing through those words. Honestly, it is one of most beautiful poems I have read in a long time.
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Chris
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Thanks! It means a lot.
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Kittie

This is a GREAT poem, and a good way to let out your feelings! I used to write all the time and now I look back and think "Why was I so sad and angry?"
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MagicalPandas
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That Is Ahmazing (:
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ELiiNaS
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Duty. Honour. Respect.
amazing! i agree keep writing.(if you want)
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Chris
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I usually don't write, but you people are inspiring me to write. I think I might start writing more often!
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Chris
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I need a title for this poem! Anyone have a good one?
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Jstarr

This is a stellar piece ! As for a title.... Try " Fighting fo Hope" or something along those lines. Great Job!!! <3
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