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| Chris | Oct 13 2012, 07:24 PM Post #1 |
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Most people climb to the top, While others fall into a bottomless abyss, Surrounded by darkness and pain, Nothing to gain. The darkness tends to choke me, Trying to kill me, ‘Til I breathe my last breath, With the last heave of my chest, With my heart beat put to the test, I will finally rest. I feel chained down by life, Only to be calmed by a knife. I wanna be freed by death, But I don’t wanna leave the rest. I cannot always see past the darkness, I feel restless. I don’t always see black and white. I have a life, I don’t need a knife. I have friends, This isn’t a dead end. I have food, Which is good. I have shelter, It can be better. I have a future, I’m not a loser. I have hope, And that’s all I need to cope. I will be here tomorrow, Hopefully with less sorrow. One day I can say, “I survived,” Feeling like I’ve just been revived. It will feel like I’ve been given a new birth, Having more self-worth. I will feel like I can fly, And I won’t have to say my last good-bye. |
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| music is my escape | Oct 14 2012, 11:10 PM Post #11 |
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Wow that is great. i love it. you really do have a talent here. keep up the good work.
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| Alyssa97 | Oct 20 2012, 07:50 PM Post #12 |
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That was fantastic! |
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| sjarvis84 | Oct 20 2012, 07:52 PM Post #13 |
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wow great job you really have a poetic talent!!! keep up the good work!!! |
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