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help me name this please? it was off the top of my head and needs a title; poem
Topic Started: Oct 14 2012, 11:16 PM (29 Views)
music is my escape
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Laying here listning to the thunder roll
body relaxing, mind releasing
sudenly I'm transported
i'm dancing in the rain
letting all of my worry and pain melt and glide off just like the rain
i can breath again
for the first time in a long time, im happy
not a worry in sight
no dark thoughts
just the soothing sound of the deep,smooth,rolling thunder to relax my mind and body.
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Chris
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I like your poem! All I can think for a title is "Release" because it releases feelings.
Edited by Chris, Oct 14 2012, 11:18 PM.
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music is my escape
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Thank you! and i like that i honestly never would have thought of that :)
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