| help me name this please? it was off the top of my head and needs a title; poem | |
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| music is my escape | Oct 14 2012, 11:16 PM Post #1 |
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Laying here listning to the thunder roll body relaxing, mind releasing sudenly I'm transported i'm dancing in the rain letting all of my worry and pain melt and glide off just like the rain i can breath again for the first time in a long time, im happy not a worry in sight no dark thoughts just the soothing sound of the deep,smooth,rolling thunder to relax my mind and body. |
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| Chris | Oct 14 2012, 11:18 PM Post #2 |
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I like your poem! All I can think for a title is "Release" because it releases feelings.
Edited by Chris, Oct 14 2012, 11:18 PM.
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| music is my escape | Oct 14 2012, 11:19 PM Post #3 |
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Thank you! and i like that i honestly never would have thought of that ![]() |
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