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| Timothy Lin - Illegal Drug Trafficking (Resolution) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 3 2014, 04:31 PM (136 Views) | |
| Timothy_Lin | Dec 3 2014, 04:31 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Timothy Lin Committee: Global Security Subject: Illegal Drug Trafficking Proposed By: Taiwan (ROC) The General Assembly: 1) Aware about the fact that the problems in developing countries are crippled 2) by Illegal Drug Trafficking, 3) Recognizing the intervention in many countries, like Myanmar and Vietnam 4) have only done minuscule actions in scale to the size of drug trafficking, 5) Unbeknownst to the fact internal social and economic conflict powers these 6) problems, and struggling to find a sure fire method of quelling drug trafficking, 7) Bearing in mind the United Nations have yet to respond with any sort of action, 8) resorting to A) other countries to help with prevention of drug trafficking, B) the UNDOC, although created by the UN, to try and implement an idea C) countries’ own governments to counteract trafficking, like the DEA in the US 9) Reaffirming the populace about drug problems, managing to bust many transfers of 10) drugs, 11) Guided by developed countries, like the US with the DEA and TSA to combat 12) these drug traffickers, 13) Recognizing those within the UNODC and smaller groups that are trying to 14) create rehabilitation and assistance centers for those in need, 15) Recalling the past problems with Taiwan and heroin use, and how it relates to 16) Taiwan today, 17) Supports the idea that change is being made, and Taiwan is slowly becoming 18) a better country against drug trafficking, 19) Approves of the start of internal outlook of Taiwan’s drug issues, 20) Encourages other developing countries stricken with conflict to reflect back on 21) drug trafficking within their country, 22) Requests aid from the UN and UNDOC to begin a plan to be directly involved 23) within developing countries, alongside outlying islands of countries, 23) Calls upon UNDOC to truly get their own research than rely on others, 24) Urging other countries within the UN (US, EU, etc.) to prepare aid in case of 25) international drug trade, and prepare assistance and rehab, 26) Expresses the hope that illegal drug trade will be prevented, and that legal 27) attempts for drugs will be controlled properly. |
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| Deven_Bishnu | Dec 10 2014, 07:45 PM Post #2 |
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Revise Operative clauses (lines 17-27 in your case) begin with an underlined verb rather than an italicized one. Additionally, in 15-19, you are referring specifically to Taiwan - this resolution is (hopefully) going to be passed by the United Nations, meaning that nations are agreeing to help with any action taken. Don't be afraid to get the Security Council involved in helping with Taiwan's issues directly, or just leave Taiwan out of it altogether. Taiwan is proposing the resolution, but that doesn't mean it has to relate to Taiwan directly. In lines 22-23 you requested aid from the UN to begin developing a plan - well, congrats, you ARE the U.N. I would advise you to either input a plan in your resolution, or create a committee to deal with the issue/instruct a pre-existing committee (as opposed to the whole U.N.) to deal with it. Finally, you begin line 5 with 'unbeknownst' - that means you are UNAWARE that social and economic conflict powers those problems. I would advise choosing a better word there. Aside from that, fantastic resolution! I can tell you put a lot of effort into this one, and I'd love to see it pass. |
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| Timothy_Lin | Dec 14 2014, 10:33 AM Post #3 |
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Updated Resolution, please look at the spots where you clarified. Please tell me if there are any more revisions to be made. Thanks! Name: Timothy Lin Committee: Global Security Subject: Illegal Drug Trafficking Proposed By: Taiwan (ROC) The General Assembly: 1) Aware about the fact that the problems in developing countries are crippled 2) by Illegal Drug Trafficking, 3) Recognizing the intervention in many countries, like Myanmar and Vietnam 4) have only done miniscule actions in scale to the size of drug trafficking, 5)Alarmed by the fact internal social and economic conflict fuel these 6) problems, and struggling to find a sure fire method of quelling drug trafficking, 7) Bearing in mind the United Nations have yet to respond with any sort of action, 8) resorting to A) other countries to help with prevention of drug trafficking, B) the UNODC, although created by the UN, to try and implement an idea C) countries’ own governments to counteract trafficking, like the DEA in the US 9) Reaffirming the populace about drug problems, arresting many drug rings and mafia 10) gangs, 11) Guided by developed countries, like the US with the DEA and TSA to combat 12) these drug traffickers, 13) Recognizing those within the UNODC and smaller groups that are trying to 14) create rehabilitation and assistance centers for those in need, 15) Recalling the past problems with International drug abuse, and how rehabilitation 16) centers and drug enforcement operates today, 17) Supports the idea that change is being made, and how countries and private 18)sector groups are beginning to take notice of drug abuse, 19) Approves of the start of internal investigation of multiple countries struggling with 20)drug problems, 21) Encourages other developing countries stricken with conflict to reflect back on 22) drug trafficking within their country, 23) Requests either the Security Council or the UNDOC to be directly involved 24) within developing countries, alongside outlying islands of countries to counteract 25) the problems with illegal drug trade, 26) Urging other countries within the UN (US, EU, etc.) to prepare aid in case of 27) international drug trade, and prepare assistance and rehab, 28) Expresses the hope that illegal drug trade will be prevented, and that legal 29) attempts for drugs will be controlled properly. |
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| Deven_Bishnu | Dec 14 2014, 01:59 PM Post #4 |
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Pass |
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| Junha_Park | Mar 26 2015, 01:52 PM Post #5 |
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submitted |
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