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Memoirs Of The Condemned; My own writing section.
Topic Started: January 17, 2014, 9:23 pm (953 Views)
Yoshie Shinozaki
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The First Victim
Okay this is where I'll be putting any thing of my own creation. (Fic writings, poems etc).
I guess I'll start with my(somewhat flawed) take on how Satoshi disappeared in chapter 3.
(By the way, writing revolves solely around the CoPa universe).

Also everything that I write will be in a first person view of a character I came up with.(Shikeishu).
(I'll explain his backstory later).

So without further adieu... Here go's nothing.

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Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, July 31, 2015, 8:39 am.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Okay, this one by the way is the actual first fic that I wrote.
I'm guessing there's some confusion for "what's my characters relation to Sachiko".
Well here's the explanation.
(Writers note: I do not use proper Japanese honorifics).

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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Alright, here's another short one.
This time I'm trying out writing in third person view.(I think I might keep this writing style... Easier to depict and less narcissist).
This one takes place after the ghost children are appeased and the nexus breaks down.
Heads up, this one is cannon to the Blood Covered story.

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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Okay, here's another one.
This one's actually an old one.
Once again it's gonna be in third person view because I like this writing format better.
I burrowed some elements from the BoS manga but the end result is completely different.
And if you're wondering what inspired my character?
... Well do you remember that eyeball at the beginning of the game?
Shikeishu is basically the camera and my fics are commentary that I came up with after watching the game and reading the manga.

So there's that and here we go.

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Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, February 11, 2014, 8:57 am.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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For today, I'm not gonna post a feeble fan fiction.
Instead, I'm gonna post my personal playlist, I came up with when I first watched the gameplay.
Due to the playthrough I watched in June, the original soundtrack was absent from the game.
To this day, I still don't know what the original songs sound like.
So I thought up a playlist that depicts each scene at the best of my memory.

To get this out of the way, I think Corpse Party is one of the most metal games i've ever seen.
The reason why I'm not posting this on the Music Thread is because of two things.

1. It would take six months straight of just posting on the Music Thread.
2. I'm not gonna leave a YouTube link on each track.

Since this is gonna take up too much space, I'm gonna leave the playlist under a spoiler tag.
So without further adieu, here's Yoshie's Playlist.

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I changed a few things and added some songs.
Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, February 9, 2014, 1:34 am.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Getting back on track with some writing I've done a few months ago.
For the actual chapters,they're going to remain in first person view as opposed to the side things.
The reason why I write these in first person view is because its supposed to be memories.(but I'm sure you already knew this).
So anyway, here's chapter two.

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Okay, now that that's out of the way.
Criticize or whatever.(it's not gonna stop me from writing).
Thanks for reading.(even though fic writing isn't my strong suit).
Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, February 11, 2014, 8:59 am.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Taking a shot in the dark with this one.
I've decided to remain in third person view.
But no need for explanation, I'll continue.

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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Alright, since I think the last one ended on a low note.
I'm adding an extension to it.
This one takes place during the same night.

So here you go.

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Writer's notes.
I wrote this down today.
Once again, do whatever you will with this.
Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, March 10, 2014, 2:53 pm.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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Okay, here's another chapter for you.
This one takes place the very next day from the last one and I've gotta say.
I didn't think I could write like this.
I hope you guys enjoy it.
Writer's note.
Every other characters excluding the main protagonist and Sachi are nameless.
(Mainly due to me not being creative enough to come up with names for the extras).
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If anyone is wondering if I plan my stories out, I do not.
Everything is improvised... Honestly, I actually like this one.
Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, March 13, 2014, 3:57 pm.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Okay, I wrote a short one and this time.
This does not include my custom character but instead.
This one's protagonist is none other than Yoshie Shinozaki.
Her story takes place three months before she died.

So without further adieu...

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Alright, I'm gonna try to continue this story for now.
And honestly, I've been wanting to write something about Yoshie and Sachiko that wasn't either disturbing or depressing.
So I hope you enjoyed this and I'm gonna try to write the second part to be longer.
Edited by Yoshie Shinozaki, March 14, 2014, 6:16 pm.
"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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