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Trapped in anime; アニメの中に閉じ込め Anime no naka ni tojikome
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Topic Started: May 15, 2014, 6:30 pm (3,892 Views)
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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May 31, 2014, 1:36 pm
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The First Victim
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Okay, sorry I'm late for this but once again, this was an awesome chapter. (Germany was a hard ass... Kinda reminds me of my uncle) I like how the Hetalia dimension borders the school. (So each world is set up in a nexus?, if so, that's really cool) Once again, sorry I'm late and I can't wait 'till the next chapter.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Shigitou burikaa
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May 31, 2014, 4:49 pm
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- Yoshie Shinozaki
- May 31, 2014, 1:36 pm
Okay, sorry I'm late for this but once again, this was an awesome chapter. (Germany was a hard ass... Kinda reminds me of my uncle) I like how the Hetalia dimension borders the school. (So each world is set up in a nexus?, if so, that's really cool) Once again, sorry I'm late and I can't wait 'till the next chapter. Plz tell me yoshie, what is a nexus? I can't really find a definition or anything on google.
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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May 31, 2014, 5:08 pm
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Okay, a nexus is a series of connections, linking within a circuit of energy. (In this case, connections between a series of dimensions) Since in your story, the only thing holding Andrew back from entering the school was a generator. My first assumption was "A Nexus".
All right, I hope I was some help to you. (I got the idea from the spirits that the Kisaragi students and Ms Yui encountered, the ghosts explains to them what the nexus is comprised of)
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Shigitou burikaa
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May 31, 2014, 9:40 pm
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Cool, this helps a lot.
So it basically is a nexus 'your right', thanks for pointing that out.
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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Shigitou burikaa
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June 2, 2014, 8:49 am
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Ok, so I have got to say that chapter two is very, very hard to put in words. But as I did in chapter one, I will try my hardest
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
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Shigitou burikaa
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June 2, 2014, 10:31 am
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I will give you chapter two right now... Chapter 2: Danganronpa 「ダンガンロンパ」
Chapter 2 I walked up to the Giant school-like building, it looked to me as a nice, clean school. ~totally nothing wrong with it I suppose. I walked to the door and pulled it wide open, to see a small corridor, then an open room at the end of it. There was no light nor a sound was heard in this place, and the door slammed shut from behind me. I walked to the end of the corridor and into the open room, however I wish I just turned back, because I saw red eyes approaching me. "Uh! What the heck are you, get away from me! Ah" It felt like the eyes belonged to a man, and it sounded like he was carrying something heavy. I ran away from the man and I found myself in the cafeteria, with a light switch so that I can finally see. I turned on the light switch with deep regret, afterwards. When I turned on the lights I was disgusted by the sight of things, blood, guts and bodies everywhere. It was a true corpse party, would this place then be... I figured until a tv attached to the wall turned on. "Hello, Andrew, it's me tony. I want you to hurry up and get to the principle's office, I'll explain everything when you get there" tony said then the tv turned to static "Wait, so if tony is in this dimension, wouldn't that mean that this is Danganronpa? I watched the anime before and I never seen anything like this happen"
I was shocked as I recognized some of the characters that died, and the strange thing is, their deaths looked like they were from a deadly blow from a blunt object. I went around looking for some-sort of item to take along with me, and there was nothing. I started to walk out of the cafeteria, when I started to hear panting noises from behind and something metallic scrapping the hard floor, I turned around to one of the most hideous looking creature I ever seen, but almost to the looks of a zombie. It was a man with black hair, a brown jacket, and a blood-stained sledgehammer and he slowly approached me. "Ah, get away!" I tried to tell him "Eeerrraaaaaaaoooooooooo" For whatever the reason was, the man let out this loud groan. Though the man still approached me. I turned back around and found some stairs, so I hurried up and went up them. When I reached the top, I saw the principle's office, but I forced the door open and it never opened. I tried to knock for tony, but there was no answer. Until I heard a voice from inside. "Come in" I heard the door unlock, but I heard the man as well, this time, very close to me, I turned around and saw the man raise his hammer, to strike me in the head. When he swung the hammer at me, I grabbed the hammer's handle and forced it away from me, the man did the opposite and pushed down on the hammer to finish me, until *crack* the hammer broke The man's hammer was broke and unable to be used, so the man walked away and faded into the distance. I was so happy that it was over and now I opened the door finally and saw tony sitting down with his chair turned to me. "Hey Andrew, what's going on?" Tony asked "Nothing, but I have one question for you, do you know what's going on here?" I asked "Sadly no, but I do know that we are in one giant nexus, and the others are here too" he said "Oh, so what happened?" I asked "Well, when we all did the charm, the charm was for corpse party only, so when It was ripped, it consumed too much energy and exploded, sending everyone into a dimension of their own. So when everyone cosplayed as different figures of anime and Kyle didn't, Kyle is the only one who was transported to the corpse part dimension." He explained "So, Kyle is stuck in corpse party and everyone is stuck in their own world?" I asked "Yes, so we now have to go and see Sierra, do you have that charm with you?" He said "Yes" I concluded "Good, that charm will protect you from the evil spirits wandering each dimension. It will also allow you to progress further into each dimension. Now then, let's leave" he said as we walked all the way back to the entrance, and to the next dimension
-Chapter 2 end
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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Shigitou burikaa
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June 2, 2014, 11:49 am
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I feel like making chapter three now. But either way, I want to thank all of you guys for sticking around and reading my story, you actually got me motivated in making the whole story to the end. Thank you so much and as a reward, I will give you chapter three and I'll do whatever it takes to make you guys happy
~thank you.
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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Cain Marder
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June 2, 2014, 12:57 pm
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So...
Spoiler: click to toggle Yoshikazu is joining the party too, I like it, you can bet that I will stick around for chapter 3. 
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 " ... You welcome, I love you ... Ima gonna die now... Oh shit, here they come, I'm fuckin' dead, this car has no traction... NOO!! Don't kill me!! Anything but this! WHY I'M MAKIN' DONUTS?!?!"
" This keer !!!"
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Shigitou burikaa
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June 2, 2014, 1:00 pm
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So, as promised.. Chapter 3: Black Butler 「黒執事」
chapter 3: We entered the next dimension, and what we saw was a big mansion that looked like it was built for the richest person in the world. The stairs even looked like marble. Me and tony walked up to the entrance but just as we went to grab the door knob, the door flew open, revealing Sierra. "Andrew, tony, welcome. Come in and sit at the dinner table for a meeting. Sierra quickly escorted us to the table so that we can talk, then the door bell rang. *ding-dong* "Eh? Who could that be?" I asked "Hmm, I don't know, you stay here, I'll go and look" she said Sierra went down to the door and opened it, to reveal a small, little girl with a long sleeve turtle neck sweater, underneath a red dungaree dress. Her hair was brown and her fringes were held to the side with clips. "Hello ma'am, could I stay here for the day, my parents are missing and I have no home" the little girl said "Hmm, sure ( I don't know about this girl, I will need to keep a close eye on her)" Sierra escorted the girl into the mansion and she sat right beside me "Hey, what's your name, little girl?" I asked "Tsuji tokiko" the girl answered "Tokiko, hmm, I heard of that name before, say do you know a girl by the name of 'sachiko'?" Tony asked "Sa-chi-ko?.... Never in my life" tsuji answered "Ok then, just asking" tony concluded "So, Sierra, do you know what's going on around here" "Yes, these dimensions are keeping us from meeting and the only way to cross these dimensions, is with the sachiko charm, which you have, Andrew. The reason for this is because the generator in the middle of each dimension is linked to corpse party, so the only way to get back to the real world is by getting sachiko to rest in peace, then destroying the generator." Sierra explained "That seems easy" I said "I don't think it is" tsuji said "Hmm, I think you should just jump out of that disguise, tokiko. I know who you are." Sierra said "Wh..what are you.. Talking about?..." Tsuji stuttered. "You are one of the spirits from tenjin, with the upper jawline removed" Sierra said as she seemed to put tokiko under a shroud of despair. "NO.. I AM NOT THAT ANYMORE, I am a nice, refreshed, LITTLE GIRL!!" Tsuji said as tears fell down from her eyes. "Sierra relax, maybe she-" tony said but was interrupted "NO, I will prove to you all that she is in fact, Dead" Sierra said then got up and grabbed tokiko by the neck and against the wall Now Sierra started to choke the poor girl to near death. "So, do you feel this?" Sierra said "*choke* *gag*" "Sierra! Stop right now!" I said Sierra ignored what I said and pulled tokiko, then pushed her with a lot of force, against the wall. And that is where, shit happened. Apparently, there were knives, hanging on a rack on the wall, thus, all the knives went crashing down on tokiko's scalp, shoulders, and even in her sweater, so the knives sliced up her back. Sierra never intended of this and just realized what she had done. The guts, blood and even her eyes, were now all over the place. Tsuji tokiko, died a very gruesome death "Uhm, Sierra are yo-" I said but was interrupted "Let's leave this dimension and meet up with Jessica" Sierra said then walked out the door followed by me and tony R.I.P. Tsuji Tokiko
-Chapter 3 end
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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Shigitou burikaa
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June 2, 2014, 1:01 pm
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- sniperskaya
- June 2, 2014, 12:57 pm
So... Spoiler: click to toggle Yoshikazu is joining the party too, I like it, you can bet that I will stick around for chapter 3.  *face-palm* I read this comment after making the story.
I'm sorry *sniff*
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ste teraz mojej obete. Vitajte v mojom herňa, zvieratko. Ja som teraz mučiť vás. . ~ポケウォーズ9000™ i am servent to no one.
I'm married to nana!
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