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Angelas drawings and fanfictions
Topic Started: August 29, 2014, 12:08 pm (1,538 Views)
Angela
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Hey! :3
I wanted to draw and write something for Corpse Party. Critism and Feedback is desired! :D

First Picture about my FF Idea:
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That´s my first try with Light-Effects and Colorize, so yeah! :3
Uncolorized Version:
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My FF Idea:

It is based on Wrong END ★5 in Chapter 2 in Blood Covered Repeated Fear.
So, Yoshiki is shocked, about what he did. Ayumi´s Body is empty, just the bones are in her body left. Yoshiki doesn´t want to "lose" her and became crazy. He wanted to stuff Ayumi out, to carry her with him. He is filling her with something (I thought about Dirt, but that´s not really a good Idea, anyways) and carries her on his back. Satoshi, Naomi and Yuka made it to break the spaces and are meting the crazy Yoshiki, who is a bit uncertain, if he should be happy or not. Satoshi and the Others are thinking, that Ayumi is sleeping, because Yoshiki has found a Sewing kit and has sew up every wound Ayumi had. Eventually Satoshi found it out and he found it disgusting. He didn´t want to accept the fact, that his friend has eaten his Crush, so he wanted to speak with Yoshiki, but he tried to kill Satoshi. The others could help Satoshi and knew, they had to do something with Yoshiki. In the End, Yoshiki fell with Ayumi in a hole and hurt his back. The Others couldn´t help, they didn´t want him to die, even if he was crazy and ate his Love, but he was their friend. Yoshiki lie Ayumi next to him and spoke to her, how much he regrets the things, he has done, but it was to late. Together, with his Love, Yoshiki died. Satoshi and the Others made it out of the HH, but they were hurt about the lost of their Friends. The other people forgot Ayumi, Yoshiki and the Others. now, they had to carry a bigger burden, then they had before.Live was harder than thei imaginated. (or so.)

What do you think? I nedd a better Ending, yeah. Ideas? Comments? Critism? Feedback? :3

I´m always excited about answers. ^^
More to come! :D

Love, Angela.
Edited by Angela, August 29, 2014, 12:16 pm.
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Cain Marder
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Is good, I comparation to my tentatives of colouring the drawings on PC (biggest fails on my life, I really need to take some lessons about how to colour them on PC...)
Just wanted to ask, but, from when you started to draw?
I started from 5th grad, so I have some knowledge about drawing... (I am just making it, not trying to be misunderstood as being mean or something..)
But again, in comparison with my coloured attempt... yeah, they're kinda plate too, but this from experience...
You practice more, you get better, this is how it works :)
(You should see my drawings from back then, you'll laugh at how bad I was at this :D )
Edited by Cain Marder, August 29, 2014, 12:24 pm.
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L3Z4
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Second! Hehe ^^
I prefer the uncolored version because... well, the light effect is really annoying (no offense) muahahaha ;)
However, I truly like Ayumi (fits well with you Fanfic idea). Keep working, they're beautiful! (๑>◡<๑)
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Angela
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Well, now i am in the 6th Grade, after the summer holidays (in 2 weeks), i´m in the 7th Grade.
I started drawing in the 4th Grade, so yeah, i´m not so good :3
And it´s the first time i ever drawed the Corpse Party Characters. ^^ (my Hand does really hurt, damn it)
I like both Versions ^^
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Cain Marder
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Aha, that good, it took me 2 years too make the characters that I was drawing to look like actual humans and not like something that you hit with your car so you're in the good way :)
How does it makes that the uncolored version seems to look better, probably just me...
Keep up the good stuff :D
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Shigitou burikaa
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give me a reason to care once more. new mod for the grt. -in sachiko I trust-

Awesome. Great work on the coloring.
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CorpseCamera
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Not bad. But I humbly suggest getting the basics down pat before messing around with camera effects. Also if youd like feel free to check out My OC for My Fatal Frame Crossover Game Concept. :grin:
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Angela
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I just wanted to ask: What do you think about my Idea for my Fanfiction? :D Should i write a whole Fanfic or not? What do you think? :3
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CorpseCamera
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If you like the idea and actually want to, go for it!
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Cain Marder
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I like the idea, I want to see the fanfic, feel free to write it :)
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" ... You welcome, I love you ... Ima gonna die now... Oh shit, here they come, I'm fuckin' dead, this car has no traction... NOO!! Don't kill me!! Anything but this! WHY I'M MAKIN' DONUTS?!?!"

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